

|  Hi AiEnma09, I want to say  how impressed I am that you are writing so well in english, which I think is a hard language to get. I am Canadian and have studied other languages. I know how hard it is to write in another language--some are much easier than english. You have a nice style and expressive emotion.  I amproud of your  openess and efforts to "fix" grammar errors to improve your craft.  It was my honour to review your work. Write on! |