

| This is a horror flash fiction that I am writing for a contest.  I want to make this the best flash fiction that I possibly can, so any and all suggestions are welcome for making it better.  The minimum allowed words is 500 with a maximum of 1,050 words.  It is currently at 500 words, so please keep this in mind when reviewing.  I appreciate any and all help with this story.  It is due no later than February 1st.  Thank you! 
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