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Silly song >>> sillier dark lyrics
 
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Dazy Hell Open in new Window. (18+)
A dark reworking of the well known tune Daisy Bell (1892)
#2253195 by Kåre เลียม Enga Author IconMail Icon

Short epistle, memoir
 
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Dental work [#25 José Enrique] Open in new Window. (13+)
You could pull my teeth but I'd never tell you how painful life was the year I met you.
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10 line poem
 
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Descent Open in new Window. (ASR)
before the coming of eternity or winter's blast whichever freezes my bones at last
#2336305 by Kåre เลียม Enga Author IconMail Icon

Not Mr. Ed! Flash, funny?
 
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Ed, just Ed [118] (293words) Open in new Window. (18+)
Flash fiction less than 300 words. Prompt: This is the last straw
#2193994 by Kåre เลียม Enga Author IconMail Icon

7 line poem
 
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Either way Open in new Window. (13+)
40 word poem. Life or Death... either way is fine.
#2340661 by Kåre เลียม Enga Author IconMail Icon


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#1565040 by Annette Author IconMail Icon
Five more fish to fry for Friday:

Sad flash, may trigger
 
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Bluegill [177.99] (323 words) Open in new Window. (18+)
A fishing trip to the lake. Revised from 299 words; prompts: shell, hand, window, Dad.
#2224702 by Kåre เลียม Enga Author IconMail Icon

Warning about moving to Costa Rica
 
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Caveat emptor [#37 Chris] Open in new Window. (13+)
You pray for the rains to drown the heat and the dust that surround you. You've payed...
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Flash, detective, comedy?
 
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Chihuahua Open in new Window. (13+)
Three missing — All three had tracking devices — No trace of their existence —
#2192090 by Kåre เลียม Enga Author IconMail Icon

Room 969, erotica, XGC, be warned
 
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Corkscrew, Teton and Pike [264] (~649w) Open in new Window. (XGC)
A honeymoon suite on Halloween?
#2236040 by Kåre เลียม Enga Author IconMail Icon

Sad flash
 
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Cross-stitch [110] (300words) Open in new Window. (18+)
Flash fiction under 300 words. Prompt: stop lying to me
#2193357 by Kåre เลียม Enga Author IconMail Icon


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Did you say Fish Fry Friday? Yum!!
Fivesixer Author Icon - IYKYK ... and you of all people would know. It's one of the things I miss about where we grew up. These need an edit but I'm resisting that urge. I'd rather have more victims readers enter my lair and leave an opinion. I have over 1,000 items! At least in June they can earn extra credit for their reviews of what I write. It's working by the way. I'm only posting the lonely (items with only 1 review = someone liked them). I may have to go looking for neglected works with no reviews (next year?) as I'm perusing my old blogs for writings that have barely seen the light of day. 200 new items will be just a start. Goal: 1.500 by January (now at 1.285 items).
Five more to read and review for my anniversary month:

Flash, dementia, isolation, sad:
 
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All the roads are closed [296] 239 words Open in new Window. (13+)
... as his son makes three bologna sandwiches: two for his old man, one for himself.
#2239464 by Kåre เลียม Enga Author IconMail Icon

Flash, community meal
 
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An Evening with Pretty Boy (310 w) [198] Open in new Window. (18+)
<500 words: candle, ribbon, clock. COOKOUT taboo words: food barbecue grill gathering b***
#2230436 by Kåre เลียม Enga Author IconMail Icon

Poem, me-me-me.
 
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Are you so__one without me? Open in new Window. (ASR)
Based on what someone said they saw on a tee shirt: "Without me you are aweso"
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Flash, Cat, realism.
 
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As cute as a button Open in new Window. (18+)
He cased out a spot where he wouldn't be seen. He was hungry.
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Flash, vampire?
 
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Ascent of Seth [177.55] (285 words) Open in new Window. (18+)
<300 word flash fiction. Prompts: bright, water, slow
#2220420 by Kåre เลียม Enga Author IconMail Icon


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I just reviewed Ascent of Seth. Great piece! This is such a good idea, posting items you would like more reviews on. Happy 20th Anniversary Month! *Smile*
I have over 100 items with only one review. I would say that they are ripe for another bite!

a bit vampirish...
 A billow of grandmothers Open in new Window. (13+)
João writes in his journal and writes a postcard to his mother
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a poem not afraid of death or reviews...
 
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A doe's conversation with ... (death) Open in new Window. (13+)
I will not dread the moment when I'll be fed to others, like I fed myself,
#1539484 by Kåre เลียม Enga Author IconMail Icon

a sad lament...
 
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A new doll [106] (299words) Open in new Window. (18+)
Flash fiction less than 300 words. Prompt: fire, glass, horn
#2193073 by Kåre เลียม Enga Author IconMail Icon

a comedy sponsored by Nancy Drew Nanette...
 
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A mystery it ain't [271 words] Open in new Window. (13+)
300 word flash fiction. Prompt: "I can't read this"
#2215379 by Kåre เลียม Enga Author IconMail Icon

a trauma... may trigger...
 
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Across his knee [85] (268 words) Open in new Window. (18+)
<300 words. Prompt: nail, belt, knee
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#1565040 by Annette Author IconMail Icon

It's my anniversary month. *Bigsmile*
I feel bad... I failed to enter at least 4 contests this month. Today I tried to catch up and even wrote 3 new pieces.

These were my contest entries this month:

 
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Frayed Open in new Window. (E)
The Sky's hem unravels. First the golden thread, then the scarlet, leaving only ... puce.
#2340797 by Kåre เลียม Enga Author IconMail Icon

 
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King of Hearts Open in new Window. (13+)
Based on the song Desperado. Based on a card reading. Still waiting...
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String of pearls Open in new Window. (E)
Clutch them Minnie! Based on a real event when a blind friend helped me up the icy steps.
#2341290 by Kåre เลียม Enga Author IconMail Icon

 
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Memorial Day in August Open in new Window. (ASR)
Inspired by the War Memorial in the rose gardens at Brooke Street and Mount in Missoula.
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Work harder? Open in new Window. (18+)
14 angry lines ... not a sonnet.
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Honorable mention... small town art show Open in new Window. (13+)
...in the glow of sunset, our shadows entwined across the lawn, reaching past summer...
#2339747 by Kåre เลียม Enga Author IconMail Icon

 
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Climbing sweet briar  Open in new Window. (18+)
Rosamunde a.k.a. Sleeping Beauty goes sleep walking in this twisted mish-mashed tale.
#2242425 by Kåre เลียม Enga Author IconMail Icon

May Thirteenth Open in new Window. (18+)
93 short poems/prose written May 13, 2005 and being revised.
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Looking for a Lightbulb Open in new Window. (13+)
Are we looking for forgiveness, healing, riches or enlightenment?
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Gorilla Feet Open in new Window. (18+)
O man with big gorilla feet, an orchid behind each ear!
#2340431 by Kåre เลียม Enga Author IconMail Icon


With old items there's always the risk that they've been entered before somewhere (as entries if not as items). Where? After 20 years here... I dunno *Shock*
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AmyJo-Boy is it getting hot! Author Icon - I try to prepare; however, we all know about plans!
That many seems like a success even if a few contests didn't get the privilege of getting an entry from you.
Wordsmitty ✍️ Author Icon - I created a crossword but couldn't get it to save the format. Tried numerous times. I had an idea for the sitewide $$$$ contest but not the inspiration to make it under 18+; it wanted to be GC. One of these already won a ribbon. The other ribbon was given by a friend years ago. Tomorrow I'll make a new list but my priorities may shift in June.
Someone needs to read this...

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To Feel The Sun Open in new Window. (13+)
All things touched by the sun must one day turn to ash.
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Gotta say, didn't see that ending coming.
Beautiful story.
Thank you so much for the thoughtful highlight! *Smile*
New post in "TABOO forum: sexOpen in new Window. [GC]:

"Do you know anyone who isn't XX or XY?"  Open in new Window.

Does knowing someone make a difference?
Sssooo... I'm at 888 Community Recognitions. 8 is a lucky number among the Chinese, so I'm happy for a moment. I write better when In depressed...

And there’s your signature
and a bright red ribbon!
No mention of me.


And the bright red ribbon from Shadows & Light was veddy nice.

It doesn't have a review yet though:

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Honorable mention... small town art show Open in new Window. (13+)
...in the glow of sunset, our shadows entwined across the lawn, reaching past summer...
#2339747 by Kåre เลียม Enga Author IconMail Icon
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Reviews can be hard for people (those wwo take the site fairly "seriously," otherwise a review can be a small, kindly note *Smile* ) because they might feel they have nothing "review-y" (critical, analytical, etc) to say about it, especially a poem... I can tell you this one captures a lot of feeling in simple words and images.
Oh... a comment is fine, Amethyst Angel 💐. I personally do not like reviewing and prefer commenting.

This poem though was feeling a bit lonely.
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JJ wrote this song with others. Johannes Pietsch (born 29 April 2001), known by his stage name JJ, is an Austrian singer-songwriter. He represented Austria in the Eurovision Song Contest 2025, winning with the song "Wasted Love", today! May 17, 2025. Pietsch was born in Vienna to an Austrian IT specialist and a Filipino cook, and he grew up in Dubai, where he was introduced to both pop through karaoke parties with his family and opera through his father. Both have influenced his current pop-opera style. In 2016, the family returned to Austria. He speaks German, Tagalog, English and French. He is a counter-tenor soprano.

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🌖 HuntersMoon, Anni Pon -- He hit C#6. If sopranoes work on scales they may be able to hit it... eventually.
Beautifully and dramatically illustrated with music video paired by a one-of-a-kind voice. Deserves way more than Eurovision with pipes made to highlight a lacking scene to attune its visions across wan audience faces. To hear live production like that would be an altering soul experience.

*Cool*
Kåre เลียม Enga Author Icon - Mariah would be jealous with notes that could beautifully hold its lyrics
I'm going with Giambattista (1668-1744) Vico's definition of common sense: "judgment without reflection, shared by an entire class, an entire people, an entire nation, or the entire human race".

I'm not great with "common sense" as I question reality and have always felt I was an outsider.

Do you have common sense?


In my "Blogville Open in new Window. forum entry: "Common Sense?"  Open in new Window.
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Brian K Compton Author Icon - When one ceases to observe detachedly, one becomes a participant. As a participant, one inevitably changes the scene.
Kit Author Icon - No way of thinking, however ancient and trusted, should go unquestioned.
Humble Poet PNG and less Author Icon - Now, I'm starting to ask myself whether I've spent my life as a rock or an idiot. I'm not sure it matters, so long as I've not misled anyone by my idiocy or hurt anyone by my hardness.

"Lord, be merciful to me, a fool."
I'm officially on semi-hiatus.

I'll continue to post in my blog (but my goal is to write more in my hand-written journal).
I'll continue to write poems and post them here.
I plan to make more items from entries. I have plenty of space to do so.
I hope to enter contests on a whim. Too stressful otherwise.

I will decrease visiting forums.
I will decrease my presence on the newsfeed.
I will decrease my blog-reading.
I will spend more time IRL with tangible people than online.

Follow me on my blog:

 
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ในสวนของเลียม Open in new Window. (13+)
In Liam's Garden, a personal journal
#2338942 by Kåre เลียม Enga Author IconMail Icon

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*Heart* I've added your Blog to my Member Blog Links, which I've recently started updating. *Smile*

https://www.writing.com/main/profile/blog/enga
Jellyfish Author Icon - I won't be totally gone, just not addicted to being here.
Kåre เลียม Enga Author Icon - I'm glad to hear that you aren't disappearing completely. We must all do what is best for ourselves, but I would still miss you, as I miss all good things when they go.
I'm trying to keep track of contests. I know I'm missing a few.

 
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Conquest ... to keep track of contests Open in new Window. (ASR)
A place to keep track of in progress works and up-coming deadlines as well as any awards.
#2233119 by Kåre เลียม Enga Author IconMail Icon

Does anyone know what the Community Challenge (the big one) will be this month? Not all contests are posted on the newsfeed and it's difficult to keep up. Also, I'm trying to reduce my time on-line and will go on semi-hiatus very soon to reset my focus on life.
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"Journey Through Genres: Official ContestOpen in new Window. is running this month and the genre is detective.

I do my best to update "Invalid ItemOpen in new Window. every month. If I know about any contests that are going to be opening in upcoming months I list them as well.
I can't believe I didn't link my own forum correctly *Facepalm* It should be "Contest CluesOpen in new Window.
🐕GeminiGem🎁 Author Icon - For May it's actually
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What a Character! : Official WDC Contest Open in new Window. (E)
Create a memorable character using the given prompt for huge prizes!
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I found this chapter/flash in my blog from 2022 and finally made it an item (I would've used a picture of a shoe if I could've found one).

 
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He must've left his leg somewhere else  Open in new Window. (13+)
Two "detectives" in Tokyo go looking for ... something. A dialogue.
#2339607 by Kåre เลียม Enga Author IconMail Icon


It reminded me of Cubby's contest. By the way... it's spring!

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Chapter One Open in new Window. (18+)
Write the first chapter of a book, inspired by the prompt.
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I googled The Man With One Red Shoe (Hanks movie), lots of images. I can even make one with AI. I draw. I can take a pic of any of my shoes…size 15, maybe put cat in one.

I’m loopy. *Crazy*

Late.

Did I butt dial newsfeed?
Brian K Compton Author Icon - That red shoe would fit! Sounds like quirky American comedy.
Kare great dialogue 😁!😸
Seen on bookface:

"I just finished writing a book on penguins.
It probably would've been easier to write it on paper."

Immediately thought of S 🤦
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I bet that was much easier than writing a book on alligators.
Outside of a dog, a book is a man's best friend. Inside of a dog, it's too dark to read. = Groucho Marx

And thanks for thinking of me when it involves using penguins as stationery... I think...
The flippers come to mind...
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I've just edited an item I found in my old blog and put into my portfolio:
 
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Once in Iceland Open in new Window. (E)
tired ears gather the glooms of the evening, long waves of women-laughter, breeze-carried


Also added:
 
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Weather or not  Open in new Window. (E)
Weather or not you believe in change I bring it with the slant of seasons
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Vyvyan Open in new Window. (ASR)
For every Lucy wants a sydekyck the one who wyll say yes ... who should say no (a whyne)
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White dog Open in new Window. (ASR)
Do they speak in the gaze of a loyal white dog patiently waiting for someone to join him?
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Two medallions Open in new Window. (E)
a beaming gold orb brightens our sight, at night a pale medallion hangs from a string...
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One man's trash Open in new Window. (E)
a row of treasure / perched high in a window, scattering light / would surely suffice.
#2339515 by Kåre เลียม Enga Author IconMail Icon
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