| Also you don't need big words to write a good peace. Try to say what you're saying in the clearest way you can. Even I find that hard- but unlike me, you are not weak to the beauty that is sewing words together so abstractly. Keep focus. If you're trying to capture a scene with your storytelling, thats how you'd want your camera. Sorry. I really am a sucker for bad word play. |
| Writing is great. Grant the people a voice, let them speak to those brothers and sisters they've been confined with in this generation. Grant the people a pen? They'll speak to the sons and daughters a thousand years after their voices got to break the air. I love to be picky with my words. There is a spectacle to be witness to, one of commas romancing each other, painting breaths between thoughts as to put meaning to subtle pauses- I want my paragraphs to ask their readers for breaks, you've been running too fast through the field I have cultivated for your consumption, don't you think its time to stop and smell the flowers? Call me a romantic. Stubborn Cassanova who's head over heels for bad word play, my feet are planted firmly in the idea that writing is a love language meant to paint the mind with one's intentions, and is only second to touch- that, being the way of communication where words simply fail you. I'm getting ahead of myself. That, is all I want writing to be. Unfortunately we are all too individual to all view it this way. Anyway, one love. |
| There are people here?? I signed up for the first site I saw, just hoping to keep a log of my stories and update them periodically; but after saving my quick write and falling asleep, I come back to notifications- and gifts, apparently. Thank you for the support. Its cool to know that people will read my stuff and it's even cooler to get free criticism and reviews, so any and all comments are appreciated. Sorry about any spelling mistakes or unreadable phrases, posts'll probably be updated to a legible degree a day prior upload. Stay cool. |
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