So the first contest i won here is called "Share your faith". you have no idea how poetic that is XD. thanks Kit ![]()
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Lilli ☕ ![]() |
my first monologue. to be honest every poem i wrote felt like one but to do it this direct feels good. thank you in advance for your review and i hope you enjoy this one.
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Another one inspired by a soundtrack.
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Again, thanks in advance for your review. though this time do me a small extra favour: if you feel like someone can be better by reading this then send it to them, and no need to make them come all the way here if they are not on this site. and thanks again.
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Now this is something new i tried. I don't listen to music much, but the very few i listen to seem to be more than enough. the "prompt" for this poem is a soundtrack from an anime i watched called Gintama. here is the soundtrack: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NZ7x3oULs2A I tried to make this one as clear as possible while aslo talking in the protagonist's name, you can enjoy it with a little more focus on substance rather then details i guess. and as always, thanks in advance for your review. P.S: the last two lines are one of the protagonist's quotes slightly changed.
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until i find a better way of exposure i'll keep posting works here XD. so thank you in advance for your review
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Just finished this, see if you can give me a review on it, thank you in advance.
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i'd like more reviews for this one if possible. thank you in advance for your time.
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It felt like i really needed to write this. and hopefully, you can find it as one useful read. "To the distant ones" ![]() |