

| This is my roughest chapter. I have edited it, but I'm at a loss as to how to improve it. If you have the time, I would love a high level review of it. Hey, detailed reviews are welcome, too!: 
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| Well, I doubt this is the last of my edits, but I've made quite a few. I'd love to hear what you think of it now.: 
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| I'm so thankful to 1UppyEar and others for the stellar suggestions that have heightened this chapter. Keep 'em coming'!: 
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