After reading your work, My impressions are these:
I LOVE When Harry Met Sally. It's just one of those feel good movies, ya know?
My Favorite Part(s)
I'm always up for trivia, so this was right up my alley. I didn't do as good as I had hoped (3/5), but it was a sweet jaunt down memory lane. OMG! Who could forget the orgasm at the deli? LOL
Final thoughts:
Thanks for sharing this. I'm glad I found it. Hope your Anniversary Month has been great.
After reading your work, My impressions are these:
I want to wish you a Happy WdC Anniversary. Thank you for sharing about yourself. It takes courage to open up about the good, the bad, and the ugly in order to come through and become the person you are.
My Favorite Part(s)
It seems you have an inquisitive nature. That is a wonderful asset in a writer.
Final Thoughts:
I am a dozen years older than you, and I appreciate your faithfulness to your grandmother. I wish you well now and in the future. This was written quite a while ago, and I am curious as to where life has led you.
The different names are amusing, and quite different than what you would think of for German town names.
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I am glad you came up with it, and of course it is ok to "blame" Cubby for starting things - LOL. Thanks for sharing, and maybe we will have a new slew of puzzles to come.
Yum!!! What a culinary delight in poetic form. Who wouldn't enjoy?
Thank you so much for sharing this. Just reading it made me hungry. I think I will bake some salmon this week. One less dinner to have to figure out. LOL.
Is this a contest prompt? I hope you do well with it, if so.
After reading your work, My impressions are these:
So many ways this lady "covered up" and made herself almost invisible. I "almost" didn't see you - but something little, such as red toe nails - caused you to look again. And the way it turns out, it was a good thing.
My Favorite Part(s)
The different ways a woman can cover up - culturally, and the different layers and types of cover-ups. Very well done.
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Was this done as a prompt, or maybe a contest? Thanks so much for sharing your writing. I hope to check out more in the future.
After reading your work, My impressions are these:
I like this letter to yourself. I am sorry for the loss of your beloved father. I lost a sister, and understand a little of the pain/relief of the loss.
My Favorite Part(s)
You've set some good goals here, and have set a tone of encouragement. I hope that you were able to achieve your goals that you set.
Suggestions/Questions:
Is this a contest that is held every year? Even if it is not, it seems to be a good idea for setting goals. Thank you for sharing.
After reading your work, My impressions are these:
A wonderful tribute about a soldier who answered the call to service, and ultimately paid the ultimate price.
My Favorite Part(s)
Realizing that the cost of freedom is not free, and that people are willing to pay it, regardless.
Suggestions/Questions:
Thank you for sharing this, and I hope to look further into your port in the future, as I enjoy poetry as well.
After looking over your port, My impressions are these:
There are lots of things going on, which is to be expected, since you've been around for a hot minute. Also looking over your port, I found a new trinket to collect of the "grand-dog". What a cutie! Thanks.
My Favorite Part(s)
I like the way you have your port laid out, and it makes it inviting to check out. I plan to do so in the future.
Suggestions/Questions:
Nothing to suggest. I am looking forward to checking out more of your work soon.
After reading your work, My impressions are these:
Looking back on life, especially in the 20s, I get the feeling that "time" has not treated you well. To me, the word "sham" means phony or counterfeit. Then you describe yourself as not a sham at all.
My Favorite Part(s)
The realness of this poem, the crying out struck me and resonated with me.
Suggestions/Questions:
Do you still feel this way? Or is this just an artistic expression, such as for a contest? Thank you for sharing.
After reading your work, My impressions are these:
What a transformative testimony. It is straight-forward, without any varnish. God has done a wonderful work in your lives, and in the lives of your loved ones.
My Favorite Part(s)
That you show the good, the bad, and the ugly, but also show God's grace and mercy in your lives. Romans 8:28 does show itself in your lives.
Final Thoughts:
Thank you for sharing part of your life in this manner. I hope your WdC Anniversary month is a blessed one.
You really do love your dragons! The illustrations are very cute and varied.
My Favorite Part:
I don't know if I like the fishing Gulp or the author Gulp better. The fishing Gulp as my dad loves fishing, or the studious author Gulp who looks so studious.
After reading your work, My impressions are these:
This is a nice work on how to make tempera paints. I knew that paint colors could be done by using natural things, but you give a pretty nice list of the different materials for the different colors.
My Favorite Part(s)
The list of things you need to make the paints, outside of the natural ingredients. Vinegar, oil and even a mortar and pestle (or two rocks).
Suggestions/Questions:
Have you made any of these paint colors? How did they turn out? Thank you for sharing this writing.
Hi again! This writing caught my eye in regards to giving reviews, and your explaining what you use in conjunction with your reviewing.
After reading your work, My impressions are these:
There were several different definitions given in an orderly grouping. Some of these things I learned in English class, and I recognize them. However, there are a few that I hadn't learned, or forgot
My Favorite Part(s)
I like the way that this is grouped together, and I'd like to keep this handy when doing my writing.
Suggestions/Questions:
Thank you so much for providing this writing. I think you should advertise this in the Newsfeed, as it would be helpful to many, I believe.
After reading your work, My impressions are these:
Time just seems to fly everywhere...like trying to catch beads or grains of sand in your hand...the harder you try to catch them, the more of them slip through your hand.
My Favorite Part(s)
I like the last lines - "until my thread is cut my tapestry grows warmer and more complex...and love as if I've all the tomorrows in the world.
Final Thoughts:
I've read it a couple of times now, and it does strike a chord in me. Live, love, give, as we know not when the thread will be "cut". Thank you for sharing.
After reading your work, My impressions are these:
What a wonderful little story about turning "lemons into lemonade". I applaud the teacher who made this a learning and fun event for all of the children.
My Favorite Part(s)
Carolina's attitude. Losing hair can be devastating, and it reminded me of my own daughter who lost her hair to cancer at age 7. I let her cut my hair off, and we rocked matching bandanas for a year.
Suggestions/Questions:
I see that this was written quite a while ago. What was your inspiration?
Back again. I was drawn to this in your port "Musings"
After reading your work, My impressions are these:
I was curious about the title The Wedding Vows, and wanted to see what it was about. It wasn't what I thought it was going to be - This seems more like a jilting at the altar, and it was a painful read. I could feel the heartbreak and the pain in the once happy bride to be. I couldn't imagine such heartache. Truly, divorce is easier to tolerate than this.
Suggestions/Questions:
Is this just an imagining of yours? I hope it isn't based on a true story. Thank you for sharing, even if it wasn't the happiest of writings. Gives someone something to ponder.
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