Good Afternoon,
The given title expresses tomorrow which may or may not happen:
" The Next Time We Meet "
Reading between the lines, I say that such words serve as a promise to oneself on what is the best thing to be done as if realizing some faults that did happen yesterday and to be corrected wisely tomorrow.
Written with all sincereness.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
The given title speaks of a fact of life:
" The Law Of Nature "
Reading between the lines speaks of more facts of life.
The last two lines makes a great conclusion that speaks of another fact of life that expresses positiveness making life worthliving and fulfilling.
Admirable work of art.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Wow !
This is one of the Best of the Best writings that I enjoy and I admire in this awesome Community.
Nice title too :
"Psalm Of The Seafarer "
My family Circle live in the village near the Sea, and Sea was playing a great role in my life being a Fisherman's Daughter and I am so proud about that. For me , nothing can compare the beauty of the sea.
The story speaks of the Seafarer's life and how he experienced much struggles yet his winning spirit always leads him to enjoy life inspite of everything.
And here comes the message in a bottle, that makes the story behind this wonderful Prose most interesting.
I wish that at the end he and the Princess of the Sea will find each other and live happily ever after.
Yet, I believe that some stories are having a different ending and that makes it more impressive as well as intriguing.
Wise and Nice indeed !
Keep writing and keep posting.
God 🙏 Bless !
Good Morning,
A short story in 297 words and is very meaningful and inspiring.
About two neighbors Rose and William.
William seems nice and lonely while Rose has a caring heart and spirit.
The given title is admirable by itself :
" An Act Of Kindness "
This is highly impressive.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write On.
Good Morning,
WOW...
We do not grow apple in our place but we can buy them at the Supermarket.
I love the taste of apples.
Thank You for sharing this very nice recipe about apples that surely is delicious as well as nutritious and the ingredients are also available here.
A great read
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A song with an interesting as well as an intriguing title :
" Blame Game "
Yes...Reading between the lines makes me understand why such title was given.
Yes. Some people have a hard time accepting that he or she is at fault and gets easily to blame others and I believe this is the story behind the lyrics of the song that is well written and nicely presented.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A question about her..
And here she is being lost in her own identity, trapped in a world full of turmoil.
A very sad existence indeed.
The last line, I hope will come into reality.
A deeply emotional piece that is well written and nicely presented all the way.
Thank You for the read.
Keep writing and keep posting.
Good Evening,
Reading between the lines makes me feel the coldness of the night as we are experiencing a Storm rather we called it a typhoon named Auring here in the Philippines, right now
Each line fits for the given title
" Stormy Days "
Hope that this will be over soonest.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A poem that proves there is a bright shining sun after the storm.
This person in your life comes at the right place an at the right time that you needed it most as in
GOD works in wonders.
I admire the story behind the poetry and the way the poem is being presented.
Great title too that shares the great power of love:
" The Strongest Relationship "
Awesome read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
A poem that sounds like an order to be implemented right away or a special request that needs to be followed or done right away.
This is how I understand this well written and nicely presented
" Pay Attention "
As in to full focus of what's going on with your life.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
A Haiku poetry with a nice colorful picture that goes with it and it is about Trees
Yes...the three lines that completed this work of art adds more meaning to it.
They grow add more beauty to Nature and is useful to mankind.
I admire each written line.
Thank You for the read.
Write on
Good Evening,
Hahaha
This sounds like hearing a case in court. Haha haha
The last line for suggestion ?
Bake more berry pies for him.
Hahaha
I love the character of Dempsey.
Innocently clever.
Thank You for sharing this
" Ask Me No Questions "
Thank You for the worthwhile read too.
Write on.
Good Evening,
Nice storyline.
Written for a prompt and you did write it so well.
The talks proved to be true that this tough looking new coach has a tough character too so better watch out players.
A well written as well as a nice presented " The New Coach " with a picture on it.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
A special tribute to the veterans, these brave soldiers who served the Motherland through a well written and nicely presented Acrostic Poetry.
Each line written fits for the given title
" Honoring Our Veterans "
The picture adds more meaning to this precious work of art.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
The given title is interesting, intriguing and captivating
"Young Pursuits- Less Than Spunky
Trials "
The written lines speak of life's challenges that one has to tackle honestly, sincerely and courageously.
This is how I understand this well written poetry with a philosophical message.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
A very nice name for a cat or a kitten "Tovah "
Quite big for a kitten.
We have a cat that we called Short because of her short tail and looks like Tovah because of their the same color.
Tovah looks so adorable.
Very nice picture.
Thank You for sharing
" My Dear Little Kitten, Tovah "
WOW...
Good Afternoon,
The given. Title makes me very curious to know about this German names of worldwide places.
Oh...really ...
I wonder how they called our country the Philippines.
It may have a different accent too
Amusing Word search..
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Good Afternoon,
The story expresses a wonderful bonding time with Mom before she died and that's comforting to note that she was able to hum the melody and enjoy the raindrops sound.
A story that I can relate as Mama died last May 15, less than a month ago and we sang her favorite songs that makes her so happy.
Yet, sadness overrules as we always miss her presence.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
I am sorry for your loss.
A poem that serves as a tribute to someone close to your heart and is gone too soon.
The written lines speaks of honoring, respecting and loving words as the dearly departed is a great person and that it speaks also of tomorrow.
Thank You for sharing
" No Longer Will I Fear "
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A disappointment upon reaching and staying at the resort as it is not the same as what was posted in the brochure.
Then the twist and turn of the story occurs upon seeing this cute guy and that is all that matters.
Well...at least..there is something worthwhile.
My suggestion in this writing is to please divide this into two or three paragraphs for a better presentation.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Haiku about Nature and the written lines fit for the given title.
It speaks of Summertime and the outdoor activities that leaves wonderful memories .
The poem is full of life as in lovely and Lively.
Thank You for sharing this work of art.
Thank You for the worthwhile read too.
Keep writing and keep posting.
God 🙏 Bless...
Good Morning,
A Ghazal Form of Poetry.
It speaks of God's assurance words for His children that with Him in your life there is.nothing to worry or to fear.
The written lines are truly
" Christ Invitation "
Very meaningful and inspiring all the way.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
The heart speaks through this Love
Poetry with an interesting title with a question mark .
Reading between the lines makes me understand why the question mark.
This special person has desirable and wonderful traits that makes you feel in love yet there's a question and maybe such question needs an answer to get clarity as well as for her to know your deepest feelings.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Fascinating mention of trees. Some of them I haven't seen actually like the oak tree where in I heard as a part of a lyrics of a nice song Tie A Yellow Ribbon,
The redwood, maybe it's called
Mahogany in our country, and we have two trees in front of our house,
Then, this Willow Tree I don't think I've seen this.
What I always love in our country, the Philippines is the Talisay Tree, the Coconut Tree , the Mango Tree and the Bamboo tree that played an important role in my childhood life.
I highly admire how you put into words, lines, and stanza's to form a very meaningful poem that has connectedness with life and death on these particular trees.
Amazing and Awesome.
Thank You for sharing
" The Mightiest Tree Of All "
Thank You for the worthwhile read too.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Hahaha
Amusing and yet so very true.
The poem has a good flow with a nice rhythm and rhyme.
I love the positiveness of this fascinating " IF "
The sad realities of life are written here and the last stanza makes a great or a wonderful conclusion .
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
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