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Review of Vroom!  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
I love the sound effect of the given title
" VROOM"
As in so much action.
Reading between the lines I feel sorry for you to have such an unpleasant experience.
The poem is well written and nicely presented and the suspense...
Written for a prompt..
Very convincing.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
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Review of Scary Things  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
Interesting Poll about " Scary Things "
I answered Spiders because I am scared of Spiders especially their Web.
That's why I love cleaning the whole house since I was a child in order to get rid of Spiders.
For me, I find their WEB is like a prison.
Hahaha
Funny but it's true.
Thank You for sharing.
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Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
Greetings !
Welcome To Writing.Com. an Awesome Community of Writers and Surely you will enjoy exploring this site.
Yes .I agree with You that this Community is composed of kind people that I myself appreciate and grateful too.
Glad to know that you are an accomplished Author or Writer and I look forward to read more of your works.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Keep writing and keep posting.
God 🙏 Bless You Always
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Review of Short Bio  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
A short BIO.
This is well written and nicely presented.
Interesting life that you are enjoying .
Nice pictures too that you are sharing to this Awesome Community
A very talented author.
You are greatly blessed and I am happy for you.
Thank You for the wonderful read.
Write on.
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Review of my haiku  Open in new Window.
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Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
Oh..what fascinates me is that when I pressed the words written in black
" Red Squirrel"
The letters turned into red like magic.
Interesting ..
I like the poem that is so full of life.
The given title fits for this nice, wise and concise Haiku Poetry.
Truly a great read.
Write on.


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Review of Unspoken  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
The given title is captivating and intriguing:
" Unspoken "

How sad to note that the true feeling was not truly expressed in whatever way, like writing or through flowers.
Yes..this happens and hopefully it is being revealed at the end and hopefully too that it's not too late.
This is well written and nicely presented and the rhythm and rhyme is wonderful.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
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Review of Blue Roses  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
How sweet of your son for giving this very Rare color of Roses.
" Blue Roses "
WOW..
Honestly, I have never seen in reality a blue Rose but I have seen many pictures of it and in videos too.
Fascinating gift.
Fascinating Poetry.
I am so happy for you.
Happy Birthday.
God 🙏 Bless You Always.
Write on.
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Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
A nicely written and nicely presented Love poetry with a good flow
The rhythm and rhyme is wonderful and lively.
A poem that expresses a joyful heart remembering those sweet moments with someone so precious in your life
I enjoy reading this :
"Do You Still Recall "
Surely she remembers.
Write on.
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Review of First Flight  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
What an experience in taking his first flight.
Yes..the suspense on what happened to the pilot .
That was terrifying.. good to know that it was only a cup of coffee accident
An unforgettable
"First Flight "
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
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Review of Mister  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
Two strangers meet while walking on the street...and here's the conversation that both ask each others name.
The story behind the poetry is full of excitement and great expectations..
This is well written and nicely presented and with a good flow.
Surely, both will have a great time in the process of knowing each other .
Fascinating like a good movie.
Write on.
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Review of Snow  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
An unforgettable day and documented
with a picture that is still existing and admired after a very long period of time..
Fifty two years to be exact.
WOW.
Awesome.
A very beautifully written experience of Snow and this is a wonderful read
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
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Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning
A Preface of an interesting Novel or book in the making.
Wonderful story line and great characterization.
Good luck for more pages and more chapter until the very end
ALIRA..
I wish to read more of this story
Thank You for sharing.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review of Pieces  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
A special bond that turned into pieces then being whole again.
Very touching and very meaningful.
A mother and child both are special and the love they shared can always stay forever even if physically apart.
A poem that is well written and nicely presented and so full of love.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
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Review of And you are?  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
Oh..death has come and now , it's a face to face with Saint Peter at the Heavens Gate.
This is how I understand this well written and nicely presented Short Story.
PAM, her name is in the list.
Thank You for sharing
" And You Are "
A very interesting and captivating work of art.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
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Review of Waiting  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
This is a wonderful story about a Soldier serving his Motherland, and who is also a family man.
In his duties and responsibilities, his family is always in his mind and as I read the given title
" WAITING " which is a very hard thing , waiting when is the time to be with his loved ones again.
A story written with all truthfulness and sincereness and is highly impressive.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
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Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
A free verse poetry with a good flow and it expresses a strong and meaningful advice which I believe is for everyone.
This is well written and nicely presented.
The rhythm and rhyme is wonderful all the way.
Thank You for sharing
" Look, Listen And Be Proud "
Thank You for the read too.
Write on.
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Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
I answered " Other..."
It is because in my observations not all men behave the same in handling their emotions.
Some men can stand firm and strong inspite of the many challenges in life while some have a weak spirit to handle difficult situation or conditions in life
Thank You for sharing and the opportunity for me to share my point of view.
Write on.
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Review of The Walkout  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
I cannot blame the students why they did " The Walkout "
There is a great lesson in this well written and nicely presented short story.
I can imagine the reaction of Mr. Halberd as nobody's left to listen to his own personal " history "
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
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Review of Pedestal  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
True to the Special Note below the poetry, truly this is a Doubtful Poem.
The given title " Pedestal " is like a paradox to the written poetic words and lines.
This is well written and nicely presented all the way in six lines.
I admire the creativeness.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
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Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
This is Wonderful.
A free verse poetry with a good flow and is well written and nicely presented.
It speaks admirably and adorably about
" Gintare, My Radiant Star "
It is a delightful read.
The rhythm and rhyme is very nice.
A poem so full.of life and love.
A joyful read indeed!
Thank You for sharing this highly impressive piece.
Write on.
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Review of An island trip  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
WOW.
This is Best of The Best Word Search as far as my Reading and Reviewing of Word Search is concerned and this is for me a BIG
Surprise....
All because I am from this Place.
I have in my Port an Essay "Trip To Pescador Island " where Tanon Strait is being mentioned as well as well as Moalboal, my Hometown.
All the barrios of Moalboal are listed here , especially Basdiot, wherein my Family circle and me resides at Panagsama Beach, a scuba divers Paradise where millions of sardines are there near the shoreline and the beach front is only a hundred meters away from home.
AMAZING that you are sharing this wonderful word search..
Have you been here ? As tourists from all over the world visited and explored the diving sites here.
How I wish I can copy paste this and share this in my Facebook Account for all my family and friends to see. Sad to Note , I simply do not know how to do it as
this modern technology functions is my weak point.
Kawasan Falls another tourist attraction is located in the next town ,Badian.
This is a very special and precious Word Search as far as I am concerned.
Thank You for sharing.
God 🙏 Bless.
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Review of I Do, I Do, I Do  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
How quick to be able to get the watch of the old man ..works like magic.
Anyway..now I understand what kind of work that was being mentioned in this short story about a wedding party.
Gatecrashers..Whew...
Pickpockets...and acted as guests.
Wow...
A very intriguing story that is well written and nicely presented all the way.
Really...
Write On.
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Review of Lonely Crow  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
A very interesting, captivating and intriguing title:
" The Lonely Crow "

Sad to note that Fear is the only friend
The poem is well written and nicely presented and descriptive of the lonely crow.

Yes ,, heard some of these beliefs or omen about the crow when I was a child but I always find a way to look at this black bird every early evening during full moon at the nearby Talisay Tree where our ancestral house was located
Sad to note, that there's no more Talisay Tree as the area is now full of buildings as Business Establishments grows .So, No more Crow. Honestly I.miss those Childhood Memories that I always treasured in my heart.
Whatever sound of any bird, including the sound of the Crow is always fascinating to me.
Thank You for sharing this very meaningful work of art that makes me reminisce.of those were the days.
Thank You for the read too.
Keep writing and keep posting.
God 🙏 Bless





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Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
Wow...
Another Brilliant writing by a brilliant author.
Wonderful all the way.
The King and the Prince in their great bonding time.
There's great wisdom in this well written and nicely presented
"Tell Me A Story, Father "
Highly impressive talent
Thank You for sharing and Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write on .
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Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
A writing.
A challenge.
A Prose and poetry.
All of these sounds like a Play for me, a Stage play that can be shown in TV.
What I admire most is the uniqueness of its creativeness that for me matters most in this writing that expresses your talent and skills to show your gift of thoughts being documented with words that forn into lines and paragraphs.
Not anyone can do this
" The Monkey's Ink Spill "
I have nothing to add and to correct I admire it the way it was written from the start until the very end.
Enjoy the crazy ride...
Thank You for the wonderful read
Keep writing and keep posting.
God 🙏🙏🙏 Bless..
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