Good Evening,
A wonderful story behind this well written and nicely presented free verse poetry with a good flow.
The conversation of Dad and Emily and Emily's to have a pet of her own.
I truly enjoy reading this work of art with a wonderful rhythm and Rhyme.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
Today is All Souls Day, thus the given title captivates my interest to read this poem
" Six Hundred Souls "
Possibly not a Big Cemetery because the cemeteries here in our country has thousands of tombs and is always increasing year after year.
The Poem has a good flow and is well written and nicely presented.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on !
Good Afternoon,
I always love the given title
" Home Sweet Home "
Reading between the lines I can feel your great love for this place too.
This is a very meaningful Prose that surely gladdens the heart.
Yes ..a Home Sweet Home wherein you can enter and exit with a joyful heart.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on
Good Afternoon,
This is a very special tribute to your dearest Father and you are so blessed to have him in your life in those years that you needed him most especially in the absence of your Mother.
Your Father was a wonderful and a very inspiring person with a great disposition in life. He may be gone physically but he lives in your heart forever.
I lost my Papa in the year 2012. I was a Papa's girl, and will always be even in his physical absence. I sing his favorite song when I miss him.
Thank You for sharing as Writing all our deepest emotions helps us to heal.
He is in God's keeping as you keep him in your heart.
God 🙏 Bless You Always..
Write on
Good Afternoon,
A beautiful beginning of a love relationship being expressed through a well written and nicely presented free verse poetry.
" Prom " a part of High School activities that usually leads to Romance and more loving and caring for each other in the future
This is well written and nicely presented.
I enjoy reading this.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
The given title is interesting, captivating and intriguing,:
" Extinction "
The written lines explain clearly avd with clarity about the given topic.
Wise and nice personal opinion that gives a meaningful feelings of the situation
Each line is admirable.
A highly impressive work of art.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
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Good Morning,
A very convincing ghost story.
Good to know that the sold items are delicious, exclusively prepared by the ghosts .
Fascinating and entertaining not scary.
This is well written and nicely presented all the way.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
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Good Morning,
I enjoy reading the alien story behind this well written and nicely presented ABCEDARIAN form of Poetry.
I also have this form of Poetry written in my Port.
The last line makes a positive tomorrow.
Thank You for sharing and I admire the creativeness.
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Good Morning,
The given title makes a powerful song as the God the Son, :
" JESUS, JESUS "
Yes .the sweetest name of all.
The given title fits for the written lines of this special song or kind of music.
Admirable lines indeed that gives honor, love and respect to JESUS.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
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Good Morning,
Knowing who you are is a wonderful thing and I believe that this is the great message in this well written and nicely presented free verse poetry with a very interesting and captivating title
" I Am "
Nice poetic words and lines that completed this work of art.
Thank You for another worthwhile read.
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Good Morning,
A poetry that expresses a dog's mind and actions in the process of getting attention from its owner.
I agree with the written poetic words and lines that completed this work of art.
" Look at me, acting like a Dog
All because of you "
Amusing conclusion.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
The given title speaks of the beauty of one of the Seasons in your country, " Winter Beauty "
The written poetic words and lines fit for the given title.
" the soft white dusting
upon garden herbs
a beauty no beast or wind
disturbs "
My favorite lines in this work of art.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Evening,
Flash Fiction...
Possibly a novel in the making and the interesting title or important caption that may serve as a Preface
"The Partial Population Of A Very
Small Town "..
The names of more than thirty person's are being listed here and some of the description of this individuals are amusing and intriguing.
Unique as it is
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
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Good Evening,
This is a great writing that serves as a wonderful documentary about the Presidents of a very powerful country, the United States of America.
Short description with a BIG impact and makes an interesting information of each leader in their own special and unique way.
A brilliant writing showing the author's wide knowledge of the topic that he is sharing.
Highly impressive.
Thank You for sharing and for another wise and nice read.
Write on.
God 🙏 Bless !
Good Afternoon,
A Senryu Form Of Poetry with an interesting and captivating title
" Standing At The Edge Of Heaven "
Three precious lines that completed this work of art that makes me feel like singing the song " The Door To Paradise "
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
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Good Afternoon,
Cheese. . .is the main topic of this eight line poetry that is well written and nicely presented.
Admirable lines that completed this work of art and also makes me feel like eating a cheese sandwich right now.
" It is not only tasteful
It is wholesome too "
My favorite lines.
Thank You for sharing
"The Magic of Cheese Items "
Thank You for the read too .
Bon Appetit...
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
Interesting Poll about kind of heroes or hero. My answer is not a Romantic Hero but My real Heroes and they are my brothers, my three brothers who are my best friends and my heroes forever.
So my answer is The Best Friend Kind and Decent
Thank You for sharing and for the opportunity for me to answer.
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God 🙏 Bless !
Good Afternoon,
This is based on a very famous and a beautiful old song " Time In A
Bottle "
This is well written and nicely presented all the way
As in wonderful as it is.
The last line makes a sad conclusion.
Thank You for sharing and Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
This serves as a Preface of a book in the making with an interesting storyline about a Prince in a particular kingdom where a lot is going on to happen and along with his journey he encounters a lot of challenges and victories.
Good luck for the continuation up to the completion of this special work of art.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
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Good Morning,
This is very inspiring.
The given title is captivating :
" Eternal Embers Of Hope "
Admirable and meaningful lines that completed this wonderful work of art.
The picture adds more meaning into this well written and nicely presented free verse poetry.
The rhythm and rhyme is Awesome.
Thank You for sharing and for the great read.
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Good Evening,
This is Awesome. It expresses a very caring heart. This reminds me of a Flash Prayer that is also very powerful being addressed to strangers in our midst.
A great message indeed !
This is well written and nicely presented.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
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Good Evening,
Interesting title of a song.
" Oooh Lala Baby , Oh Lala "
I believe that this is a lively and lovely song as in with past tempo.
This reminds me of a famous song
My Heart Beats Shalalalala..
This is surely a very happy or joyful song .
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
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Good Evening,
A deeply emotional piece that speaks of stray dogs in the street and it is so heartbreaking to note that this is happening.
The poem has a good flow and the written poetic words and lines fit for the given title.
Thank You for sharing
" Dogs - A Prowling "
Thank You for the read too.
Write on.
Good Evening,
A very sad story behind the well written and nicely presented free verse poetry with a good flow.
The given title speaks of a life without a harmonious beauty.
The poem has a wonderful rhythm and rhyme.
Thank You for sharing
" The Garden Of Misplaced Things "
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
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Good Evening,
This is Awesome ! Wise and Nice..
Wonderful title " Truth "
Admirable lines especially the last line.
Yes . truth makes us free and one with this wonderful world.
Thank You for sharing your talent and Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
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