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I'll give a quick summary of your item. Afterwards, I'll talk about your characters, any Spelling or Grammar issues, and perhaps suggest some things, like adding the item to a Genre that it would fit into.
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Speed Reading/reviewing- 1000 word story won't even take me five minutes to read, and you'll get a review within 10 minutes of me reading it. As it is, my reviews are usually around 300 Characters- minus my Review Sig. However, sometimes they'll reach the 1,000 Character mark. Depends on the Story/item. *Bigsmile*
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Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Animal
Least Favorite Genres
Can't think of any I don't like.
Favorite Item Types
I like them all.
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I will not review...
Interactives that don't have an actual story started - Give me some meat to eat there before you ask me to look at it, with at least one thread being at least 10 chapters long, and not just choices that aren't even developed, preferably written by your own hand. Books - well, not through a Review Request page anyways, as I'd would have to review the book itself and not the Chapter, in order to get paid, but I will review them if you ask me in an email. Anything that doesn't allow reviews. *Bigsmile*
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Ah, The Bad Guys, lead by Wolf, this team consisting of Miss Webs Tarantula the hacker, Mr. Snake the safecracker, Mr. Shark, the disguise expert, and Mr. Piranha, close-quarters specialist, has set out to steal a special egg. Only to encounter a problem -

Mojo Jojo! Not only has this mad monkey decided to steal the egg too, he plans to use it to empower a device to take over the world, and has abducted Wolf's crew to boot. Luckily, the master thief has managed to run into Zootopia's finest - Judy Hopps and Nick Wilde. However, even these three will need help. Thankfully, Nick knows a few people. Will they be enough to save not only Wolf's crew, but also the world? Read to find out.

Characters
Characters seem to be interesting, and seem to stay in-character to their canonical versions, for the most part.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
It's a bird! It's a Plane!

It's a Dragon!

A Dragon?

Yes! A Dragon! Now run before - wait, the dragon isn't out for treasures and princesses? Instead it's trying to help folks out in a Modern city? Follow the tail, or tale, of Derg the Superhero dragon, as they fight crime and protect the innocent - or is that what they want you to believe?

Characters
Characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Daily Cascade  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Space - the second-to-last Frontier, tied with the oceans' depths, and behind the Afterlife. We have been making up stories ever since someone claimed that there was life on the Moon, and Mars. While it has been - currently - confirmed that there is no life on other heavenly bodies in our immediate area, life could still exist, either hidden or on distant worlds.

Thoughts
An interesting item.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Carrion Luggage  Open in new Window.
for entry "Rebel Without a Curse" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
So, the United States is #1 when it comes to swearing, followed by the United Kingdom, with Australia in third place, much to the land from down under's disappointment. Well, part of the issue might be; What constitutes a swear word to these counties? Not everyone uses the same ones. That's where things get interesting.

Thoughts
An interesting piece.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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for entry "May 31, 2025" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Talk about needing AC. Me - I got rain on-and-off. It was cool enough that I was able to weed-eat my quarter mile long driveway without too much of an issue. The real trick was trying to not hit the wild strawberry plants, as I want to try to get some fruit off of them, as my own died a few years back - much to my personal annoyance. Still, we'll see what happens.

Thoughts
A very relatable entry.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Daily Cascade  Open in new Window.
for entry "On Chasing" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
On chasing. There's many things we can chase. A hunter chases the prey, in one way or another, trying to set things up for a perfect shot. A worker might chase a promotion, hoping to get a pay raise, and perhaps reach a better standard of living. Many chase a dream, because that can give one a reason to live, even when life's messages seems confusing.

Thoughts
Makes one think.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with Spelling and Grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Daily Cascade  Open in new Window.
for entry " At Montauk Point" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
A poem about a lighthouse you once visited. Well, I'll be honest, I live not too far from one. Don't know how long it was active, or if it was anything more than a tourist attraction, or just a fancy light for boating, but it is still interesting to look at and makes one think of those on the Great Lakes and along the ocean.

Thoughts
Makes one think of things.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Carrion Luggage  Open in new Window.
for entry "It Just So Happens" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Happiness and things happening. One might wonder if someone mistranslated one word or the other at times, given how they start very similar. Happiness is one of the things folks want, and yet, things seem to just happen, sometimes getting in the way of happiness. One has to wonder on occasion about it at times, so that they can figure things out.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Carrion Luggage  Open in new Window.
for entry "Lie Down" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Ah - a bunch of interesting lies that parents tell their children, either to keep them from getting upset after their pets die, or to keep them from getting into trouble. Some lies seem to be universal. Others seem to be location specific. So many lies to hear. I wonder how they'd hold up in a lying contest.

Thoughts
An interesting item to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Daily Cascade  Open in new Window.
for entry "Vampires in Bloom" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Comparing roses to vampires. Well, I don't know about vampires, but I've had my blood drawn by more than a few rose bushes. Lovely flowers, but wicked thorns. Some will even spread like crazy, be they of wild or hardy cultivated rootstock sorts, or just a hardy bush. One will always be surprised with different roses, especially when they try their luck at grafting.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
An interesting story. A young girl, sick and tired of the way her parents have treated her decides to run away. She spots someone, who looks enough like her to be a twin. This doppelganger begins to lead her through the field, away from her home. Are this stranger's intentions those of a friend, or does she have more malicious intentions?

Characters
Characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
A Chief Inspector, with an Out Rage Us Axe Scent, haz to investigate a mirder most fowl, and bring ze perpetrator to justice and ze law.

In a spoof of the Pink Panther, Chief Inspector Mattas has to go through a room of suspects, and has to figure out which of them killed the victim, a book publisher. Was it a brother, business partner, a dejected author, or was it someone else?

Characters
Characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't zee any iszuiez with ze spelling or grammar.

Zuggeztionz
Makez it bigger you fewl! Show what happened before the murder, and perhaps how the body waz found.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Daily Cascade  Open in new Window.
for entry "Beyond the Gates" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Wondering what's past some gates, ones rusted and covered in vines. Is there treasure, terror, hope, or all of the above. Hmmmm - perhaps a robot drone might be used to scout the way? After all, they can fly or roll past most things safely, which can let one know what's on the other side. A useful trick to know of.

Thoughts
An interesting poem to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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for entry "May 19 2025" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Life is one of those crazy things. Folks you think will stay together forever end up breaking up within months. Families that seem to love each other do not care for the rest. A bond forged in childhood shatters when they become adults. Crazy things happen - we don't know why, or how, but they just happen, sometimes for no reason at all, or for ones we don't understand.

Thoughts
Makes one think.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Margins  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Margins - two poems about teenage romance. One seems to be from the young man's point of view, and the other seems to be the young lady's. They seem to have met during school, and seemed to have made a practice of trying to hide their romance from the teachers and such, especially since the young lady is supposed to be a Proper sort. One has to wonder what will happen.

Thoughts
An interesting set of poems to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Carrion Luggage  Open in new Window.
for entry "Cunning Stunts" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
So, let's see here - rich dude took a bunch of celebrities on an eleven minute flight into space, and the passengers are complaining. This tells me several things that went wrong - no good food, no good in-flight movie, and terrible booze - and that was the First Class seats. Makes me wonder how bad the Economy ones are.

Thoughts
Makes one think.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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for entry "May 15 2025" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
The weather and unfinished dreams, and daily life. The weather is always something. Got a storm coming at the moment - seems to start up around this time of the year. Road crews are getting things ready for Memorial Day weekend - making the flags look nice and such. Then, there's the things we wish that we got done. I got plenty of them. The trick is to do what one can do.

Thoughts
Makes one think.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Daily Cascade  Open in new Window.
for entry "On Energy Drains" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Energy drain - there are many kinds. Physically energy is lost by doing a lot of activity. Mental energy - well, being bored will do that. Likewise, Spiritual and Emotional energy falls when one hears a lot of bad things. So, we must find ways to regain it. Fun activities help - word search, crosswords, sudoku, board games, video games, writing - and plenty more.

Thoughts
Makes one think.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Daily Cascade  Open in new Window.
for entry "Mothers" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Do mothers (and fathers) have eyes in the back of their heads? I don't know, but parents always seem to know when children are up to something. This might be because, back when they were at about their kid's age, they had tried similar antics on their parents. Granted, technology might change, but there's always someone trying to sneak out of the house after midnight, dating some guy daddy doesn't like (because they remind the father of themselves at that age), and a few other things.

Thoughts
Makes one think.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Daily Cascade  Open in new Window.
for entry "Each Day" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Each day is a gift - that's why it's called the Present. One day, you are planning your son's birthday, and the next, you could find yourself planning their funeral. My uncle had to deal with that, a few years back, and it was rough. I guess that's why he enjoys seeing me whenever we dine at a mutual favorite restaurant at the same time, where he snags at least one of my chicken wings.

Thoughts
Makes one think.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar, but the asterisks leave me puzzled - what are they for?

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
The relationship between father and son - a sacred treasure, where a parent can teach their child how to become an adult, and all that matters. However, this is often times strained, for one reason or another. I know that there are times that I wish that I could do more with my father - go fishing, have a picnic, watch a movie - something with him together.

Thoughts
Makes one think.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Daily Cascade  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
The idea of growing a garden. There are many possible reasons why folks like the idea. For some, it helps them to create a certain amount of natural beauty, in the form of flowers, herbs, vegetables, giving them things that they can enjoy, in one way or another. For others, it's having a sense of security, in that their food is untainted, with no unwanted chemicals and the like added to it. Always something.

Thoughts
Makes one think about things.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Ah, a magical window. Let's gaze into the life of a young girl, with five older siblings. Often overlooked in the crowd of noise, she tries to find something to do. In the basement of the house was a magic window, one that teleported her to a world full of magic and wonder. What shall happen to her? Read to find out.

Characters
Characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Good job winning the Writer's Cramp.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of inheritance  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
A rather hard poem to read, not that the words are difficult, but how it hits one in the feels. It talks about the abuse that women have had to endure over the years, first to themselves, and then their daughters. Makes one wonder about all that has been done to them over the years.

Thoughts
Makes one think.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
Might want to increase the rating on this to at least 13+, given the subject matter.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Hugh Dunnit  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hugh Dunnit this time! A detective on another world is bored, five years bored, with no cases to solve. He wants some sort of mystery to solve - any sort of mystery to solve, even - what's this about a birthday? Wait, when was this guy born? Well, looks like there is indeed a case to solve after all folks.

Characters
Characters look very funny indeed.

spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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