*A Story Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Hello! I found your story on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
1. Overall Impression = 4 stars
2. Plot = 4 stars
3. Style and Voice = 5 stars
4.Scene/Setting = 5 stars
5.Characters = 5 stars
6.Dialog = 4 stars
7.Grammar and Mechanics = 5 stars
Overall = 4.57 stars
AQ’s Suggestions = Would liked to hear more about husband. Sounds as if it's a give-and-take marriage and why it has endured.
"Forget about the worries of the next moment, live each now to the fullest!"
*A Poem Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Review Template: Poem
I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
Overall Impression/Emotional Impact = 5 stars
Form, Format, Rhyme, and Meter (as applicable) = 5 stars
Artistic Voice and Imagery = 5 stars
Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics = 5 stars
Overall = 5.0 stars
AQ’s Suggestions = What a beautiful poem. I grew up with my grandparents, you described my GP almost p; perfectly!
"At the end of each moment, you are enough. Don't let anxiety tell you differently!"
*A Story Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Hello! I found your story on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
1. Overall Impression = 4 stars
2. Plot = 5 stars
3. Style and Voice = 4 stars
4.Scene/Setting = 5 stars
5.Characters = 5 stars
6.Dialog = 4 stars
7.Grammar and Mechanics = 5 stars
Overall = 4.57 stars
AQ’s Suggestions = Well written I enjoyed the plot and setting most. The dialog was sincere.
"Live one moment at a time, You can't control tomorrow!"
*A Poem Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Review Template: Poem
I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
Overall Impression/Emotional Impact = 5 stars
Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable) = NA stars
Artistic Voice and Imagery = 4 stars
Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics = 5 stars
Overall = 3.5 stars
AQ’s Suggestions = Interesting topic, may you could have expanded on it more.
*A Poem Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Review Template: Poem
I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
Overall Impression/Emotional Impact = 4 stars
Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable) = 4 stars
*A Poem Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Review Template: Poem
I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
Overall Impression/Emotional Impact = 4 stars
Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable) = 4 stars
Artistic Voice and Imagery = 4 stars
Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics = 4 stars
Overall = 4.0 stars
AQ’s Suggestions = Nice piece of self-introspection.
*A Poem Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Review Template: Poem
I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
Overall Impression/Emotional Impact = 5 stars
Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable) = NA stars
Artistic Voice and Imagery = 5 stars
Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics = 5 stars
Overall = 5.0 stars
AQ’s Suggestions = Great perception of one's own personality. Written very cleverly.
"Challenges are lessons. What can you learn from your writing?"
*A Story Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Hello! I found your story on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
1. Overall Impression = 5 stars
2. Plot = 5 stars
3. Style and Voice = 5 stars
4.Scene/Setting = 5 stars
5.Characters = 5 stars
6.Dialog = 5 stars
7.Grammar and Mechanics = 5 stars
Overall = 5.0 stars
AQ’s Suggestions = Hard to suggest anything already written here. Great astronomy history.
*A Story Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Hello! I found your story on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
1. Overall Impression =5stars
2. Plot = 5 stars
3. Style and Voice = 5 stars
4.Scene/Setting = 5 stars
5.Characters =5stars
6.Dialog = 5 stars
7.Grammar and Mechanics = 5 stars
Overall = 5.0 stars
AQ’s Suggestions =This.
was a super story. Very high in realism.
"Always be articulate and clear as you develop even more skills!"
*A Story Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Hello! I found your story on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
1. Overall Impression = 5 stars
2. Plot = 5 stars
3. Style and Voice = 5 stars
4.Scene/Setting = NA stars
5.Characters = NA stars
6.Dialog = 5 stars
7.Grammar and Mechanics = 5 stars
Overall = 5.0 stars
AQ’s Suggestions = Great piece of culinary history.
*A Poem Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Review Template: Poem
I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
Overall Impression/Emotional Impact = 4 stars
Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable) = 5 stars
Artistic Voice and Imagery = 5 stars
Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics = 5 stars
Overall = 4.0 stars
AQ’s Suggestions = Special writing, sounds much like American History. Good work!
"Transformation to a butterfly is a harsh one. Don't let anxiety stop the beauty!"
*A Story Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Hello! I found your story on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
1. Overall Impression = 4 stars
2. Plot = 5 stars
3. Style and Voice = 4 stars
4.Scene/Setting = 5 stars
5.Characters = 4 stars
6.Dialog = 5 stars
7.Grammar and Mechanics =5 stars
Overall = stars
AQ’s Suggestions = Very vivid and appears, to me, to be actual in reality. Nice job.
*A Poem Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Review Template: Poem
I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
Overall Impression/Emotional Impact = 5 stars
Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable) = 5 stars
Artistic Voice and Imagery = 5 stars
Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics = 5 stars
Overall = 5.0 stars
AQ’s Suggestions = Very well written. You covered an exceptional number of bases here!
It was a crisp autumn morning when Mia found herself wandering the familiar streets of Maplewood, the scent of fallen leaves mixing with the sweet aroma of pumpkin spice lingering in the air. She had lost track of time, her thoughts consumed by the ache in her heart from the recent disappearance of her golden retriever, Max. For days, she had scoured the n*A Story Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Hello! I found your story on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
1. Overall Impression = 5 stars
2. Plot = 5 stars
3. Style and Voice = 5 stars
4.Scene/Setting = stars
5.Characters = 5 stars
6.Dialog = 5 stars
7.Grammar and Mechanics = 5 stars
Overall = 5.0 stars
AQ’s Suggestions = Excellent story!
"Choose the next step, even if it is difficult. You have much to share!"
*A Poem Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Review Template: Poem
I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
Overall Impression/Emotional Impact = 4 stars
Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable) = 4 stars
Artistic Voice and Imagery = 4 stars
Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics = 4 stars
Overall = 4.0 stars
AQ’s Suggestions =Clever format. Your writing was succinct and to the point!
"Choose the next best step, even if it's difficult!"
*A Poem Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive, and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Review Template: Poem
I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
Overall Impression/Emotional Impact = 5 stars
Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable) = 4 stars
Artistic Voice and Imagery = 3 stars
Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics = 5 stars
Overall = 4.0 stars
AQ’s Suggestions = The format was very creative. Somewhat disorganized thoughts.
"Choose to do the next best step, even if it is difficult!"
*A Poem Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive, and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Review Template: Poem
I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
Overall Impression/Emotional Impact = 4 stars
Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable) = 4 stars
*A Story Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Hello! I found your story on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
1. Overall Impression = 5 stars
2. Plot = 5 stars
3. Style and Voice = 5 stars
4.Scene/Setting = stars
5.Characters = 5 stars
6.Dialog = 5 stars
7.Grammar and Mechanics =5 stars
Overall = 5 stars
AQ’s Suggestions =WOW! What a philosophical treat! Thanx for sharing this piece, we all could learn from your work here!
*A Poem Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Review Template: Poem
I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
Overall Impression/Emotional Impact = 4 stars
Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable) = 3 stars
Artistic Voice and Imagery = 4 stars
Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics = 5 stars
Overall = 4.0 stars
AQ’s Suggestions = Hope you can clear up the situation. Have had much the same after breaking up a long-standing relationship!
"Seek opportunity in every interaction and situation!"
*A Poem Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Review Template: Poem
I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
Overall Impression/Emotional Impact = 4 stars
Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable) = 4 stars
Artistic Voice and Imagery = 5 stars
Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics = 5 stars
Overall = 4.0 stars
AQ’s Suggestions = Come up with more clever work!
"You will succeed when you are dedicated to your goals. Set some NOW, and be successful!"
*A Story Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Hello! I found your story on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
1. Overall Impression = 4 stars
2. Plot = 4 stars
3. Style and Voice =4 stars
4.Scene/Setting = 4 stars
5.Characters = 4 stars
6.Dialog = 5 stars
7.Grammar and Mechanics = 5 stars
Overall = 4.0 stars
AQ’s Suggestions = Interesting set of circumstances, go story!
"Seek opportunities everywhere, be successful where you look!"
*A Story Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Hello! I found your story on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
1. Overall Impression = 4 stars
2. Plot = 4 stars
3. Style and Voice = 4 stars
4.Scene/Setting =4 stars
5.Characters = 4 stars
6.Dialog = 4 stars
7.Grammar and Mechanics = 4 stars
Overall = 4.0 stars
AQ’s Suggestions = Take a positive approach to problem solutions.
"Your nerves and self-confidence are a sign you care!"
*A Story Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Hello! I found your story on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
1. Overall Impression = 5 stars
2. Plot = 4 stars
3. Style and Voice = 4 stars
4.Scene/Setting = 4 stars
5.Characters = 3 stars
6.Dialog = 4 stars
7.Grammar and Mechanics = 4 stars
Overall = 4.0 stars
AQ’s Suggestions = Great start to good plot. Get back to it soon!
"Don't let fear keep you from following your dreams!"
*A Story Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Hello! I found your story on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
1. Overall Impression = 5 stars
2. Plot = 5 stars
3. Style and Voice = 5 stars
4.Scene/Setting = 4 stars
5.Characters = 5 stars
6.Dialog = 4 stars
7.Grammar and Mechanics = 4 stars
Overall = 4.0 stars
AQ’s Suggestions = Very interesting piece. Top to bottom, intriguing, Very good.
*A Poem Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Review Template: Poem
I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
Overall Impression/Emotional Impact = 5 stars
Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable) = 5stars
Artistic Voice and Imagery = 5 stars
Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics = 5 stars
Overall = 5.0 stars
AQ’s Suggestions =A very moving piece. Keep up the good and fascinating work!
"Your poetry will help make people's lives better!"
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