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Review by BernadetteOntong Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
An incredible story. It could easily be an excerpt from a book series. A story well-told, much like Pirates of the Caribbean. You could develop it if you haven't already.
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Review by BernadetteOntong Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Superb!It really paints the picture so vividly - it is like watching a movie. Wow!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
wow!
An intriguing story - a little sad but intriguing. It keeps you rivetted to the end. Great story telling. loved it.
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Review by BernadetteOntong Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi
Lovely and authentic. Gripping to the end.
You could totally turn this into a book!
Ciao
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Review by BernadetteOntong Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Wonderful build up to the LOL bit. Mums-to-be should let the husbands read this LOL!
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Review by BernadetteOntong Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi,

Loved your story - quite funny with a hint of sadness.
Could become a lovely short story or even a book.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi
What an intriguing story. It is well penned. We need more of these true stories to flow across the world.
Thank you for sharing.
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