you are a very good writer. i am wondering where did you get your insperation? i love the idea of it all. now it sounded very well worded. i see as you should continue this as a book or a short series. either way i would read it. very mysterious. i am not usally into alot of mysteries but this is one that i can honestly say that i would read.
Ren,
I fell in love with this poem the first time or many times of reading it. i ahve gone through this same thing for eight months. i feel for this. i could feel how hurt you felt when you found out about the phony.
l0v3,
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