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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you for sharing such a lovely memory and relationship!

This was concise, yet full of warmth and personal interest.

I found this to be a well-written piece, timeless in it's message and uplifting in substance.

What a wonderful son you must have...and what a wonderful mother you must be. Congrats on both accounts!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
You have done it again, Wren!

This was so good. It also addresses a concern which should be noted. I found it concise, to the point and a wonderful short - short!

Blessings!
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Review of Beloved Friends  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
I can feel your anguish in the words. I sense a sadness which you hope to never experience again...but probably will, because that is life sometimes. Your friends are blessed to have a friend like you, one who cares about them.

I would suggest creating space between some of the lines...sort of break it up a bit. For instance, it seems that there is a natural break after every 8th line as I read your piece, where you could begin a new stanza/paragraph.

I am not sure what 'sarrow' is...but, if you are referring to a name/noun, it should be capitalized. Also, did you mean 'which' instead of 'witch'? I noticed a couple of possible spelling errors.

You wrote from your heart and that is soooo important.
Keep up the good work!
Blessings!
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