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Rated: E | (5.0)
I came upon your song while looking for something to review. I enjoyed the rhythm of this item, the rhyming, and the terrific flow.

I enjoyed reading this; it's well written and reminds me of a relationship I was once in. I did not find any mistakes or errors. Great job, and thank you for sharing it.


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Review of Writer's Block  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I was looking through "Read & Review" and came upon this poem. The title caught my attention; many of us know too well about writer's block.

I enjoyed how you applied the symptoms of writer's block to the letters of your username. The poem is short, but very descriptive and draws a clear picture of the subject. I especially enjoyed the last line which ends this poem perfectly.

I did not find any errors or mistakes, it is well written and very good. Thank you for sharing with us.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I came upon this looking through Read & Review, and since I like banana bread, I thought I'd read your recipe. My wife makes her banana bread from scratch, and I'm not sure what's in it, but this sounds terrific with a lot less work. I'll have to copy the recipe, if that's alright.

As for the writing—I didn't find any mistakes or errors. The steps are easy to follow and complete, and I found this item well written.

Thank you for sharing this recipe.

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I was looking in "Read & Review" and came upon your story. The title caught my attention, so I read through the story. It's well written, and I enjoyed the plot and the ending. The dialogue is terrific and adds a lot to the story. I didn't notice any errors or typos. There was one thing that did catch my attention and made me wonder. The use of the word god throughout the story goes from "god" to "God". I couldn't tell if this was intentional or an oversight.

It's a great story, and since today is Easter, it's a great holiday story to read. Thank you for sharing. Well done.


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Review of Garden Woes  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
We are getting closer to planting in the garden, so your title grabbed my attention. I enjoyed reading your poem and found myself chuckling at the ending. We have suffered the same demise in past years, but not geese, squirrels, and rabbits.

Your poem reads smoothly with great rhythm, the rhyming pattern adds to the joy of reading it, and the lines balance wonderfully. I didn't find any writing errors or typos; this is well written.

Great job! Thank you for sharing this with us.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Wow, this is an awesome poem! I came upon your link in the Newsfeed and headed over. Since I still need to do a review for the day, you can be my Guinea Pig. *Rolling*

The poem flows smoothly with great rhythm, you use great word choice, making this very enjoyable to read, and in a fairly short poem, you tell an entire story. Great Job!

I didn't find any errors or typos, I can offer no suggestions, it's well written just as it is.


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Review of Bad Weather Blues  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your title for this poem caught my attention, we all have times we feel bad weather blues. I enjoyed the comparison of emotion to weather. The poem is descriptive, it flows smoothly, and it has a nice rhythm. This was enjoyable to read.

I did find one spot that didn't flow right, "But after then, a rainbow...". I believe it's meant to be "But after that, a rainbow..."}

I found no errors except for this typo; very well done.

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Review of The Golden Thread  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The title of this poem caught my attention. You have put a lot of truth into this short poem; it's very descriptive for just a couple of short verses. The item flows well, and is enjoyable and relatable. I did not find any errors or corrections in the poem, it is well written. Great job!

I did see you used a dash and would like to offer how to create an emdash; just type {emdash} and it will appear as —

The simpler dash also works; it just provides another option.

Thank you for sharing your poem.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
What a wonderful poem! I was captivated by the title and decided to review your poem. I'm glad I did because it's a beautiful poem; sad and touching, but very beautiful.

The verses flow smoothly into the next, and each verse has wonderful rhythm enhanced by the rhyming pattern. This reads very well and is very enjoyable.

I did not find any errors or need for corrections. Well done.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
The title of this poem caught my attention, but I was not expecting the poem to read as it does; an enjoyable surprise.

I enjoyed reading this. I enjoyed the play on words to keep the rhyming pattern going, and I enjoyed the smooth, flowing rhythm. I found myself laughing as I read through the verses, and I particularly enjoyed the ending.

This is very well done and a great poem. Thank you for sharing it.

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Review of This Gift  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you for sharing your poetry. The title of this poem captured my attention; we all enjoy receiving gifts. I enjoyed reading the poem, it is a message of the gift we all get with each new day.

The poem flows very well, the rhyming pattern is terrific, and the rhythm carries the reader along. I did not find any errors, typos, or corrections; it is very well written.

You did a great job, thank you again for sharing this.


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I was taken in by the title and decided to review this poem. It's not what I expected, but I'm glad I did read it. I found the poem interesting and fun to read. I did not find any errors and can offer no suggestions, it's fun, it flows smoothly, and I enjoyed it. Good job.

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Review of It's All Fine  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
The title of this poem caught my attention, so I decided to read and review it. I think this is something we can all relate to, either ourselves or someone else. Often, we say we are fine, just a cover to spare others from the trouble lying beneath.

I also read the notes and agree, the second stanza could use a bit of clarification, but the poem is nice as is. I did not find any corrections needed.

I enjoyed reading this, thank you for sharing.


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Review of The depth of love  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I was looking for an item to review and the title of this poem caught my attention. You did a wonderful job of describing love in this poem. The poem flows smoothly and describes love very well even though it's only three verses long. You use very colorful and meaningful words and balance them in each verse.

I only found two places that should be corrected, unless you meant to write it this way. The fourth line in the second and third verses "i" should be capitalized; "i'm sorry"—"I'm sorry" and saying i can—saying I can.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
The title of this poem caught my attention because today saw the first robin of spring. I enjoyed reading this poem, it's very well written, it has a wonderful flow, and the rhyming pattern is wonderful. I could picture the birds and hear them as I read the lines, your descriptions add imagery to your words.

I didn't find anything wrong, out of place, or in error, this is very well written. Great job.

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Review of Winter Homecoming  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
What a beautiful poem, thank you for sharing it. As I read this, I remembered our family traveling to my grandparents house for Christmas. It would be dark out when we arrived and the soft yellow glow was so inviting when we arrived.

I did not find anything in need of correction, it's well written. It flows smoothly with great rhythm and rhyme.

Great writing!


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Review of That's Alright  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
This is a very well written poem that tells a story I think many readers can relate well with. I did not find any errors in your writing and enjoyed reading this. It moves along smoothly from verse to verse, it hold the readers attention and draws them along. The poem has a smooth, even rhythm that makes this enjoyable to read, and the message in the end wraps up the poem completely.

Well done!

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Review of Tomorrow  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is an interesting and entertaining poem. The topic, time, is something we can all relate to. I found this especially interesting since today once again slipped by.

I did not find any errors, it reads well, it moves forward smoothly, and is well constructed. This is well written and well done.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a very wonderfully written poem! I enjoyed reading this, it has a wonderful balance and flows smoothly through each verse. The rhythm matches the flow and tempo of the item and the rhyming pattern adds depth. Each verse is filled with great description and creates a wonderful image.

I didn't find any errors and found this very well done!

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Review of Never Bitter  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
A very interesting and erotic tale. In it's shortness I found myself wondering about the past but understand it would turn a short story into a novel (possibly an idea). The story moved along at a smooth but quick pace, it held my attention, and by the end, I was not disappointed. The only thing I found in need of correction is in the line:

"Leave that sinking gas station Bart. Face it, its glory days are over. You've got to move on.

There's more than plenty of room in my home. Come, stay with me. Don't make me beg."

It's one statement, so it shouldn't have the space separating it.

This is well written, interesting, and enjoyable; well done.

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Review of Ladybug  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a fun poem to read about ladybug and their instinct to find shelter before the cold north winds bring winter. the poem has a nice, smooth rhythm as I read through each line. There is balance and flow throughout each verse, and the pattern of rhyming adds to the enjoyment of the poem. I also enjoyed the contrast between winter and spring in the beginning and the last verse.

Well done.

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Review of Grilled Mackerel  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I saw this item on the Hub and followed the link. The image of the fish grilling had me even more eager for warmer weather and outdoor activities. The recipe, written in the form of a poem, is interesting and sounds delicious. I enjoyed the visual "ingredients" listed through the item. This is an interesting item, it's well written, and very enjoyable.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Everybody knows knock-knock jokes, a few are good, most make us cringe even while we laugh. You took this form of joke and turned it into a fun to read poem. I like how you incorporate some knock-knock jokes into this poem as well as some very descriptive responses. I enjoyed the rhyming pattern throughout the item, and I enjoyed how you ended it. This is well written and flows very well. It's a fun poem to read; well done.

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Review of Promptly Poetry  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A very catchy limerick for St. Patrick's Day. I enjoyed this; it brought a smile as I read the last line. I like the rhyming, it's catchy and original. But the last line ties it up so nicely with not only the rhyming, but the play on the last word.

Very well done and proof that not all limericks need to be bawdy or naughty, and writing such is definitely not "fraud-ie".


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Review of Pop  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is an interesting little poem. I enjoyed reading it and did not find any errors in it. You use a wonderful assortment of wording to make this poem very descriptive. In addition to it showing a tense scene before the race, the poem itself flows smoothly and easily.

A very nice bit of writing, keep it up.


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