I enjoy the irony, in which the fixer is presented as the central mystery element, yet the twist that the protagonist/narrator is a robot is a good sense of irony.
From what I read, the sensibility I have is that accentuation of description, though a helpful ally here, is not actually all that needed. You do a good job of describing and indulging in the situation's emotion. I enjoyed the text. Thank you.
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