Wow! I mean, WOW! The conversation between the two characters flowed easily from the start, which is hard for a lot of people to do. I was scared towards the end, my heart racing, I was actually panicking! GREAT JOB! Though, I feel the need for justice, so in my mind I gave it to that jerk. Lol. You did this piece brilliantly! Keep up the great work!
oh, my god. it just brought me to tears. imagine the love of your life dying, the pain they must have felt when it was time to say goodbye. that's what this made me feel. pain, love, a lifetime of love and the sorrow of saying goodbye. i thought this was a beautiful description of the most painful moment of two lives.
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