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Review of Glass Rose  Open in new Window.
Review by KC Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
A great poem. Definetly one of my favourites on the site. The imagery is great, very discriptive.

The only negative I saw was in this line

"For the only one for me is made of glass."

The word For seemed unnesscary to me, and broke up the flow. I would suggest you remove it, but if not, it was still outstanding.

P.S: sorry for any poor spelling, it's late here
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Review of Down the Drain  Open in new Window.
Review by KC Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Positive:

Interesting topic to choose, but a great allegory to illistrate the bond between a mother and daughter. Very smooth ending, it brought out a smile, a little humorous.

Negative:
Nothing.

I liked the point where she plays with her sister, very heartwarming I suppose you could say.
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Review of The Journey  Open in new Window.
Review by KC Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I liked this. It feels to me almost as if they are entering heaven, though you may not have meant it that way. The part where Samantha is pulled into the storm is the personification of Hell, becuase of her apparent lying. Anyways, that's my take on it. Great story, I liked the way you structured the sentences and the descriptions that were used.
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