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I look for how well the story or poem flows and if there are things out of place. I also check for grammar and spelling errors.
Favorite Genres
Sci-fi, Fantasy, Speculative Fiction
I will not review...
Anything above GC.
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Review of Mister  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Great details! A stranger on the street who doesn't want to be a stranger. It shows him to be a gentleman. The speaker and him don't know each others names but willing to give it away to each other as well as to go on a date. Voice is smooth and natural. Characters is realistic and believable. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Great humor throughout the poem! It started out as tiny steps and blossomed into a career. The little one got into stories instead of poems. That job is almost 24/7. Good message to poets: just write. Rules can come later. Don't worry about what others think. Rules is important too. Voice is smooth and natural. Characters is realistic and believable. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!


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Review of Your Hawkeye  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Great details! The message of loves shines through. Perfect timing with the inclusion of Hawkeye. The feeling of love can be all of these things. The use of color and boldness works out really well too. Voice is smooth and natural. Characteristics is believable and realistic. No spelling and grammar errors found. It all blends in real well. The use of rhythm works. Good job and keep up the good work!


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Great details! A group of men hangs out at a tavern gambling and the gambler keeps on winning every time. They weren't serious about gambling. Then it jumps to afterwards and there was a showdown on the road. Then the cowboy left the place to do singing elsewhere. Voice is smooth and natural. The 3rd person POV works great. I have a suggestion for the middle part you could use {indent} to make those paragraphs easier to read. Characters is believable and realistic. They kept true to their nature and personality. One punctuation suggestion but no spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!

a man with a brown scarf and a scar, Suggestion: scar.


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Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Great poem! It goes along with the lyrics too. Speaking of love far away and not meant for each other. A longing that is impossible to fulfill. Memories is vivid and enjoyable. The contest asks for a max of 40 lines so you are safe. Voice is smooth and natural. Characters is realistic and believable. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!


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Review of Talking  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Great details! The suspense of what needed to be talked about built up until it was finally said: her cat died. This lead to best friends and a cat sanctuary. A happy ending from a sad event. Voice is smooth and natural. Characters is realistic and believable. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!


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Review of Loyalty  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Great use of show! Bronwyn had to decide between her mother and her husband and that was a tough choice for her to make. In the end she chose her mother over her husband. His ignorance cost him. Voice is natural and smooth. Characters is believable and realistic. No prompt needed for this story. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!


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Review of At last life won!  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Great details about the bulbuls! These tiny birds are brave to nest in the neighbor's house. Some dangers presented itself and the birds took action. Finally the chicks grew up and flew over playfully. Quite an adventure for them and you. They rewarded you handsomely. Voice is smooth and natural. Characters is believable and realistic. I suggest indenting the paragraphs. {indent} No spelling or grammar found. Good job and keep up the good work!


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Great details showing love and forgiveness in a Christian life. It shows how important God and Jesus is. Showing with details is a strength here. I especially liked the beginning. Voice is smooth and natural. Characteristics is realistic and believable. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Great details! The personality of young and naive is nothing compared to the personality the poet sees and thinks of you. A sweet ending. I liked all of it. Voice is smooth and natural. Characteristics is realistic and believable. Free verse works out really well. No grammar or spelling errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Great details! The person showed hope in the light of a flower. The flower worried about that person. Great personalities! Miracles can happen through one simple act. The Cornish Sonnet is followed closely. It fits the prompt in my contest. Voice is smooth and natural. Characters is believable and realistic. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!


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Review of Haiku  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
So few words express your frustration with the relationship with your sister! Great details! This kind of betrayal would never be seen coming in your direction. It is hollow yet filled with upset. The haiku form fits perfectly. Though haikus are about nature. All stanzas convey one them and that is of betrayal. Voice is smooth and natural. Characters is believable and realistic. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!


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Review of Belgian Waffles  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Great details! I enjoyed the showing of the flavor of the meal and didn't like the interruptions the other couple made while at it. That would be my favorite meal as well. For breakfast. I wouldn't be able to eat all of it either if there was such a commotion. Voice was smooth and natural. Characters is believable and realistic. No spelling or grammar errors found. What a great short story and I'm sure it fits the prompt as well. Good job and keep up the great work!


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Good quote! Short and simple. Do you know who said it? It would help to add that if there is anyone in particular or from a book or movie. This looks like it would make a nice list of quotes that would be an inspiration. Don't give up on it. 2018 is a long time ago that you started this item. Good job and keep up the good work!


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Review of Invalid Item  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (1.0)
One star it is! Such a great poem. The light of the love goes brightly yet the speaker still goes on for the ride. Never once faltering from who they are. Great details in so few words! Voice is smooth and natural. Characters is believable and realistic. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!


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Rated: E | (5.0)
This reads like lyrics to a song. Great choice of words to use! It conveys you doing hobbies and yet searching for the true love of your life at the same time. Distance is between you but yet you never stop searching. You continue to do your hobbies and entertain others for a living. Voice is smooth and natural. Characteristics is believable and realistic. I didn't try singing it to any tune but I'm sure you know best. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Great details in so few words! Each stanza consists of one thought played about in unison. Learning, being wise, playtime, and success are all the topics it covers. Sometimes we are not so wise, that is true. Voice is natural and realistic. Characters is realistic and believable. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Either way would work- this looks like it will make an awesome MB. *Smile* Great idea! I love the pictures. SMs can make it possible and still look great. The heart one I love even more but still rank them the same: awesome. I'm okay with the results either way. Looks like there is a tie right now. Me and someone else. More votes are needed. Hopefully you get them. Great choice and awesome idea! It is pleasant when these kind of things happen. Good job and keep up the good work!

No suggestions, keep it as is and make it!
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Review of Burglar  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Great details! This story was quick and easy to read. The mysterious intruder from the beginning remained a mystery until the end when the police came and discovered it was a cat causing all the commotion. The characters fell in love with the cat and decided to raise the cat themselves. I love it. Voice is smooth and natural. Characters is believable and realistic. (If I didn't know any better than it was a cat I might do the same myself!) No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!


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Review of Losing You  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Lovely details about a love that was never meant to be. It's filled with a loss and sadness as it remembers the day the speaker met their love. A love that just wasn't meant to be. Voice is smooth and natural. Characteristics is realistic and believable. A loss on love that hurt deep inside for a long time. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!


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Review of Music Notes  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Great entry! Your love for music really shines through. It is hard when you are limited to what you could listen too. I like Contemporary Rock. Each song does have a theme in general. You learned the hard way. I was never limited like you were but did had main exposure being the radio too. I'm glad you find music to be a hobby. It's an inspiration. Voice is smooth and natural. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!


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Review of Voices  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem certainly deserves the third place. Congrats! Great details! The voices have a nature of its own. Both from the inside and from nature. They call out to do things, experience the outside world. Persistent and everyday thing. Voice is smooth and natural. Characteristics is believable and realistic. No spelling or grammar errors found. Great poem! Good job and keep up the good work!


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Great details! The feeling of love can be so amazing and powerful, enough to keep you happy for the rest of your days. I think it shows description of what love is beautifully. Voice is natural and smooth. Characters is believable and realistic. Characterization of love also believable and realistic. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!


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Review of Fallen Fawn  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Great details! Using the words like a story to tell of the hunter hunting down the deer and the regret he felt after looking into the deer's eyes. Just a fawn. No meat or trophy to be hung or anything. This is a powerful change in personality. Voice is natural and smooth. Characters is believable and realistic. No spelling or grammar errors found. Great poem! Good job and keep up the good work!


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Review of You  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Great details about how you felt in love with a man yet that man just wasn't meant to be yours. You list all the things showing how you were in love but end it with a twist- just wasn't meant to be. These are things you felt throughout your time with him. Voice is smooth and natural. Characters is believable and realistic. No spelling or grammar errors found. I enjoyed it even though there was the heartbreaking twist at the end of it. Good job and keep up the good work!


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