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I look for how well the story or poem flows and if there are things out of place. I also check for grammar and spelling errors.
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Sci-fi, Fantasy, Speculative Fiction
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Anything above GC.
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Review of Music Notes  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Great entry! Your love for music really shines through. It is hard when you are limited to what you could listen too. I like Contemporary Rock. Each song does have a theme in general. You learned the hard way. I was never limited like you were but did had main exposure being the radio too. I'm glad you find music to be a hobby. It's an inspiration. Voice is smooth and natural. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!


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Review of Voices  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem certainly deserves the third place. Congrats! Great details! The voices have a nature of its own. Both from the inside and from nature. They call out to do things, experience the outside world. Persistent and everyday thing. Voice is smooth and natural. Characteristics is believable and realistic. No spelling or grammar errors found. Great poem! Good job and keep up the good work!


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Great details! The feeling of love can be so amazing and powerful, enough to keep you happy for the rest of your days. I think it shows description of what love is beautifully. Voice is natural and smooth. Characters is believable and realistic. Characterization of love also believable and realistic. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!


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Review of Fallen Fawn  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Great details! Using the words like a story to tell of the hunter hunting down the deer and the regret he felt after looking into the deer's eyes. Just a fawn. No meat or trophy to be hung or anything. This is a powerful change in personality. Voice is natural and smooth. Characters is believable and realistic. No spelling or grammar errors found. Great poem! Good job and keep up the good work!


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Review of You  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Great details about how you felt in love with a man yet that man just wasn't meant to be yours. You list all the things showing how you were in love but end it with a twist- just wasn't meant to be. These are things you felt throughout your time with him. Voice is smooth and natural. Characters is believable and realistic. No spelling or grammar errors found. I enjoyed it even though there was the heartbreaking twist at the end of it. Good job and keep up the good work!


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Review of The Other Mother  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Great details! Nazia works hard for a child she didn't give birth too. The struggles of being a single mom to that child is great since the society believes a mother has to give birth to that child. She would be a mother to her niece. Voice is natural and smooth. Characters is believable and realistic. All suggestions are just suggestions I found and you can do whatever pleases you. I enjoyed this story. Good job and keep up the good work!

"Even the 15-minute-walk to the cafseemed like a real chore..." Suggestion: cafe seemed I think, or caf seemed as that seems to be a consistent spelling

"You're an hour late!" Suggestion: Add " behind the !

Suggestion: First paragraph is okay. Indent or give a space in between paragraphs for consistency.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
8 rounds 9 winners. This sounds like an interesting review contest. Not much other details are known. Seems like the contest was deleted. Invalid item. Hope everyone had fun and was well worth the ride. Winners of grand prize was clear and concise. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!


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Review of Quarrel  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Simple and beautiful! Though quarrels can get nasty this one seems to go to the beyond. It starts out lightly and then digs deeper. I think the form is followed. The prompt is followed too. Voice is smooth and natural. Told from the person who doesn't want to quarrel yet it's about a quarrel. Characteristics is believable and realistic. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Great details in so few words. The stanza about music I enjoyed the most but all of it was good. The rhythm matched beautifully and I can tell it worked with per stanza. I don't know if this is free form or a style, but could be entered into a contest. Voice is natural and smooth. Character is believable and realistic. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Great details! The color you wanted to get was not the color you received. Through troubles and sorrows with your happy life, you found it was just not meant to be. Voice is smooth and natural. The sad tone filled throughout the poem and ended well. The show not tell came through perfectly. Characters is realistic and believable. The lie filled your life in a way that it was just not meant to be. No spelling or grammar error found. Good job and keep up the good work.


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Review of Right To Have Fun  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is an interesting poem. It takes the name of the singer and makes a poem detailing what the singer was doing in a particular song. Great details! Sounds like a place to dance and have fun all night long though I prefer to sit and watch. Voice is smooth and natural. Characters is believable and realistic. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!


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Review of Salvation  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I think the Cinquain is followed thoroughly. The poem is simple yet powerful. It speaks of just one thing: Jesus' death on the cross. The theme is salvation for mankind. This would be perfect for Easter. Great details! Voice is smooth and natural. Characters is believable and realistic. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!


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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Fits the prompt perfectly, this magical store is one place I would love to go and spend my cash on magical items. Ones I can experiment with and maybe even summon a magical creature. Its wonders is eye catching and the ad is perfectly timed well. I fall asleep easily but all the details are there, just the right amount. I would love to win the rare cloak of invisibility for example. Awesome prizes! This is one store I won't regret. Voice is smooth and natural. No characters since it's about a store but the store is realistic and believable. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!

Found on Random read and review. I enjoyed this ad story very much!


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Review of My Life  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This lyric poem is different and unique. Words are few but details are great! It shows your life is empty yet you search for true love to come forward. There is hope in the emptiness. Yet you suffered many times over living. Voice is natural and smooth. Character is believable and realistic. Free verse works great with this lyric poem. It tells a story about your life vividly. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!


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Review of The Silent Owl  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Great details! Just a few words that tells a story about the silent owl says it all. The owl hunts in the night (shown not told). Its silence gives it an advantage over its prey on the ground. The owl is victorious over its prey. Voice is natural and smooth. The prompt is followed. The use of the title in the poem works out perfectly. Animals is realistic and believable. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!


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Review of Ghost Myself  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Great details! The feeling of coming and going is hard and the things that was revealed to you maybe of importance too. Truth or lie we don't know. The ghost went away so you decided to ghost yourself instead. Voice is smooth and natural. Characters are believable and realistic. The coming and going took a toll on yourself. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Great details! Everything is factual and gives insight to the veterans or those who served in the war has died. It starts from the beginning until just now. Including a situation where the government had to buy the land. There is information in here that I didn't know about. Fits the prompt perfectly well. Voice is smooth and natural. Characteristics is realistic and believable. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!


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Review of Almost Silence  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Great details! The fear can really catch up to the old man. Even if it's in an almost peaceful setting. Voice is smooth and consistent. The rhyme pattern works out well along with the story this poem tells. Characteristics is realistic and believable. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!


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Review of Dramatis Personae  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Great work! This has potential world building for a novel. Each name fits its location. Not all might be used but each of them are important per location. I can see them mixing and mingling with one another. I don't think voice and characterization is the focus here. It's just a list to look at. Good job and keep up the good work!

Names are spelled your way so I'm not judging spelling and grammar here.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a funny poem. Great details! It implies a tragic event occurred in delivering the cake. The cake was too tall. Croissants should have been delivered instead. Great use of imagery in so few words. It's nice to see the previous version too. Voice is smooth and natural. Characters are believable and realistic. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the great work!


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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a tragic story about a brother who got left out of everything even when he helped to save his mother. Great details! The use of POV works very well for the brother who got left out. His loneliness and frustration comes through as he detailed the incidents. Voice is smooth and natural. Characters is believable and realistic. No grammar or spelling errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!


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Review of Love Clouds  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Cool poem! Great details in so few words. It describes love like a cloud. Sometimes it's there for all to see and other times it disappears like the cloud blown away by the wind or the cloud just fading away. Voice is natural and smooth. Characteristics is believable No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!


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Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)
You stayed true to the prompt and wrote what the song felt for you. It is a different kind of music video than what I'm used to too. I feel it does have an upbeat tone. Looking forward to the future even when the present isn't going well. My suggestion is just a link to the note so someone would know what music video you're talking about. Good observations. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!


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Review of ADHD  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Great details! The person recognized the poem is long yet can't stop speaking about what they view despite different opinions. They asked their parents, siblings, and peers to get the same answers. One way or another it's just them being them. Voice is natural and smooth. Character is believable and realistic. I enjoyed the voice. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work.


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Review of Mayfly  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a cute little poem. The Mayfly is a living, breathing critter that flies in the sky. It would be a fantastic watch. Glad you put this poem back up. It's an enjoyment to read. Great details. Voice is smooth and natural. Characteristics is believable and realistic. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work.


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