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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Very good story. I enjoyed reading it. I'm glad Jack decided to start doing better. I wish some kids i know would make that decision.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this. Hope your computer problems are fixed soon!
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I like this story. It reminds me of today..the way we totally ignore taking care of our planet.

Keep writing Dianne
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this poem. It is so true.

Keep writing
Dianne
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Rated: E | (5.0)
They really are like that! Love the story.
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Review of NURSERY RHYMES  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I liked the story. Are you going to make it longer? I think it would make a good detective story. Keep writing.
Dianne
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Review of Winter  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
A very good poem.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Very funny made me laugh today and I needed that. Thanks!
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
This was very interesting and written very well.
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Review of I am the heart  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is so good! Reminds me of my husband..who is in nursing home with dementia and does not remember me. Good work. Keep writing
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Review of Mosquito  Open in new Window.
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Another pandimic started.
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Review of Windows  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Makes you not want to look at windows. Very good story.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is lovely. Well written..I enjoyed very much.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I think this was a great story. I hope you won.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Made me hungry!!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I really like this! Prayers are the best thing we can do. He is always there to help and protect us.

Good job.
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Review of Why?  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Love it! My favorite question as a kid was "why". Aggravated a lot of people.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is really good. I suppose it is a chain but of love.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A very good poem perhaps a little sad due to the last line.
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Review of The Tire Swing  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a wonderful story! I have one thing..in the first paragraph you have Rebecca as 17 years old. She dosen't sound 17 in your story. I love your story.
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Review of The Lone Survivor  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Good story I like aliens.
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Review of Ol' Fat Charlie  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Wow..not how I expected it to end. Good story..held mt attention to the end!
Dianne
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed this chapter. I'm going to go back and read the beginning. I think you're doing a great job writing.
Dianne
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Review of Nothing But Dirt  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is beautiful!

Keep Believing, Keep Writing
Dianne
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Review of Halloween 1988  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
That was great! I bet they still remember that night!
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