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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
What a lovely short story! The sense of brevity and doom is palpable from the start.

There was only one thing that I wasn't sure about from the reading. Was Erasmus the one responsible for setting the bombs? I assume so, and that his panic at someone finding the blueprints was because he was planning on getting away clean after the bombs went off. And fate intervened.

I like it a lot.

P.S. One editing note. The word "spot" is missing from "...an excellent blind from which to observe people strolling by..."


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