Only you can think this way, otters and fishes are like eagles in water! So what happens when the eagles actually devour those fishes? The fishes would swim deeper into the water to avoid the predators? I loved reading this, as always!
I am a teacher myself, and I was intrigued to read this. I could completely relate to the sentiments here, students actually become our children while we teach. I’m glad you didn’t give up when you felt like, that would actually be depressing for you.
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I love the narrator’s way of speaking here, nice and sweet with a rural touch in it. I wish you’d describe the nature around a little more, though, felt like the picture was incomplete. I’d like to read a lot more of this. And what happened to the miners? Did they finally find silver?
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Your entry kinda set me thinking. My Mom’s over 70, and Dad’s over 80, and I’d never want to leave their side, come what may. Obviously, this experience might have been awkward for you, but didn’t you like it when you got to see your girl? I like the way you incorporated the past experience with the present.
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Hey Bro,
Why does red always have to be the angry one? I adore all the personalities you’ve given all the colors. But I think white should have shone above all, instead of being shy. I’m glad finally all the colors could work together to paint a masterpiece.
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All well with you? How come I didn’t notice this before? It’s such a delightful little tale, took all my footache away! How is Anne turning out to be, now? More confident, compassionate? Or naughty?
This story just made my day. You keep writing, while I’ll keep flying into your port to read.
Hey there,
Reviewing "Bard's Hall Blog Contest June 2025 - Entry #3" I like the way you talk about being a Potterhead, I’m sure many other potter fans feel the same too. Gifting happiness the way you did, requires a good and Jolly heart, and I’m sure you have such a heart. What other things do you do for or about Harry Potter?
Hello there, big brother Noisy Wren
Finally I finished reading this, and this is really one of my favorite book items here on WDC so far. Every single entry put a smile on my face. Noisy might be small in size, but he’s a courageous little bird, and I love the fact that he finally won the contest.
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Happy account anniversary! So, internet addiction can turn us so sick, right? I feel sorry for nurse Legly here, she seems genuinely concerned about her patients, which is a rare quality. I wonder how the doctor treated the patients, though? What was the antidote?
Hey Sonali,
I was looking for something to read and review in your port, and thanks to "I Write in 2025" and "The Bard's Hall Contest" , I landed on this one. You seem to have many other writers in your family, is that so? You seem to have a lot of fun going to meet ups.
Keep writing, while I keep reading!
Hi there,
I was looking for something to read and the Random Review gave me this. I agree with the lines here, sometimes life throws lemons at us and we go:”Why me?”
This poem shows us hope, tells us to take life one step at a time. I like your choice of words and the format, the font choice is easy on the eyes.
Write on!
Hi there,
First of all, welcome to WDC! I Completely agree with most of your points here, but if love wasn’t a good thing, maybe life would lose all its colors, right? We can’t control others minds, but we can control ours, and we require love to give us a reason to live.
Keep writing!
Hello there,
Happy WDC anniversary.
This is a very short poem, but I really like the sentiments expressed through this. I could almost visualize the US flag while reading. Veterans should never be forgotten, that’s like forgetting your own country.
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Hi there,
I was looking for something to read, and landed on this. I can completely relate to this, as I'm in a similar situation as the woman here, the reason why I keep running away from marriage. I wonder who Christopher was? an angel in disguise maybe? I really enjoyed the ending here.
keep writing!
Hi there,
I love the combination of memories and the sound of the camera going click! Seemed like I could hear the sound as I read. I was wondering why the father-son bond was so bitter? The story has a nice flow, quite easy to follow. Thank you for the happy ending there.
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Hi there,
I came humming into your port to find a good read, and landed on this one. I like this nice, flowing tale. And does age really matter when it comes down to love? I love the fact that she didn’t feel odd when he came in a wheelchair. The person matters, not the appearance.
Happy account anniversary, write on!
Hi there,
The random review generated this item for me. I liked reading about your grandparents. The only grandparent I got was my maternal grandma, all others passed away before I was born.
This is a useful item, really, got to learn about two different simple cake recipes thanks to you. Keep writing!
Hi there,
I have a soft corner for fur-babies, hence your title dragged me in. I wish you’d describe Stubby a little more, I’d love to know what he/she looked like. What actually happened? Old age complications or something else? I can hear your longing for your pet in your words. Hope stubby is having fun in cat heaven.
Keep writing, Happy account anniversary
Hi there,
Yes, heartbreaks can be horrible. You could have mentioned in your poem why she left you? In the poem she seems so understanding, so comforting, I like the fact that you appreciate the happy moments spent with her, not many people can do that.
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Hiya, me humming again,
I love the way you describe nature. It’s like you are painting a clear picture for me to visualize the scene. I’ve never been to the place you live, so thank you for helping me travel through the words. I’d love to meet Shelly though, it seems like she just came and went away like a comet.
Keep writing, brother
Hi there, friend,
Your Military items came up on my newsfeed, so I wanted to try one out. This one’s a proper rhyming poem, with a nice rhythm too. I wonder what I’d say if someone handed me a cold gun, saying I’m gonna be famous one day. In this poem it looks like the soldier didn’t want to be in the military in the first place. And did you really have to kill this person in the end? I wish he’d live. There are thousands of people who are actually forced to serve in the army even if they don’t want to. This poem was both pleasant and sad to read at once.
Keep writing!
Hi,
I didn’t quite understand your story fully. What was happening here? Some friends were gossiping about some other friend for no reason, is that all? And I did enjoy reading the conversations, felt like I was there somewhere too, talking with them.
I’m listening to the rain as I write this. The details of the storm is so vivid, I felt as if I was walking inside the forest myself. I wonder what I’d do if caught in such a situation, maybe my phobias would kick in. I like the part where you mention the deer most, it shows there were other forms of life around with the man.
Keep writing!
Hello brother,
I came back humming into your port. And yes, “whatever” slaps me the same way it slaps you! Either whatever or “I am bad.” I believe that “whatever” is enough to shut out the door to any relationship. People forget that it’s hard to make, easy to break, but even harder to mend. People just don’t want to do the harder work.
Hello there,
Happy account anniversary. I flew into your port to read something, and landed on this.
This looks like such a sad tale of a daddy-daughter bond. Why does it always have to be that way? Can’t the sweet connection remain intact even after marriage?
I was in pain, so thanks for soothing me with this. Though it’s quite long, every word is worth it.
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