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Review of Saving My Pups  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
WOW that was good. It took me a minute to realize you were writing it from the mother dogs point of view but it it very strong with feelings.
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Review of Ah, Man...  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
You have a lot of good ideas and I like the piece. Some of the lines are a bit wordy. I would suggest just rewrite and rewriting and smoothing out the bumps.
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