I enjoyed your poem very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The piece uses its length well to convey its subject clearly to the readers. There's no rhyme scheme, but that doesn't impede the poem's overall flow. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written poem.
I enjoyed your short story very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The piece uses its length well to tell a clear story to the readers in under 1000 words. The humor and tone were consistent throughout. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written story.
I enjoyed your poem very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The piece uses its length well to convey its subject to the readers. I particularly enjoyed how you compared the trees' growth to other things growing. This supports the poem's overall flow. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written poem.
I enjoyed your short story very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The characters are interesting and distinct. The prompt was used well to create a strong foundation for the piece to build on. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written story.
I enjoyed your short story very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The characters were clear and distinct. The story uses its length well to convey the subject to the readers. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written short story.
I enjoyed your poem very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The rhyme scheme was consistent and supports the piece's overall in flow. The poem uses its length well to convey its subject to the readers. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written poem.
I enjoyed your flash fiction story very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The characters are distinct and clear. The prompt is well-used and creates a solid foundation. There are no major errors that I noticed. The only suggestion I have would be to either indent the paragraphs or put a space between them. This would improve readability. Overall, a well-written story.
I enjoyed your short piece very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The piece uses its length well to convey its subject to the readers. There were only two small things I noticed. First, the title says "Dairy" when it reads like it should be "Diary". Also, there should probably be a space between the sixth and seventh paragraphs. Overall, a well-written piece.
I enjoyed your prose poem very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The piece uses its length well to convey its subject to the readers. I particularly enjoyed conversational tone the poem has. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written poem.
I enjoyed your poem very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The tone remains consistent throughout. The piece uses its length well to convey its subject to the readers in an understandable manner. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written poem.
I enjoyed your short story very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The characters were interesting and distinct. There were no major errors that I noticed. The only small thing I noticed is with the line: The God once more took Steven by his sweater and pulled him close. There's a quotation mark at the beginning of the sentence that shouldn't be there. Overall, a well-written story.
I enjoyed your essay very much. It's well-written, cohesive, and informative. I particularly enjoyed how you separated everything into sections. This made it easy to follow for the readers and supported the piece's overall flow. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written, informative essay.
I enjoyed your poem very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The piece uses its length well to convey its subject to the readers. There's no rhyme scheme, but that doesn't detract from the poem or impede its flow. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written poem.
I enjoyed your first chapter very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The characters were interesting and distinct. There were no major errors that I noticed. The only suggestion I have would be to divide the lines into proper paragraphs. This would improve the piece's readability. Overall, a well-written beginning.
I enjoyed your short story very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The characters are clear and distinct. The humor is sprinkled well throughout. The story uses its length well to tell a full story in only 300 words. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written story.
I enjoyed your short story very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The characters were clear and distinct. The plot was well-set up and executed. There were no major errors that I noticed. I only have two suggestions. The first would be to organize lines into proper paragraphs. This would improve the story's flow. The second would be to lengthen the story as this would give you more room to build the atmosphere. These are just suggestions, and you don't have to use them if they don't fit. Overall, a well-written story.
I enjoyed your poem very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The piece uses its length well to convey its subject to the readers. I particularly enjoyed how you formatted the poem. It helps express the frustration the narrator feels. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written poem.
I enjoyed your short story very much. It's well-written and cohesive. It uses its length well to convey the subject to the readers. The plot is well set up and executed. The theme is clearly expressed. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written story.
I enjoyed your poems very much. They're well-written and cohesive. The rhyme schemes are consistent and support the flow of both pieces. The poems use their length well to express their subjects to the readers. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, two well-written poems.
I enjoyed your poem very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The rhyme scheme is solid and supports the poem's overall flow. I particularly enjoyed the poetry form. It's an interesting form that's well-executed. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written poem.
I enjoyed your poem very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The piece uses its length well to convey its subject to the readers. There's no rhyme scheme, but that doesn't detract from the piece or impede the poem's overall flow. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written poem.
I enjoyed your poem very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The rhyme scheme is solid and consistent, which supports the piece's overall flow. The poem uses its length well to convey its subject to the readers. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written poem.
I enjoyed your poem very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The piece uses its length and format well to convey its subject to the readers. There's no rhyme scheme, but that doesn't detract from the piece or impede its flow. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written poem.
I enjoyed your poem very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The poem uses its length well to convey its subject to the readers. The descriptions create distinct images for the readers. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written poem.
I enjoyed your poem very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The piece uses its length well to convey its subject to the readers while taking them on a journey through oddly named towns. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written poem.
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