I enjoyed your short story very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The characters are clear, interesting and distinct. The plot flows well. the mystery is well-set up and the twists were well-executed. The only error I noticed was at the end, during the confrontation between the three characters. There are a couple points were Nick and Tom get switched. Otherwise, there were no major errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written short story.
I enjoyed your non-fiction piece very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The piece uses its length well to convey its subject clearly to the readers while also being informative. There were no errors that I noticed. The only suggestion I have would be to expand the piece, as this would give you more room to work with. Overall, a well-written non-fiction work.
I enjoyed your short story. It's well-written and cohesive. The characters were clear and distinct. The piece uses its length well to convey its subject clearly to the readers. The worldbuilding is solid and well-executed. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written story.
I enjoyed your article very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The piece uses its length well to convey its subject clearly to the readers. There were no major errors that I noticed. The only small thing I noticed was in the paragraph that mentions Mr. Rogers having been in the service. In the second sentence, the word "way" should be the word "was". Overall, a well-written article.
I enjoyed your short story very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The characters are clear, interesting and distinct. The piece uses its length well to convey its subject to the readers. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written short story.
I enjoyed your first chapter very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The main character is interesting and distinct. The worldbuilding is interesting and well-sprinkled throughout without feeling like an info-dump. There were no major errors, only a couple minor things. When Shirley goes to read the briefing, the sentence "Ah,yes" has a quotation mark in front of it, but not anywhere else in the paragraph, so it looks out of place. Also, the sentence where Shirley sits down at her desk with the briefing file cuts off early. The last suggestion I have would be to take some of the smaller paragraphs, the ones that are a sentence or two long, and merge them into longer paragraphs. However, this is only a suggestion and you a free to disregard it. Overall, a well-written chapter.
I enjoyed your poem very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The piece uses its length well to convey its subject clearly to the readers. The rhyme scheme is solid and consistent, supporting the poem's flow. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written poem.
I enjoyed your story very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The piece uses its length well to convey its subject clearly to the readers. The descriptions create distinct, vivid images that allow readers to follow the trip. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written story.
I enjoyed your poem very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The piece uses its length well to convey its subject clearly to the readers. There's no rhyme scheme, but that doesn't impede the poem's overall flow. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written poem.
I enjoyed your poem very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The rhyme scheme is solid and consistent which supports the poem's overall flow. The piece uses its length well to convey its subject to the readers and capture the spirit of the season. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written poem.
I enjoyed your poem very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The piece uses its length well to convey its subject to the readers. I enjoyed how each stanza visits a different place to sit. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written poem.
I enjoyed your poem very much. It's well-written and cohesive with a consistent tone. The piece uses its length well to convey its subject to the readers in a single stanza. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written poem.
I enjoyed your short story. It's well-written and cohesive. The characters are clear and distinct. The piece uses its length well to convey its subject to the readers. There were no major errors that I noticed. The main suggestion I have would be to indent the paragraphs, as this would support readability. The only other suggestion I have would be to lengthen the story some, as this would give you a bit more room to work with. However, these are merely suggestions. Overall, a well-written story with potential.
I enjoyed your short story very much. Lt's well-written and cohesive. The characters are clear and distinct. The piece uses its length well to convey its subject clearly to the readers. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written story.
I enjoyed your short story very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The piece uses its length well to convey its subject clearly to the readers and does it in under six hundred words. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written story.
I enjoyed your flash fiction story very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The piece uses its length well to convey its subject clearly to the readers in an understandable manner. There were no major errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written story.
I enjoyed your poem very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The piece uses its length well to convey its subject to its readers. There's no rhyme scheme, but that doesn't detract from the piece or impede its flow. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written poem.
I enjoyed your short story very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The characters were clear and distinct. The worldbuilding was solid and sprinkled well throughout, without being an infodump. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written story.
I enjoyed your poem very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The piece uses its length well to convey its subject clearly to the readers. There's no rhyme scheme, but that doesn't detract from the piece or impede its flow. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written poem.
I enjoyed your short story very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The characters are clear and distinct. The plot was solid and well-executed. The piece maintains a consistent tone throughout. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written story.
I enjoyed your short editorial very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The piece uses its length well to convey its subject to the readers. The editorial maintains its tone consistently throughout. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written editorial.
I enjoyed your short story very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The characters are clear and distinct. The characters are clear and distinct. The piece uses its length well to convey its subject to the readers. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written story.
I enjoyed your poem very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The piece uses its length well to convey its subject to the readers. The poem flows well and maintains a consistent tone throughout. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written poem.
I enjoyed your short story very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The piece uses its length well to convey its subject to the readers in under five hundred words and with minimal dialogue. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written story.
I enjoyed your short story very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The characters are clear and distinct. The piece uses its length well to convey its subject clearly to the readers. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written story.
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