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Review by Spectre Lives Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I had to check your post. Yours is far more superior to my own. Well thought out. The humor is well executed.
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Review by Spectre Lives Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Wow, I have such an appreciation on how this story was constructed. You've obviously spent some time editing it as I could find nary a coma out of place, not that punctuation is my strong point. The blend of human and ethereal characters meshed well with the message. And the message is strong.
That's the good stuff, by rights I should offer some critique as well. The story was not long enough...I wanted more. = -}
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