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Review by Loyd Gardner Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
The bar scene was realistically written and made Gloria into a sympathetic character that I care about. Great character development.
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Review by Loyd Gardner Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Leanne's journey from her youth where she believed in her psychic abilities to getting older where she rationalized them until she ran into the real thing was logical and well crafted. I enjoyed it.
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Review by Loyd Gardner Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This is a great chapter and gives lots of foreshadowing for what is to come. The ghosts needing companions and replacements is a good storyline.
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Review by Loyd Gardner Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Sharp, crisp and began and ended with lines about hell. Tight writing. Well done.
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Review by Loyd Gardner Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I was afraid that Peno was going to choose to stay and then freeze to death. I much prefer your ending about accepting temporary change in the hopes of long-term happiness. Good poem.

Bala sem se, da se bo Peno odločil ostati in nato zamrzniti do smrti. Veliko raje imam vaš konec glede sprejemanja začasnih sprememb v upanju na dolgoročno srečo. Dobra pesem.
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Review by Loyd Gardner Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I love it when Christians show the effort behind the smile. Jesus is not a magic word that we say and then we cease being impacted by depression, despair, struggles, problems, and battles with our own inherent desire to do what we want. This is real and I resonate with it. Thank you.
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Review by Loyd Gardner Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Yeesh. Nightmares tonight! Creepy good story.
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Review by Loyd Gardner Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
There are two potential themes here: one, that there is a guiding presence to the universe that interacts with our lives, or two, that we can create the reason for random decisions by being vigilant in our efforts to help others. Wars have been rationalized over the difference between these two themes, but they are both beautiful and can both be derived from the same two paragraphs.

Nicely written.
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Review by Loyd Gardner Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very enjoyable flight of fancy. Impressive how you squeezed Emily's transformation so well into such a short story. I liked it.
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Review of My Favorite Pair  Open in new Window.
Review by Loyd Gardner Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I really liked the last line where you are rooting for your socks.
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Review by Loyd Gardner Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very upbeat message, Nice for a dreary day.
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Review by Loyd Gardner Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A very surprising twist in the middle. I really enjoyed reading this.
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