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Rated: E | (2.0)
this is a great piece except there's a few punctuation errors.I suggest you correct that errors.But overall it is a great piece keep on writing...
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Rated: E | (1.5)
this is a unique poem.You have a flair for words and poetry..
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Rated: 13+ | (2.0)
This is a great story.i hope you will post more chapters soon....
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Rated: E | (3.0)
This is a unique an interesting story.But I would suggest more showing and less telling,Let's see what the character saw at the university other than the weird creatures.expand this piece a little bit.Keep on writing..
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Rated: E | (2.0)
I'm impressed by this poem.You really have a flair for words...keep on writing..
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Rated: E | (3.0)
This is am amazing poem.I think you can become a successful poet someday.I do think people should be more aware of the environment and its inhabitants..
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Rated: E | (3.5)
This piece is amazing.I hope you can give me tips how to write like you..
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