I like this poem, but I think there is alot more you can do with it. I feel like it could have been longer and could have had less words through out the poem. Sometimes less is more! I love the ending very much, but the middle point didn't connect with me, I think because of the short middle part that I didn't know what to make of it. Keep working on it!!
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