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Rated: E | (4.5)
great western story about inheriting a pair of cowboy boots from a famous gunslinger western bandit. I liked the flow, and the general story line. Two formatting issues though mar this story. it would read better if you changed the default fonts to a bigger font and also changed the default line spacing to double-spacing, and if you added an index to each paragraph. you can go to the icons above to do that fairly easily and if you make these changes your readers would appreciate it.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I disagree with your basic premises and your interpretation of the Bible and God's will. However, I applaud you for expressing your point of view in such a comprehensive a matter.in short, we will agree that we disagree.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Great background information on the Bigfoot legend. I am a believer that Bigfoot exist in the Pacific northwest mountains, which are largely unexplored and are big wilderness areas. I believe that we will eventually find Bigfoot and capture one or two and find that they are remnants of the old nenathadrals that someone survive.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
great summary of how to create characters. I like some writers find characters organically. Many of them came to me in a dream, my favorite characters are all somehow related to each other

Sam Adams, who is sort of an Everyman paranormal researcher for the Cosmos Institute
and runs the UFO bar in Berkeley after retirement
Maria Lee his wife, also comes back as a female fatal character, and also appears as Sam's mysterious boss who may be part alien

Mr. Smith a mysterious deep state operative who may be alien

BIg Daddy who is a retired CIA operative who runs the Cosmos Bar in Bangkok

jake Lee friend of Sam Adams from childhood

Salmon Rubinstein owner of a bar in Berkeley


I have other characters that pop up here and there I have used Co-pliot a lot to research names and possible background for characters but will look at your resource list



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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thanks a lot for the detailed discussion of ghosts, and hauntings. I learned a lot aobut ghostlogy from reading this account


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Review of Pele's Heart  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I loved this poem about the volcanos of Hawaii and how you personify the volcano making it come to life well done


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Rated: E | (4.5)
I can relate to this story about a science experiment that went wrong as I am real nerd and my favorite classes growing up were science classes


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Review of Whatchamacallit  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
well I can relate to this poem about having a senior moment as I am almost 70 and have had a few senior moments lately but overal am not too bad off I still am physically fit and mentally sharp


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Review of Eye of the Storm  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)

Great haibun about tornado watchers getting ready to deal with an approaching tornado


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Review of Witness  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)

Damn the trees did it again just jumped up and chased me down damn trees

Damn the trees did it again just jumped up and chased me down damn trees


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Review of This Old House  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A great little poem about living in an old house that is haunted and coming to terms with living with ghosts


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Review of Ashes of Wrath  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)


A great story about wrath and how it can consume and overwhelm people turning everything into hate and fear. Wrath and the desire for revenge has been a constant refrain in the life of Donald Trump a poster child for the so called seven deadly sin


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Review of Snickers  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A nicely done poem about a dog being seperated from his human master and finding another human a witch to take his place. Well done


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Rated: E | (5.0)
a sad and lonely poem about feeling isolated and alone, lost in my thoughts and the past i can relate as I sometimes feel that isolation as I am getting older


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Rated: E | (4.5)
an epic tale of an epic road trip. Well done. Reminded me of my epic road trip across the US in the Spring and summer of 2016, when my wife and I drove across the country twice, hitting 35 states and 10,000 miles


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Rated: E | (4.5)

I liked this story about fairies, leprechauns, and other mystical creatures hiding from humans behind a wall of magic that for some reason had begun to break down, and the potential consequences if it broke down completely. Fortunately for them and us the gnome council was able to restore things, and their existence remains hidden.


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Review of To Learn  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
a great poem about life long quest for knowlege and that starts at birth and continues until one dies. I liked this lines the best

Sculpting his likeness in the past, he longs for eternity.
Probing the future, he ignores the past.
Forever living, forever changing, forever growing, the mind's eye can awaken the universe.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
great poem about trying to play an instrument and failing


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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Great poem about the power of shoes and the joy of making reparing old shoes


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Review of At two  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
great little poem about experiencing life at two years of age when everything is still a wonder to behold and life is filled with possibilities


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Review of Tomorrow  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Tomorrow is so far away,
But that seems like yesterday.
The hours blur in what seems a minute,
I need to slow time down.
Until today I felt I could reach for the stars,
But I’d surely have one by now.
Then a revelation touched my mind,
Brief as it may have been.
It’s time to take the initiative,
To take the reins myself,
The future is mine for the taking.

A good poem about the passage of time and what the future may bring. Like the line today I can reach for the stars


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Review of Paradise?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Nicely done, silly pathya Va poem about being a tourist. I like the comments about bugs. I hate bugs while traveling they bug me so.


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Review of Margins  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
powerful and moving poem about the process of growing up and all that entails. I like the details and the images and language choices. Very vivid poem. I like the flow of the poem. I like the last few stanzas the best as it sums up the mood of the poem.


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Review of The Eagles  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
nicely done poem about watching eagles fish along a river bank. Good descriptive words and setting


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Review of Your Eyes  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
a powerful and moving poem about staring into one's lovers eyes and seeing his or her soul as the eyes are the windows to the soul well done like the last stanza the best


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