Sharpe as a Tack's (julietsharpe) Reviews

Sharpe as a Tack

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23 Public Reviews Given

23 Total Reviews Given

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#4110853

Review of The Second Lily-Chapter One

Review by Sharpe as a Tack

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Spell check

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#4105100

Review of Touching the Hand of Fate (2nd Place)

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

Perfect. Loved it.

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#4105095

Review of The adventure of the little egg

Review by Sharpe as a Tack

Rated: E

| (2.0)

Try separating it into a few separate paragraphs to make it easier to read. Need some major work on spelling and review some grammar.

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#4102628

Review of I Know A Girl

Review by Sharpe as a Tack

Rated: 13+

| (2.5)

I loved how the narrator was talking about herself when I expected it to be some boy who crushes on a girl until it becomes unbearable. Hiding within oneself is a topic hard to reach but you describes it beautifully.

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#4102489

Review of I'll See You Around

Review by Sharpe as a Tack

Rated: E

| (3.5)

This was a gift to the world of poetry. It's a stream line from someone's conscious and I can feel what the narrator feels. I understand his pain and his struggle to let go. The layout/rhyme scheme was creative because it wasn't a constant A/B/A/B or even a A/B/C/B/A it was not perfectly rhyming. Nice Job!

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#4102487

Review of The Journey

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Rated: 13+

| (2.5)

Interesting plot. More information about being in the mysterious boats would add a bit more of a creative aspect but the general idea was good. Elaborate more and elevate your vocabulary.

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#4102484

Review of Promise of Hope

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Rated: E

| (3.0)

This was so inspirational. I have never had family problems like that but they sound difficult and exhausting. You struggle so much yet you still believe God has a plan and that he won't leave you. Your faith is so stron gin the Lord and I admire that.

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#4102294

Review of A Fool Out Of Me

Review by Sharpe as a Tack

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

Wonderful! Loved the metaphors! Genius! I like the double "identity" guy. your vocabulary is on point. I loved it! Do a quick grammar check and it will be perfection. The character build was amazing. A true detectives mind is shown through Lisa. 5 stars.

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#4102292

Review of A New Story

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Rated: 13+

| (4.0)

this story is pretty genius. I love the emotion added from her own missing son.

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#4096290

Review of Listen To The Rain

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

This poem was amazing! You are such a talented writer! This was by far the best poeo I have read on this site!

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#4096288

Review of Mad, Mad Resolutions.

Review by Sharpe as a Tack

Rated: E

| (2.0)

Try changing up your adjectives and adverbs every once in a while. Using the same word multiple times to describe something can bring down the creativity of a story.