You do have a very good point, all though I am going to share a link with you which is about why those people don't wear masks. Many are just lazy and self-centered but some it brings back terrible abusive memories. https://www.writerscafe.org/writing/houghc/2396247...
Hmm, this is a clever poem but the title may make readers be turned off especially during our current times. It could be considered as racial profiling.
Hmm, A very neat concept. I really like your word choices on the last line. On the other hand, it is missing some key-rhyming. If you struggle with rhyming (like I do) you can check out this link. https://rhymenow.com/ I hope you have an amazing Thanksgiving and I will be looking forward to reading your future pieces.
WOW! I only read about 50 but geez you are thankful for a lot! Such a great reminder to not take things for granted. Great writing prompt that is super easy to complete! I hope you have an amazing Thanksgiving and eat lots of pumpkin pie and turkey (If you aren't vegetarian lol) I will definitely find myself reading all of this eventually when I have the time.
Awh, as someone who has COPD I totally understand your wife's situation. I recommend talking to a therapist if you are still traumatized by this experience. I hope you are both doing well now!
I like the vision I am 99% positive you had for this poem. Although sadly, I am a bit lost. It may just be me, I'm not sure. But I like the onamonapia you used at the beginning. Overall, a bit of work needed but love the concept!
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