This is a nice story! I like that it's humble and down-to-earth. Also, I'll just BET he'll be working in the same school she is! I really enjoyed this.
Interesting poll! I have taken this test before, but I can never remember what I am. Apparently, I am ENFP. Interesting. What's more interesting is that the jobs recommended for my type are jobs I've done and tend to be quite good at. Also, my type is shared by Bill Cosby and Oprah Winfrey. Pretty good company. This was fun!! All best to you.
Cool! I have lived abroad twice and I have friends from Nepal, India, Japan, Korea, Nigeria, South Africa, Egypt, Russia, Germany, the Netherlands, Sweden, Finland, Great Britain, Ireland, Thailand, Peru, Brazil, Colombia, Venezuela, Argentina, Mexico, Canada, France, Spain, Italy, Australia, and New Zealand. Probably friends from more places than that, actually. I'm very fortunate to have friends from all over the world. Great poll!
Interesting poll. I like that you supplied many different points of view. I have found (not being a christian myself) that many "christians" are very narrow in what they think about Jesus. Don't know if you're a christian or not, but I liked that your poll seemed very open-minded.
The emotion of the child is very painful. Anyone who's been abused can relate to this. The sparseness of the piece makes it even more compelling and begs the question...just what is "daddy" planning to do to the girl? The ending is surprising...didn't see that coming. Nice work.
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