Your answer to that question was very interesting to read. It gave an optimistic point of view to the tragedy of prometheus. I liked the way you explained the relation between the movie and the myth; and it reminded me of Mary Shelley’s Frankenstein or the modern prometheus, which uses the mythological character to make the same analogy!
I absolutely adored your poem! It was exciting to read. The feeling of the appeal of the unknown and the mystery surrounding it all was palpable. That along with the amazing work regarding language use, and the suspenseful flow, made it a thrilling read.
The short sentences which you used to create that sense of time passing quickly, with scarcely any time to think, is beautiful. It coveys a message easy to grasp, yet in doing so doesn’t lose its complexity. Very nice.
Hi! I really enjoyed reading through your poem. The image of the sea is very clear and delightful to read. From the original similes to the intelligent use of adjectives, it makes for a pleasant read. I liked the way you cared for the details in the waves, the sea shore, and so on. It has a nice balance between good technique, and musicality and flow.
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