This is, by far, the most thought out story I think I've come across on this site. Having so many towns thought out, as well as a beginner' Minor League and a veterans Major League, shows you clearly put a lot of time and energy into this.
While this hasn't really taken off yet, I can see a fair bit of potential from the concept. Allowing people to write typical erotica or something more in line with the show itself immediately gives plenty of room for creativity and enjoyment.
Hmm, this is a clever change to the "Book of Reality" idea that goes on through the site. Having the cause be the actual pen instead of the book itself makes for a fun story, while also making it easier to write what's needed.
The limited space for each Membership can lead to people finding they have remarkably little for what they want. So making an interactive where you can add all your stories (virtually) without limit is a clever work around.
Many of these stories being original also allows for more flexibility in what to expect.
With this site so full of kinks and erotica, it's nice to see an interactive based around investigations. Having the World's Greatest Detective journeying the multiverse also allows for Sherlock to face things he's never faced, a recipe for tons of fun.
A fairly basic idea, but one that I like. Giving absolute power to do anything but only the once, a very nice balance between restrictions and no restrictions.
This is, by far, one of my favourite ideas to come out of the Omnipotence trope I've seen on this site.
This was an enjoyable Word Search. I especially love that the words are some very common things found in the Scooby-Doo franchise. I kinda wish you also had "Norville" as a deep cut.
However, I do have to point out one error: Her name is spelt "Velma," not "Vilma."
A decent Madlib, but seems to be more of a first draft. I think that, given time, this could've because something for more fun, or a decent start for a second Madlib later on.
Wherever you are now, I hope that you found happiness and joy. Good luck to you.
This seems to be a somewhat enjoyable read, despite the many years of inactivity. I'm rather saddened from how many of GROUP haven't logged in for a long time, and that only GROUP members can add to this. If it had opened up before the members ceased activity, I'm sure there would've been more fun to be had.
A really nice tribute to the Mystery Dungeon series, but a little too faithful to me. Specifically, I don't see the point of the constant questions to start off with. Then it gets worse when the question lists aren't even fully made.
The idea itself is fun and respectful, but you should've either made all the question chapters first, or done away with them completely.
A surprising balance between too limiting and too overpowered. Changing a single episode of a show can cause a thoughtful domino effect throughout the series, giving a lot of opportunities for fun "What Ifs" without changing the story itself.
However, if you're going to allow sex, I would suggest changing the rating to 18+.
I'll be honest, I wasnt expecting this type of story from the title. Still, it gives a good amount of options.
Choosing to alter anything from a character to the world itself is a pleasant take, as it allows the writers to decide how much of a change they want to make. Bravo.
Dreams can be wierd, but also a good source for creativity and inspiration. As you have shown here.
This is a clever story about shapeshifting. Though, I wonder the reason for including mind control as an option? Regardless, it was a fun inclusion. As was the AU option.
Intresting idea you've come up with. This is clearly the basis for a story you could be thinking of making, giving the structure of how it'll work and what to expect.
If I may make one suggestion? When you make the story, it may be a good idea to link the story so people can go straight to it.
I'm sadly not the best with names, so I asked a friend without giving her the context. When she saw 'Aeryne' she pronounced it exactly as you wanted it. So I'd say that spelling works fine.
Now the team thing is a speciality of mine. While I would need to know why 'Cranium' is the team name, 'Octanium' sounds perfectly fine. Especially when some team names are usually inspired after the members. So I'd say Octanium.
This seems like an intresting idea for a story. The fact you compare this to three anime gives a basic idea of what to expect from the world.
The fact that you created different levels of complexity, as well as explaining what each Badge can do clearly shows that you have a solid grasp of what you want.
Due to my personal history, I'm not the biggest fan of any religion, though I won't berate believers either.
I grew up with some hatred for the Bible, but I have recently come across a Christian with a similar hatred to be, yet with a strong belief in the Bible.
She showed me where I was wrong. Not berating, but with genuine passion and love. While I have no desire to convert, I am very much open to reading the Bible. If for nothing else but to learn my own errors. And this is another example of my own misgivings.
While I would normally say you're looking too deep into a children's show, consistency is important no matter the demographic.
You clearly put a lot of time and effort into this, which shows just how much love the series.
The fact that you explain each rule, then list each time that rule is broken is once. The fact each episode name is in bold is very much appreciated. Very well made.
This is something I wish I saw earlier. A very useful description of what each Item is, as well as what level of Membership is needed to use each Item.
I'll definitely have to remember to come back and check each description before creating an Item.
Well, this is a very handy spreadsheet of ages that I may have to cheat off for an upcoming project.
Jokes aside, this useful to return to when needed.
I was also surprised to learn about Jessie's mum disappearing but their ages make sense. As Meowth confirmed they were doing the dirty deed in the 2nd movie.
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