This is a very sad poem. But, I really like how it flows and that you made a story out of it. The minute I started reading this, I began to see images in my mind of the boy and the girl and then I imagined a man on his knees praying to the Lord beside his wife's sick bed. This is very beautiful. I think this would make a great novel.
When you start playing this game and begin putting the words in the boxes, it's hilarious what the story sounds like. I put in my name, another name which was john, nouns cat and dog, plural noun women, adjectives beautiful, pretty, and ugly, and my container was jar. The funniest part was when President Bush calls me ugly and that I need a cat. Very funny stuff.
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