Hey there! You sent this to me in a review you did on my piece "Far". And I thought it would be great to review it for you.
I decided to read it off of an unbiased mindset. And some things I've noticed is that the flow of the writing is very pleasant. And I love where you have put rhyming words. The one thing that really stood out to me was the line, "So, await my return, when I drag myself from the filth of evil that is begging me to stay". This I feel resonates with me personally, as well as a factor that contributes in everyone's life. That constant tension between good and evil inside our heads, and the visual you provided of dragging yourself out of it. Almost like evil has our feet, pulling us back in. But overall, it was very well written!!
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