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Rated: 18+ | (3.0)

I read this for 5 seconds and stopped because you are speaking of "Mystery Mountain" in Valley View Ca. It is stolen and they are watching you there. Unincorporated. When I say "they" I am not speaking of ghosts or anyone that would ever actually harm you other than filming legally and trafficking you on the dark web. You guys allow it.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I read it. Your wife is awesome.
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Review of To Dear God  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
Who cares if everyone hates you? Everyone hates me and I am just fine. How you feel and think about others is what is important.
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Review of Signal Lost  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this poem about losing our modern comforts. When I grew up I had no cell phone we had to get directions and write them down and if we got lost we were f'd. Great job!
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Rated: E | (3.0)
I did not read this all the way through because it starts with this side and that side. We are a human race so any side that has anything to do with killing other humans and making them suffer is the wrong side. If you are a part of a group or a side you naturally have group bias. You will never get anywhere if everyone in a group is forced to think the same way. People are not projects. Until people stop trying to live off of other people we will get no where.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Oh really? You capture them? Be careful. They fear the lord.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Jesus Christ is dead and can not save you. Jesus can only save you if you follow his lead. God saves.
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Review of Drabble 18  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I hate cleaning.
What's the meaning?
If I had the money?
Hire housekeeping.
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Rated: E | (2.5)
Like the ones who responded at Jonestown? Oh. I was kidnapped from there and have been tortured my entire life because everyone is living off of my estate. Thanks to the veterans who have not received a payment somehow because of me. Love y'all!
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Review of Noche  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (3.0)
YUP.
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Rated: E | (2.0)
Oh okay.
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Review of Looking back  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
I wrote a poem like this "Motown". Great job!
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Review of Invisible  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)

You have a lot to offer!

You gave us this poem.

God lives inside you are never alone.

If you are living and breathing you have a purpose.

Not one single person living is worthless!

I have been in my room for 8 years alone.

I regain my faith and hope reading these poems.

Do not ever think you are worthless.

You made me smile today you are serving your purpose.
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Review of My class…  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (3.0)
That wasn't original being that you used the "Nightmare On Elm Street Template" but great attempt to make it seem like you can turn anything into a poem. I will rate 3 stars and include 20 gift points. Enjoy your day!
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Review of Phony People  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)

Loved your poem about phony people.

Never realized they were playing with my cerebral.

When you are honest and care you never expect it.

Convince you when you are young your intuition is wrong, neglect it.

They say you can do anything nothing is impossible!

Until you accomplish something huge find yourself in a situation that is hostile.

My advice after living this way 50 years;

Live your own life pay no attention to your peers.

Trust only in God lean not on your own inner standing.

God's ways are mysterious time wasted if your will you are planning.

Treat them how you would want to be treated regardless.

Eventually your karmic debt paid off render them harmless.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This short poem captures the essence of nature's beauty and the simple joys of life, all wrapped up in a few beautifully crafted lines. Great job!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This made me laugh and took me back to an exam I took in science class in high school. I failed on purpose. I decided that if life wasn't going to reward me I was not going to try anymore. I am happy you passed and you did a great job.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
An engaging exploration that invited me to reflect on the current political landscape with a fresh perspective. Great job!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Non disclosure agreements are not legally binding if it is covering up a crime like lying about radio station jobs or something.
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Review of Not worth it  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Please no harming?

Your poem is charming.

I had to review it my first thought was alarming.

Keep on sewing you love it I'm knowing.

The feminine strength from your spirit is showing.

It's your saga watch your drama.

Your source energy is Allah.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
What you say is true. We are in "Earth Prison" because of the earths weight on time space. It is our home not a real prison but energetically.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
You did a great job. I almost cried seriously.
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Review of Not being loved.  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your worth is not assigned by how much your father loves you. Your father is a man and human beings make lots of mistakes. Your dad loves you. Your worth comes from God and if God says you are worthy no man can convince you of different. The mind of man is the mouth of God. Be kind to yourself. Tell yourself you are worthy. As long as one person sees you as a success, you can not fail. Be that person for yourself. Hope it helps.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
What is your problem you can not repair it?

You actually think that people are carrots?

What do you do with those things might I ask?

Eating them in your corn beef hash?

You and Robert got mad because you both almost got beat up.

He left his niece $100 in cash this morning to clean up.

Do not know Patricia what you thought you would do?

You can't play a carrot with peoples minds you can't screw?

My assets and income you will not burn up.

Patricia he already grew and picked his turnip.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I am a 50 year old woman who is being financially held hostage in my roommates home. I have filed 4 cases, called the police several times, contacted the DA, the DOJ, the FBI, NO ONE WILL HELP ME. I promise by the time you reach my old age you will not have to go through this. Ok?
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