I love it. Your poem is so simple, yet so moving in all the same. Are you the one who is blind? For I can only perceive you having one sensational and phenomenal imagination, if you are not. Everything in this poem is everything I would expect being blind to be. Such magic, such a beautiful isolation. Again, I loved it.
Wow. This is utterly beautiful, in the very sense of how horridly heart breaking the girl's story is. I believe that you are a writer who moves people from their seats and onto better things. You are one of those few people who have the potential to change the world. I hope you take that one giant leap from safety and into the unknown, because only the God's could tell you how great you can truly be. It needs to be shown. Please, keep writing.
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