A very original piece of writing here. I enjoyed the read through, it was very powerful to me. You expressed yourself clearly. Nice presentation with a big font, looks good to me. I guess the title will stand forever in time. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I really liked the imagery I recieved from reading this poem through. It was well expressed and well written. I like short poems, they say so much more. There were no distractions that I noted. The title was kind of cute and added to the imagery. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I liked the tone and manner of this little write. If I am correct, it seemed like something had gone wrong with the love but was repaired in the end. I like acrostics but have never written one. The title was inviting to me. I enjoyed the read through. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I enjoyed this all-american themed poem. The imagery was good. I think you were talking about watching a game of american football from the arm chair. I hope you had snacks, beer and good company. Here in the UK we have the Super-bowl live on TV, like 4 am in the morning. A good piece of writing, be blessed and write on!
I am sorry for the loss. I hope the Holy Spirit works with you and guides. In heaven we will all meet again, every single one of us. This is not the end of life, this just a new journey. I was saddened by this item, I was emotional. God bless you all. Be blessed and write on!
You expressed and explained yourself very well here. I liked the title. Fact or fiction this was a brave thing to have gone through, letting someone go. Nice presentation, I liked the font you used too. To me there was a reality about this work, a realisitic manner, a truth. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I really liked the ending to this writing, it was rather powerful to me. A simple ending but so rich in emotions. I enjoyed the read through. Good clean flowing words and lines made the poem a joy to read through. There were no distractions that I noted. Good work, be blessed and write on!
A simple yet effeective little item to me. I enjoyed reading it through. You managed to say so much in just a few words and lines. I liked acrostics but have never written one. A lovely creative item from you here. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I enjoyed this poem here, it was great to read through. There was a lovely feeling of hope surrounding this writing, I found this work very uplifting and positive, a humbling feeling. Good rhymes and rhythm too. I liked the title too, it was inviting to me. Great writing, be blessed and write on!
I liked the positivity of this writing from you here. Homes can be our private place to just be ourselves. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines. Again you are a very upward, positive thinking person. It takes strength to be the way you are. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I enjoyed the read through of your poem. It was well presented with the picture. There was a poetic power over me as I read this through. The rhythm was good and made the reading easy to follow and understand. There were no distractions that I noted. Great work, be blessed and write on!
I enjoyed reading your work through. It was confident, positive and hopeful. I liked the flowing rhymes and rhythm, it worked well to me. There were no distractions that I noted. A well executed piece of writing. The title was fitting for the words and lines. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I think you used the prompt very intellegently and smart. The story unfolded into quite a good ride. I truly enjoyed the outcome. The fantasy was great and there was a lot of imagery surrounding the portal. You are an intellegent writer of short stories. Great work, be blessed and write on!
I related very well to what you had written out. It was as if you had stepped into my world and wrote about it. A short, effective piece of writing here. I enjoyed it very much. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines. Good expressive writing, be blessed and write on!
I am sorry for your loss of your husband. Although the writing was a sad theme, the rhymes and rhythm made the writing more acceptable, made the subject more acceptable. I liked the title too, it drew me in. Nice presentation on the page, big font used. However sad the poem, I still enjoyed reading it through. Good luck with your new book. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I smiled while reading this little item through. I smiled because sometimes I feel the need to do the same thing as your father. So I related well to the story you told. It was also refreshing to read something familiar to me. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I enjoyed reading your poem through. It was well written and well structured. A good philosophical tone and manner here. I was lightly inspired by each clever line. A thoughtful poem and was thought provoking to me. The title was simple and effective. Good work, be blessed and write on!
A good little read to me. The philosophy was great and rewarding. I am sure there are many poeple who do live this way. You managed to say so much in just a few words and lines. Less is more they sometimes say. Looks good centred on the page. Good work, be blessed and write on!
A well crafted poem from you here. You did a fine job. There was a very poetic feel to this writing, it might be the last line because it added a new dimension to the item. The mentioning of the moonlight was a nice touch. I enjoyed the read through. Good work as usual, be blessed and write on!
I enjoyed this poem from you here. It was very positive and uplifting for me. I liked the descriptive manner of the poem. There was good imagery from the words and lines. There were no distractions that I noted. You also managed to say a lot in just a few lines. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I thought this was a very positive little piece of work. I loved the title, it drew me in and was inviting to me. You manged to paint a nice picture with the theme of this writing. This was a refreshing change. The rhymes were good too. Nice work, be blessed and write on!
A well expressed song and lyrics from you. The theme was a little agressive but feelings always must be shared. There were some good lines in this writing. Love does not always go the way we want it to. Rekationships break down and we need the other to go away. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I liked the originality of this writing. It seemed to be caring and thoughtful to me. Not many people know of the suffering this condition can have on the person involved. The title was fitting for the words and lines. I liked the writing style used here. A thoughtful piece of work, be blessed and write on!
I thought your writing here was very clever indeed. Using lines from songs was a great idea and it worked very well. I recognised many of the lines. A very inventive way to write. You did a fine job here, very good work, be blessed and write on!
I really liked this item from you. I really liked the first stanza, I related very well to it. Nicely written and displayed on the page. The title was fitting for the writing. There were no faults in this writing from you. Good work, be blessed and write on!
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