This is an interesting idea that reads like a bedtime story or a parable. I want more specifics though. What was Aric’s talent? What exactly do the architects want? How specifically are they manipulating creativity? What exactly are the challenges in the tournament? How are they cheating in the tournament? I want to know the details not just what happened generally.
A great story. I think the writing was well done. Kept the story moving, giving just enough to let us know only what we needed and not break the pace. Dealing with a monster like that is interesting. And the ending had me a bit worried. That’s definitely a mark of good writing and pacing.
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