An unfortunate father is lamenting in this poem. He remained busy to earn money for his family. He didn't have sufficient money. So, that man didn't have sufficient time to spend with his family members and often missed out the important events. They felt bad but never complained.
His son took the important lesson from him and now become a responsible father.
He gives sufficient time to his family. There will be no scope for his regret or repenting.
It is an ode to a family crisis. A father has to do something wrong to earn money for his family. He neglected little blisses. Those hurt his family members.
His son is positive-minded. When he builds his family, he takes care not to repeat those sad mistakes. He is successfully maintaining this theory. A perfect person always takes lessons from the mistakes that are made by the previous generation. He also does so.
It is the best option to rebuild your future solidly from those blunders, without ignoring those. Every wise person follows that.
It is another different but inspirational creation by the poet. God always showers His love to us uninterruptedly to make our lives sacred and joyful. So, he sends some divine souls to our planet regular basis to teach us the importance of love.
Even Jesus came here to teach us the importance of love, patience and sacrifice.
Without personal experiences, one realizes that fact.
You realize it or not, that is a different thing. But God constantly showers his blessings. That is true.
It is an excellent poetry.
We are waiting for another good poem.
Write on!
This is another great poem by the poet. He always writes a poem for the betterment of our society. This poem is not an exception.
When a young couple meets one another, knowingly or unknowingly, they do something good for us. Maximum people don't understand their contributions. They think that their meeting is nothing but due to the thirst of youth's desire only.
But this is a wrong conception. There are ample possibilities to create the next generation. That may create something notable for our society and maybe the pioneer of a better and brighter future. Can it not be possible?
Think positive. Do positive. Everything will be alright. This message is sent through the poem.
It is a great creation. In the beginning, it looks like a traditional Japanese Haiku. All characteristics fulfilled. But, after reading the last line, the third line, It is not a Japanese Haiku, it is a Japanese Senryu. As it captured the image of our mind's state, but not the image of our mother nature.
Anyway, it is a great poetry. There is no doubt about it.
The readability is superb. I'll not forget it easily.
It is a classic creation.
Carry on your great performance.
These are the characteristics of a good poet. They are hungry to write better. So, they can't be satisfied. Our poet belongs to the same category. She knows pretty well how to make a poem interesting. She performs that within this poem beautifully.
I'm very happy to read it.
Continue your dream writing journey.
Have a wonderful literary summer.
It is a nice little poem that has an in-depth significance. Every person has certain goals to achieve. But the narrator fails to fulfil that. So the disappointment takes place.
Even the relationship that the narrator cherishes is carefully broken down suddenly. That may be the cause of the teller's frustration.
Anyhow, the teller becomes very much upset. That is nicely presented in a tiny space.
It is a great creation.
Keep writing.
Go ahead.
A lot of good wishes to you from my side.
Enjoy writing.
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