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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
It is a fact that most of the people, not all humans, are gentle, at least apparently. But a few people are too aggressive and rude. Due to their attitude, they can spoil any joyful moment.
It is one of the very burning issues. We will remain grateful to the blogger for raising this issue in her blog post.
Yeah, this type of rough behaviour may disturb our peaceful environment which we always want. This blog post. It will be helpful to re-think once again about this most unwanted situation.


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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Wow! It is another wonderful creation by the poet. This time, it is a semi-erotic office poem. This time, it is focusing on the knowledge and reality. It brings a loving but sweet intimacy.
Despite of a busy professional, she remained sharp and managed everything pretty well. She also knew that the recipe for success demanded something else as spices. She fulfilled those desires and became successful. Became successful in the end.
It is a true example of how to build a successful career. A brainy person can only do it and make a The The knowledge of focus and reality - a loving, sweet intimacy of focus and reality - a loving, sweet intimacy balance between career and personal life.


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for entry "July 11 2025" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
It is a nice blog post by the blogger. Yesterday was another cloudy day in Wisconsin. We, almost all people, know this season has this type of gloomy beauty.
The author tried to help her pet cat, normalize the relationship with her. He made eye-to-eye contact with Calypso.
It was an important day to her. She bought a printer for her scanning work. It proves that she is busy with her writing nowadays. She was working hard on her children's book as usual.
The blogger concluded this blog post with a heartfelt message for the wellness of WDC members.


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for entry "July 10 2025" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Due to the partly cloudy weather, the blogger couldn't go outside to get vitamin D from direct sunlight.
Her health isn't perfectly okay. An operation and some examinations indicate she is cured but not fully cured. That is not good news, I must pray to god for her earliest recovery.
We observe a very positive sign. Her motherhood awakened again to see her baby pet cat, Calypso.
She begins to take care of her like a real mother.
In the conclusion, the author made a prayer to God for the wellness of every WDC member.


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Review of Freedom in Words  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Who is the real author? The poet defines that tough question through his poem. Every narrative is built through some words. It should warm your hearts and inspire a demoralised soul to begin afresh.
Words should have the power to make us positive-minded, strong and patient. Like our seasons, the state of our natures also rolls cyclically. So that happy state may not stay forever. The situation will be changed. Dark days will come. But we should remember that the happy days will arrive again. That positive mindset can be set through an ideal author.
It is beautiful artistry.
Enjoy your writing.


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Review by Silvern Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
It is a tragic fictional poetry. I reckon that it is a true story. It is collected from the poet's real-life experiences. The monster and the clouds are symbolic characters. They are taken from real life.
There are so many monsters in our society who force the clouds to lead a slavish-like life to fulfil their self-desire. The helpless cry of the clouds, the weaker and dependent section, doesn't knock on the doors of the hearts of those, the stronger section. So, the situation remains unchanged. Tragedy never ends.
You show us efficiency a burning issue of today.
Thanks for highlighting this social curse.
Wish you a very happy journey in WDC.


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for entry "June 30 2025" Open in new Window.
Review by Silvern Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
To see the sunrise, yesterday, the blogger woke up very early. Due to the cloudy and rainy weather, there was an uncertainty. But, her luck favoured. She could see that sunrise.
Thankfully, the construction workers did their job with solar panels and now they were working in the garden. Several works remain to make it completely GREEN.
The blogger remained worried about a bill. It is a political matter. She didn't want to pass it from her view. She understood that the bill would hurt many people if it passed.


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Review by Silvern Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
It is an exciting action-oriented chapter. The slight hint of fantasy adds a special dimension to that story.
The main character of this is none other than Rory. His step-brother Barney didn't play any vital role, at least in this chapter. But, that man played a crucial role here. He became the deciding factor between Rory and the slaves.
That voice which saves the lives of Rory and his brother is the climax point of this chapter. After that, the story moves rapidly towards the end and gets a lovely shape. The application of fantasy plays his role here.
The story is based on the poorest class of society. They struggle to get food. That crisis makes them antisocial elements. It is a sad picture that has been drawn here very efficiently.
The first chapter creates interest for the next chapter.
Write on!


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Review by Silvern Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
The writer wrote this essay based on a popular horror movie, named "Monster in the House". It was a detailed criticism of a horror movie. That doesn't mean it was a classic movie. However, it created an opportunity to go through the depth and analyse all probable characteristics of an ideal horror movie.
He described those characteristics step-by-step. That is the main attraction of that essay. Monsters are an unavoidable part of the horror stories. There is no doubt about it. If their activities are applied properly, the movie easily becomes popular.


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Review of Gravity  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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A Poet's journey down a river is the birthplace of many interesting questions. To search these questions, the poet can gather some important knowledge.
A new question was raised by the poet's creative mind, What causes the river to run?
He began to search for that answer. This is the base of this lovely poem. The first line sets the tone of the poem:
"Where does this stream begin?"

There are a lot of possibilities. Which one is the correct? If gravitational force is the main cause, is it not the gift of God? If it is true, that force can't be considered as the love of God?
It is a wisely written poem. The flow is very smooth. The readability is awesome.
I observe another thing. We, all, know that the river is an undividable part of mother nature. He, the poet, describes the beauty of nature, the river, classically.
Overall, a beautiful creation.
Write on!


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Review of Writer's Block  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Writer's block generally comes in almost every author's life. In this period, they can't express self-thought in words. So that author feels an enormous pain that can't be expressed in a few words. A psychological barrier has been created. Luckily it doesn't last long. It comes suddenly, and it also disappears suddenly. The author regains self-flow of writing.
The poet paints these saddest moments beautifully. He adds his emotions in the way. We can understand that he observed those pathetic instances very closely.
Overall, it is a brilliant creation.
Write on!



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Review of Beyond The Veil  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Thousands of years ago, two did sinful deeds for the first time. So, they were driven out of paradise. But their eyes were covered by the veil of sin. So they didn't try to rectify themselves. Therefore sin works began to spread.
Pride and lust took place. They used the blood of lambs as for justification their sin. It is nothing but a reflection of their greediness.
God saw and realized that situation. So, HE sent the holiest person to rescue us from sins. He took our all sins from us to Him. We became free from all sins.
We didn't take lessons from His sacrifice. We started again to do sins. We couldn't follow the messages that he sent to us.
It is a great narrative inside the poem.
We remain grateful to the poet for this sacred poem.
Write on!


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Review of Pay back  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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It is a great action story that tells us how Jamie takes revenge on her husband Pete. After marriage, they spent two happy years together. After that, he began to torture Jamie. Gradually she lost everything. Her promising modelling career ended due to the brutality of Pete.
He also started blackmailing. Otherwise, he murdered her parents. So she had acted like an addicted person. So she, Jamie, had to go to a rehabilitation centre.
Jamie was wise. So she planned slowly but accurately how to destroy Pete. At last, she did it accurately. Jamie proved once again, that the crime has to pay back.
It is a wonderful story.
Write on!


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Review by Silvern Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The loud voice pressurizes the nerves, declaring the political intentions. If these policies serve something good for the nation, then these a most welcome. If these don't, this is high time to re-think your strategy again. The interest of the nation ought to priority first. That is the wisest thinking on our part. The poet inspires us to do the same.


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Review of Night Shift  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
The poet wrote this poem from his self-experiences. The pathetic experiences of the night shift have been drawn here. It looks a bit dramatic but realistic. If you want to work seriously, you should avoid sleeping. But it is very tough not to go to sleep. How much? It is almost impossible. With the times, it becomes tough to remain sleepless. Ultimately, except for a few times, you fail to remain sleepless. You become a failure.
It is the difficulties of the night shift. If somebody doesn't have that kind of night shift experience, he can't understand it.


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Review of Accusations  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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It is a beautiful poem that tells the truth of every life. If your peace is disturbed, you can't do anything fruitful. Gradually you will be inactive.
Is there no peaceful solution? Forgiveness is such a thing that is the best band-aid in our lives. If we adopt Forgiveness, we can begin a fresh life.
My favourite lines are:
"Forgiveness,
a needed band-aid for life,
and a new start."

It is a very positive style of thinking. I must appreciate this effort.


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Review of The Promise  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
It is a brilliant narrative-based poem. It is not only emotional but also an inspirational poem, too.
Two men due to some unavoidable circumstances, became separate. But they promised to meet again. They kept their promise until the circumstances weren't favourable. If we promise anything, we have to keep that. This is the most inspirational message that this poem carries. The re-grouping of the families again in the time of the nuclear family era makes the poem very special.
Thanks to the poet for this poem.


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Review of Yesterday  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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It is a great tribute to Linda Kiser from the poet. She is such a bright light who dedicated her life to encouraging others. The narrator was one of them who was too encouraged by her to perform better.
Linda was a God-gifted bright light who showed the people the way to get success. She died but her inspiration will show them light forever, that reckons the teller.
I also pray to God for this departed soul.
This beautiful poem touches our hearts.
It is a lovely poem.
A few person like Linda Kiser is needed our social development.













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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Though we, almost all people, know that material love is not permanent, we running behind that. This very common narrative is also in this poem.
The narrator loved a lady. It was a cordial relationship. Unfortunately, she died in a pathetic accident. Due to his emotion, the teller also reckoned that it would be impossible to forget her.
We think something but happens something else. In the narrator's life, love came again.
That doesn't mean that he forgot her, his first love. But his second love helped him to overcome that crisis period.
So, the emotional attachment is required to live a healthy and meaningful life.
It is wonderful poetry that has a deep meaning.
Continue your brilliant writing performance.
Write on!


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Review of Homecoming  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
After a hard and long nightshift, the narrator returned home. His pet cat greeted him from the door. It was very cordial. Being a pet cat, he began to take care of him. The teller enjoyed and felt comfort.
The poet beautifully describes the beauty of cat. It's poetic and wonderful.


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Review by Silvern Author IconMail Icon
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The poet always thinks about our social development. His experiences are the main weapon for this.
Through his experiences, he observed that people become more and more selfish these days. That is the main criterion for why we are not improving socially.
If we want to improve truly, we have to be united first. We need to think of collective improvement, not personal development. If we follow that, one day we will find total development as a nation.
So our selfish outlook s
should be changed if we want a total improvement as a team.


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It is truly a great poem. Though this poem is written for children especially, the poet shows us the recipe how building an ideal global environment.
The narrator wants to see all kinds of addiction-free world. This is the way to build a healthy society. One can take drugs through a doctor's prescription only.

Not only addiction, she concentrates on strict discipline, too. When the mood is off, suppose, someone is getting angry, that person will not be allowed to drive a car. Because this anger disturbs the concentration. So, the scope of accidents will be increased.
The poet invites everyone into this dreamland. I wish to be there.


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Review of Cockroach  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A little bug, most probably a cockroach, saw the narrator's family with his little eyes from the ceiling. This little snapshot creates a great panic.
We know that little bugs can't do any harm to us.
But, in reality, we, the stronger group of people, don't give the bug to take a chance of respite. So they beat the bug unnecessarily.
If we adopt violence in such a way, can we make a peaceful world? That shouldn't be the way. Impatient people can't build our globe as another Heaven. Kindness and intelligence can make a constructive future.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Our souls are suffering from several numbers of troubles, due to a several number of reasons. How can we get relief from those? This is the main question.
Through his experiences, the poet shows us the proper way. He advised us to surrender to God. It should be a total surrender to Him. He will take care of us. The journey of our lives will be smooth and trouble-free.
This is the best way to live a life.


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Review of CLEARLY ESTRANGED  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
No doubt, there was a relationship between between them. That was a bit romantic. But was there any love? The narrator was unsure. So, that relationship broke down as usual. There was no more possibility to regain that. At the end, we can see only darkness.
What a brilliant finish it is!
I hope that your creativity will entertain us in future, too.


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