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THE WORD SEARCH

*Reading* This word search brings attention to breast cancer.

*Smile* WHAT I LIKED

I loved the intent of the puzzle - to bring awareness to breast cancer.

*Star* ENGAGING

The word search had a lot of words you think of when you think of breast cancer - except breast cancer. This was a very positive search with an upbeat vibe. For me, it was an easy to moderate puzzle and I found a lot of words fairly quickly.

*Star*VARIETY

There were a lot of word choices associated with the topic. Well done.

*Star*MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.

*Star*PARTING THOUGHTS

Congratulations on being a Quill nominee in 2019. It was well earned. I liked that you put the quill nomination graphic in the opening, but I might also suggest using a graphic or giphy to augment the tone of your puzzle. A fun search that makes you pause and think about your own situation.

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THE WORD SEARCH

*Reading* A dirty little word search about spring in Canada.

*Smile* WHAT I LIKED

It reminded me of spring in New England. Blackflies. Good and bad memories. *Laugh*

*Star* ENGAGING

This was an easy to medium word search. I thought words like "buds" and "ants" would take me a while to find, but after a moderate glance, I found them pretty quick.

*Star*VARIETY

There's a nice of variety of words related to what spring is like in the more temperate climates.

*Star*MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.

*Star*PARTING THOUGHTS

I might suggest using a graphic or a giphy in the introduction to set the tone for the word search. A fun puzzle that captures the essence of the season well. I highly recommend spending some time with it.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Reading* THE POEM

A poem about shopping for the holidays.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I enjoyed the story the poem told. It made me chuckle.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is a poem with 5 line stanzas. The 2nd and 4th lines rythme in each stanza.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. The poem is easy to read and has a nice flow when read out loud.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "What he don't know and I don't tell, won't hurt him anyway." I love this description of the narrator's justification for her admission. It's told in a playful rythming way, as maybe a careless afterthought, but it really speaks to the heart of the narrator's feelings. And sometimes, what somebody doesn't know doesn't hurt them.


*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The opening engages the reader with a nice sing-song rythme and keeps them reading. The title fits the poem well. Nice comedic beats.

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THE POLL

*Reading* A poll about guilt and innocence based on Blackstone's Formulation.

*Smile* WHAT I LIKED

I liked the background information the introduction provided. It helped to make a more informed choice.

*Star* ENGAGING

I thought of the topic of the poll was very engaging considering that crime in California is pretty high.

*Star*VARIETY

There were 3 choices when it came to the answer, which I thought was appropriate.

*Star*MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.

*Star*PARTING THOUGHTS

A very good poll that on the face of it, seems like there's an easy choice, but when you pause to reflect, sometimes the answer isn't as easy as it appears and I had to really struggle to think of what I would select. As a 911 dispatcher, I can firmly atest to the fact that crime has skyrocketed in my state over the past 5 years and it's not going to get better anytime soon.

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THE CROSSWORD

*Reading* This is a food based crossword.

*Smile* WHAT I LIKED

I really liked that the answers were in the introduction. It made it easier for me to pair the answers with the clues.

*Star* ENGAGING

This was an easy to moderate crossword and I enjoyed pairing the answers with the clues.

*Star*VARIETY

There were a lot of good clues in the puzzle.

*Star*MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.

*Star*PARTING THOUGHTS

If anything maybe a graphic or a gighy in the introduction would further set the tone/mood. Maybe someone stirring a pot? I think it really helps to put the answers to the clues in the introduction because sometimes the clues aren't as easy as you think. Very entertaining! I highly recommend this crossword for a little fun.

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THE WORD SEARCH

*Reading* This is a Word Search with a Twilight theme.

*Smile* WHAT I LIKED

It's been a while since I watched Twilight, but all the names came back to me.

*Star* ENGAGING

This was an easy to moderate word search and I found a bunch of words right off the bat.

*Star*VARIETY

There were a lot of choices that fit the puzzle well. I didn't think any word was out of place.

*Star*MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.

*Star*PARTING THOUGHTS

Good use of a graphic and poem to set the tone and mood of the word search. I had a lot of fun doing this puzzle.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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THE WORD SEARCH

*Reading* This word search had a Game of Thrones theme.

*Smile* WHAT I LIKED

I enjoy Game of Thrones, so I liked this word search.

*Star* ENGAGING

The word search was easy to moderate for me. I felt like I was a dire wolf on the hunt for my next kill, ah, word.

*Star*VARIETY

There were a lot of choices from the series to find which made it fun.

*Star*MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.

*Star*PARTING THOUGHTS

There's a castle graphic in the Introduction which helps to set the tone/mood for the search. The search options focused on houses and names of the houses as well as animals that represent the houses. There were 15 choices and I was eager to hunt them down. A very entertaining puzzle!

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Reading* THE STORY

The narrator, a dispatcher, keeps getting in trouble when he gives out the name of the tow truck company.

*Smile*WHAT I LIKED

The tow truck with a sense a of humor.

*Star* POV NARRATION/TENSE

This is told in the 1st person by the narrator. Past tense is used in the story.

*Star*DIALOGUE

Narration drives the story, and dialogue is used in strategic places to make a point.

*Star*OPENING PARAGRAPH

The opening paragraph interested me enough to keep reading. It has a good, conversational tone of voice that connects well with readers.

*Star*CHARACTERS

I really appreciated the honesty of the narrator. He came across as a credible storyteller.


*Star*FLOW & PACING

As a reader, I was right in the moment with the narrator. Well done.

*Star*MECHANICS

I did not notice and spelling/punctuation mistakes. My only suggestion here, and it's minor and a matter of style - maybe increase the font a little to make it easier on the eyes.

*Star*PARTING THOUGHTS

The title fits the story well. The author uses a good economy of words to tell the story. Nice, light-hearted comedic beats.

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THE WORD SEARCH

*Reading* This is a word search with a spring theme, perfect for this time of year.

*Smile* WHAT I LIKED

This was a really fun search. There weren't a lot of words which made the words in the search stand out a little bit more. I would say this is an easy to moderate skill level.

*Star* ENGAGING

There's a nice opening graphic of flowers getting rained on which sets the mood and expectations for the word search.

*Star*VARIETY

There were a good amount of words used in the search, that capture the essence of spring.

*Star*MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.

*Star*PARTING THOUGHTS

I really enjoyed the word search. It was perfect for this time of year!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Reading* THE POEM
A poem as seen through a toddler's eyes.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I really enjoyed the voice of the tone. The poet caught the simplicity of life at an early age.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is poem with an AABBCCDD...etc rythme scheme.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. The poem is easy to read and has a nice rhythm when read out loud. If anything, I might suggest using WDC ML to increase the font and make it easy on the eyes to read.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "'Cause veggies are gross and make my insides queasy." This honest sentiment made me laugh. Most toddlers share this feeling that veggies are gross, but I think it's the raw honesty that resonates with readers. Who has felt this way and held back from being honest because you don't want to hurt someone's feelings. Ah, conundrum when we grow up!

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The opening engages the reader, putting them in the moment, and keeps them reading. The title fits the poem well. I enjoyed the touch of honesty and smiles this poem brought.


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*Reading* THE POEM

A poem that takes you on a journey through the seasons through lovers' eyes.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I liked the progression of the seasons and how love grew throughout.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is an english sonnet following the traditional ABAB CDCD EFEF GG rythme scheme.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. The poem is easy to read and has a nice flow when read out loud. Good use of WDC ML to make it easer on the eyes.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "In ample fields of fragrant grasses, Rainbow colors, nature's bedspread" What a rich description using a good economy of words to paint the picture. I can easily visual a field of grass with blooms, dandelions, poppies, a colorful flower array, and it sets a table of hope and anticipation.

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The opening draws the reader in with blooming flowers, and encourages them to keep to find out what happens next. The title fits the poem. Good beats and nice storytelling.

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*Reading* THE POEM

A poem that examines the Easter mystery.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

The poem is very succinct and to the point.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is a haiku that follows the 5/7/5 syllable pattern.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. The poem is easy to read.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "death is defeated" This really is the *Heart* of the story when it comes to Easter. It's showing a new way forward.

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The title is reflective of the poem, giving us a hint of what to expect. The topic matter gives the haiku depth. The revenant tone of the poem comes across which is no easy feat when words and syllables are limited. A great poem for the upcoming Easter season.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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THE CROSSWORD

*Reading* A crossword about the seasons

*Smile* WHAT I LIKED

I liked that the puzzle as a bit on the shorter side, but still challenging. *Bigsmile*

*Star* ENGAGING

The crossword covers an interesting topic matter and the answers were interesting.

*Star*VARIETY

There were a lot of questions that stirred the cobwebs.

*Star*MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.

*Star*PARTING THOUGHTS

I might suggest gussing up the introduction to set the mood/theme of the crossword using a graphic or a giphy and even giving the answers and the taker has to figure out which answer is the right one for the questions. A fun little puzzle.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
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THE CROSSWORD

*Reading* A crossword about Emily Dickinson and James Joyce.

*Smile* WHAT I LIKED

I liked that I could search the answers if I didn't know them. *Bigsmile*

*Star* ENGAGING

The crossword has a lot of easy questions if you know the subject matter. Still, it wasn't hard to look it up and I found I discovered stuff I didn't know.

*Star*VARIETY

There were a lot of questions that stirred the cobwebs.

*Star*MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.

*Star*PARTING THOUGHTS

An intriguing introduction and offers up the biggest similarity between Emily and James. An entertaining crossword that's just as entertaining as Emily & James.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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THE CROSSWORD

*Reading* A crossword about One Republic and Imagine Dragons.

*Smile* WHAT I LIKED

That I could use a search engine to find some of the answers! *BigSmile*

*Star* ENGAGING

I thought the crossword was very engaging and I wanted to find out the answers.

*Star*VARIETY

There were a lot of questions, and I think if you were familiar with these groups, you'd do very well.

*Star*MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.

*Star*PARTING THOUGHTS

I like that the basic facts to the groups were linked. I think it's very helpful in finding the answers if you didn't know the music or the groups very well. A fun crossword!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Reading* THE POEM

This is an acrostic poem that takes a look of all the "fun" or madness that March brings.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I liked how the poem started with a gentle reminder of the "lion/lamb" proverb.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is an acrostic poem that used "MADNESS OF MARCH." From Websters: a composition usually in verse in which sets of letters (such as the initial or final letters of the lines) taken in order form a word or phrase or a regular sequence of letters of the alphabet

The poem had a nice flow when read outloud.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML to highlight the beginning letters.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "Maybe luck will be with you," This line stuck out to me and made me think of St. Patrick's Day. St. Patrick's Day is a holiday that usually leaves a smile on one's face.


*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The opening invites the reader and dares them to read on to find out why March cannot make up it's mind. The poet uses a good economy of words to conjure up preciously the magic and madness March brings. Well done. Line count was listed in accordance with the rules. Good luck in the Bard's Hall Contest!

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*Reading* THE POEM

This is an acrostic poem with an "Alice in Wonderland" theme.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I really enjoyed the word play in the poem. The poem is imaginative and very creative.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is an acrostic poem that used "MADNESS OF MARCH." From Websters: a composition usually in verse in which sets of letters (such as the initial or final letters of the lines) taken in order form a word or phrase or a regular sequence of letters of the alphabet

The poem was full of eclectic visuals.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML to highlight the beginning letters.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "Madly morphing magic mushrooms collide," I found this to be a very powerful visual. It's a great example of alleration using the "M" sound. I had a visual of Alice, lost in wonderland - a dreamland - that takes unexpected turns and it evokes an astonishment, apprehension, and dumbfoundry all at once.


*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The opening baits you in with that hare's mocking smile and takes you on a wild ride. The title is the acrostic. A creative take on what it's like to be Alice in Wonderland. Line count was listed in accordance with the rules. Good luck in the Bard's Hall Contest!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Reading* THE POEM

This is an acrostic poem with a March madness basketball theme.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I enjoyed the imaginative take of the poem. I also liked that it was something a little different and I liked how it incorporated "sports" into the theme.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is an acrostic poem that used "MADNESS OF MARCH." From Websters: a composition usually in verse in which sets of letters (such as the initial or final letters of the lines) taken in order form a word or phrase or a regular sequence of letters of the alphabet

There's an AA rythme that's scattered throughout the poem. The poem has a good flow when read outloud.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "Aficionados raise in waves," The whole poem is a great visual of being in the stands at a basketball game and feeling the excitement as you watch the game. Here, I picture the crowd raising a cheer after a successful score. It captures a "feel-good" vibe.


*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

My suggestion might to be add a couple other genres - maybe "entertainment," "contest," or "action/adventure." The opening sets the tone for the poem with its simple description, and the reader wants to find out what will happen during the game. The title is a good riff off the "madness of march" acrostic prompt. A fun poem that puts the reader in the heat of the moment. Good luck in the Bard's Hall Contest!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Reading* THE POEM

This is an acrostic poem with a "spring/new year" theme.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I learned something new with this poem "Naw-Ruz." I learned that Iranian people celebrate the new year with the spring equinox, but also, so do other Asian cultures. I love learning (even in my 50's) so I appreciated the opportunity this poem afforded.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is an acrostic poem that used "MADNESS OF MARCH." From Websters: a composition usually in verse in which sets of letters (such as the initial or final letters of the lines) taken in order form a word or phrase or a regular sequence of letters of the alphabet

The lines are concise and to the point.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML to increase the font.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "Clouds gaslighting our hope for daffodils," This is so March and the opening days of spring, as the weather is fickle and can't decide if it wants to be rainy and windy or mild and warm. Here, this description tells us, that spring's start isn't quite ready for the daffodils. The line evokes patience still even when patience is worn thin.


*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The opening sets the tone with simply "mud season." What is mud season? Dirty? Slick? Bogs one down? Mud season is madness. The title is original and fits the poem well. A very direct poem using a good economy of words to paint a dreary season during the madness of march. Line count was listed in accordance with the rules. Good luck in the Bard's Hall Contest!

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Reading* THE POEM

This is an acrostic poem with a "spring" theme.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

The poet uses a good economy of words to paint the progression of spring.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is an acrostic poem that used "MADNESS OF MARCH." From Websters: a composition usually in verse in which sets of letters (such as the initial or final letters of the lines) taken in order form a word or phrase or a regular sequence of letters of the alphabet

I liked the ABAB rythme scheme, which is rare with an acrostic, and the poem had a nice flow when read outloud.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML to highlight the beginning letters and increase the font.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "On Columbine and Queen Anne's lace," This line is simple, talking about flowers, but these flowers give away to spring and spring evokes smiles after a long, tiring winter.


*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The opening sets the tone for the poem with the melting snow and let's the reader anticipate the opening hints of spring. The title is the acrostic prompt. A fun poem that unveils springs as it comes. Good luck in the Bard's Hall Contest!

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Rated: E | (4.5)
*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE POEM

This is an acrostic poem with a "spring" theme.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I enjoyed how the poem uncovered those little hints that spring was in the air!

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is an acrostic poem that used "MADNESS OF MARCH." From Websters: a composition usually in verse in which sets of letters (such as the initial or final letters of the lines) taken in order form a word or phrase or a regular sequence of letters of the alphabet

I enjoyed the AABB rythme scheme, which is rare with an acrostic, and the poem had a nice flow when read outloud.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML to highlight the beginning letters.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: For home and house spring cleaning," This line uses a good economy of words to describe the activity of spring. It's time to welcome the new and throw out the winter doldrums. It's a line that speaks to purposeful activity.


*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The opening sets the tone for the poem with it's implied anxious activity and lures the reader in to find out what's next. The title fits the poem and theme. A busy, motivated poem now that spring is here! Line count was listed in accordance with the rules. Good luck in the Bard's Hall Contest!

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Review of ROOTS & WINGS  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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*Reading* THE BLOG

Roots and Wings is a food focused blog with several stick to your rib recipes.

*Smile*WHAT I LIKED

I liked the variety of recipes and little anecdotes the author shares. Total bummer about the hike for the Marsala. Marsala should not be that hard to find.

*Star* ENGAGING

The blog offers the reader a lot of yummy recipes and I think the pictures help to sell the selections!

*Star*VARIETY

There was a nice variety of recipes to include waffles, fruit pop bombs and meatball marsala. I would recommend bookmarking this blog and checking it out often just to see what recipes might be up next.

*Star*EXPRESSIVE

The blog was easy to read. The pictures really help sell the recipes.

*Star*MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes, but then when it comes to reviewing blogs, I'm a bit more liberal.

*Star*PARTING THOUGHTS

The introduction sets up the intention and tone of the blog so the reader knows what to expect, but I might also suggest using a graphic in the introduction to set the "food" mood for your blog. What a yummy visit! Bon Appetite! *Smile*

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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THE CNOTES

*Reading* A nice mix of cnotes with a little bit of everything.

*Smile* WHAT I LIKED

I liked the mix. There's a little bit of everything in this collection.

*Star* ENGAGING

The Cnotes offers a lot of choices. There are 10 Cnotes. Some are centered on caring and kindness, there's one about valentine's day and one about celebrating your WDC birthday.

*Star*AFFORDABLE

The notes are very affordable from 350-500 GP's.

*Star*MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.

*Star*PARTING THOUGHTS

The introduction sets a nice tone/mood for the collection. It's a very sweet collection and at the price point, I would recommend these notes. This collection is worth a peek if you're thinking about sending a cnote.

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Review of Bee~Worded  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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THE WORD SEARCH

*Reading* This is an "Everything about Bees" word search. Perfect for a lil bee like me!

*Smile* WHAT I LIKED

There were a lot of things related to bees in this word search. I didn't know there were that many words!

*Star* ENGAGING

The word search offers a lot of choices. Personally some sounded gross but hey, if you think about it, bees are kinda gross. Any whoo, I found myself engaged and I would put this search at a "medium" to do. Words with "W", "Q" and "Z" are easier to find that you think!

*Star*MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.

*Star*PARTING THOUGHTS

I might suggest using a graphic or a giphy in the introduction to set the tone for the word search, if doable. Maybe a cute lil bee like me? *Smile* I thought the word search was a lot of fun.

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Review of summertime blues  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE POEM

A poem about what gives one the summertime blues.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

The poem is very succinct and to the point, yet very visual using a good economy of words.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is free form poem with no apparent rythme scheme.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. The poem is easy to read. Good use of WDC ML

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "Death valley temperatures," The line is short and direct, yet it invokes a lot of feeling. When one reads "death valley temperatures," hot comes to mind, and not just slight hot - hot to the point one is uncomfortable, sweating, with dry air in the lungs and not enough water.


*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The opening is barely enough to lure the reader in, but it is reflective of the nature of the poem - when it's hot, you don't want to do nothing but cool off. The title hints at the the emotional resonance of the poem. Direct expression, yet very visual.

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