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THE WORD SEARCH
This is a word search about the words we find in beloved Christmas/Holiday songs.
WHAT I LIKED
There was a nice selection of words that evoked some of my favorite Christmas songs.
ENGAGING
The puzzle is very engaging and it was fun to look for the words.
VARIETY
There were a 25 words in the puzzle and all the words used stayed authentic to the theme.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Nice use of WDC ML to spruce up the introduction.
PARTING THOUGHTS
The introduction did a nice job establishing the theme of the puzzle. You can't help but hear holiday songs in your head as you do the puzzle. Nicely done.
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THE POEM
The poem captured the ambience of the season and wove in elements of budding romance effortlessly.
WHAT I LIKED
I felt like I was a leaf on a branch getting ready to fall, watching two people enjoy the nature walk.
STRUCTURE
This is a free form poem with no rythme scheme.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML to increase the font making the presentation visually appealing.
DESCRIPTIONS
I liked: "With trembling hands, I caught love notes, dancing on the evening breeze," I really enjoyed this word play here. I have a sense of two young people walking hand and hand, smiling as they enjoy the breeze and the swirling notes of autumn around them. I felt a tad guilty peeking in on them.
PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS
The opening invites the reader for a barefoot walk and keeps them reading. The title is reflective of the poem. Excellent word play. I enjoyed the totality of the moment of the poem.
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THE POEM
A charming poem about a couple that works well together.
WHAT I LIKED
I enjoyed the beat of the poem. It captured that lightheartedness of the couple.
STRUCTURE
This is a free form with a mixed rhyming pattern. Good use of WDC ML to increase the font and add color. Makes the poem easier to read on WDC.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.
DESCRIPTIONS
I liked: "We stand in the middle, beneath the same skies." It's an easy picture, two people standing together, but the use of the middle implies they see each other as equals, taking on the same adventure of life together. There's a lot of warmhearted overtones here.
PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS
The opening invites the reader down to the coast and keeps them reading as the reader wants to find out what will happen next. The title is reflective of the poem. I enjoyed the lighthearted characterization of the poem.
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THE POEM
Note: I found this poem on the Read and Review feature.
A moment in time captured on a bleak day can still host a heart full of love.
WHAT I LIKED
I liked the message - even with storms, love can surge between gloomy clouds.
STRUCTURE
This is a poem with 3 quatrains and an AABB rythme scheme.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.
DESCRIPTIONS
I liked: Certainly crisp like the earth's major storms - the wind persists challenged by dark eerie forms," For me, this was like taking the 40,000 foot view of life - envisioning a storm, that once over still lingers. Life is a lot of like that. Everyday life can be storm and it can linger which can be a bit sad if you think about it. Then the next line brings hope - "The life of love surges between gloomy clouds"
PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS
The opening intrigues the reader and keeps them reading. The title is a good fit for the poem. A poignant read.
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THE WORD SEARCH
A word search about Krampus who likes to chase naughty children at Christmas time.
WHAT I LIKED
It was a fun puzzle which reminded me not to be naughty at Christmas time.
ENGAGING
I was very engaged and didn't have any difficulty finding the words.
VARIETY
There were a lot of good word choices that reflected the theme of the word search.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.
PARTING THOUGHTS
The introduction had a trailer link to Krampus the movie and set the tone/mood of the word search well. Overall, a fun search for this time of year for the spook in your house!
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My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.
THE POEM
A poem about what happens when the Tetris doesn't make it.
WHAT I LIKED
I loved the vivid action which was portrayed using a good economy of words.
STRUCTURE
This is a tetractys poem with a link that explains the type. I hadn't seen it before so I learned something new.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.
DESCRIPTIONS
I liked: "Quicker, more frenetic they start to fall." I read this line and felt rushed, danger, oh no! Yikes...! Sigh... Those blocks are falling and I failed to complete my mission. Well done, capturing the moment of excitement and disaster.
PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS
The opening paints a vivid of picture which invites the reader in. The title is a nice play on words reflecting the theme of the poem. I enjoyed learning about the form and how one can capture emotions using just the right words.
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THE POEM
An intriguing poem with a haunting invitation.
WHAT I LIKED
I loved the imagery the poem evoked. I could picture, a curious little girl, debating in my mind if I should take up the invitation.
STRUCTURE
This is a kyrielle sonnet with structure explained as a footnote in the poem. This is very helpful, especially to newer community members or newer poets.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.
DESCRIPTIONS
I liked: Welcome to wondrous wonderland, Come deeper down the rabbit hole," I enjoyed the alliteration here using the "W" sound. When I read this I thought of place that's full of imagination. I guess the question is whose imagine. The invitation to go deeper rabbit hole plays the reader's curiosity well. Lots of good emotion here - #1 curiosity #2 daring #3 apprehension.
PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS
The opening invites the reader in with a warm welcome. The title is an appropriate fit for the poem. Nice beats, strong alliteration, spot on kyrielle - all solid techniques that make this poem shine.
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THE POEM
Reflections of a solider in a war zone.
WHAT I LIKED
I liked the beat of the poem. The reflections were honest and sincere.
STRUCTURE
This is a poem with 6 couplets and each couplet rythmed.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.
DESCRIPTIONS
I liked: "Tell my Sister not to be upset, Her Brother will not rise after this sunset" Initially, this rings rather folksy, as if the brother is trying to soften the blow. In that regard, the phrase hits emotionally. There will be sadness and angst regardless and the reader can be sad for the sister who won't see her brother again.
PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS
The opening beat and sentiment draws the reader in, though the poem is a bit of sad read. The title reflects the mood of the poem. The poem touches the heartstrings with it's somber topic.
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THE POEM
A poem that expresses caution about the unknown.
WHAT I LIKED
There's nice spiritual undertones in the poem that resonates with me as a reader.
STRUCTURE
This is a free poem with no apparent rythme scheme.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.
DESCRIPTIONS
I liked: "The Unknown is my helmsman, My deliverance!" There's a lot packed in this line. First, the unusual capitalization of Unknown. Taken in context with the rest of the poem, I personally interpreted the Divine, and if I do, then the rest of the line, rings poignant and true. There's a lot of reverence in the line, if read quickly, might be overlooked.
PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS
The opening evokes curiosity as the reader sails on a raft in the river of life. This curiosity keeps the reader invested. The title is reflective of the theme contained in the poem. A poignant poem that resonates with the soul.
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THE POEM
The poem shared a realistic look at war and how it can affect the psyche.
WHAT I LIKED
I liked how the poem told a story. There's a nice progression and growth that's outlined.
STRUCTURE
This is poem is reflective of an ode with a consistent AA rythme scheme.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.
DESCRIPTIONS
I liked: "For the strength of his soul that the world couldn’t drown." There's a lot of emotional depth in this description. This soul has grown, faced the adversary and stayed true to his believe. There's pride and emotional strength here.
The descriptions in this poem are incredibly vivid and incredibly poignant. I might suggest submitting this poem to the Veterans Group for the monthly challenge.
PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS
The opening starts by setting the theme and mood of the poem in such a way it piques the reader's interest. The title is a nice fit for the poem. I enjoyed watching how the emotional strength of character led to hope.
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THE POEM
The poem was about finding Joy in a world that is emotionally complex.
WHAT I LIKED
I liked how the poem was written by two people with two very distinctive styles of writing. Each stanza almost built on the other.
STRUCTURE
This is a free form poem with no apparent rythme scheme.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML and italics to set off the different poets.
DESCRIPTIONS
I liked: "I open my hands, my heart, my mind, my soul
Letting love's light through at long last," I found this to be an emotionally raw statement, but it's one that people who have been through a certain amount of pain can identify with. Well done tapping into poignant and endearing emotions.
PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS
The opening has a nice, easy invitation to read which draws the reader in. The title is an intriguing fit for the poem and once read, the reader understands why the title was selected. I enjoyed the progression of the poem and heartfelt emotional sentiments.
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THE POEM
A poem about the power of love.
WHAT I LIKED
The example given really highlighted the theme of the poem which is "Simple Love."
STRUCTURE
This is free verse poem that starts and end with a couplet and the middle three stanzas are 4 lines each.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML.
DESCRIPTIONS
I liked: "I asked for pitter-patter raindrops.
You’ve given me a cyclone," This a vivid description that describes how love can start off with small expectations and turn into a BIG result.
PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS
The opening starts off with an easy metaphor involving chewing gum and love - it doesn't let go. The reader would have to agree. The title is a good, reflective fit for the poem. An honest and easy reflection on love.
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THE POEM
A poem about a flower that longs to be pollinated.
WHAT I LIKED
I loved the story the poem told. It had it's ups and down, but did a great job portraying the circle of life and it left the reader feeling uplifted.
STRUCTURE
This is free verse poem with 40 lines.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.
DESCRIPTIONS
I liked: "Grief will heal in time, Everyone was kind," This is a simple statement, but it packs an emotional punch and reminds us just how the circle of life touches our lives.
PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS
The opening starts off with the reader hoping the flower will find happiness and that keeps the reader reading. The title is a good, reflective fit for the poem. Poignant and full of heart.
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THE CROSSWORD
This crossword had a Biblical theme which is perfect for this time of year.
WHAT I LIKED
I liked that a good portion of the answers I didn't have to search for. When you know some/most of the answers it makes solving the crossword more fun.
ENGAGING
The crossword was very engaging. Some of the characters came right back to me, and some I did have to look up. In that regard, the crossword also proved educational and there's nothing better than fun learning. I think you retain it better.
VARIETY
There were a good variety of clues.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.
PARTING THOUGHTS
The introduction was spot on and did a good job setting the theme of the crossword. The puzzle is a nice way to learn a little more about the Bible and it's stories and it's a nice compliment for this time of year. Well done!
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My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.
THE STORY
A foreign exchange student writes home about her disastrous attempts at cooking.
WHAT I LIKED
I loved the comical elements of the story - cooking cultural foods were never easy, but Skylar is just not a whiz in the kitchen.
POV NARRATION/TENSE
Skylar's story is told in the form of a letter using the first person. Well done.
OPENING PARAGRAPH
The opening paragraph intrigues the reader as Skylar implies she has found a new, more exotic playground in Moldova.
CHARACTERS
Skylar is a good natured person but cooking is not her forte.
FLOW & PACING
The letter starts off with Skylar going to a restaurant and then grows as she starts cooking.
MECHANICS
I did not notice and spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML.
PARTING THOUGHTS
The title has a comical fit to the story. The word count was listed in accordance with the rules. Good luck in the Bard's Hall Contest. Skylar's adventures in the kitchen will make Mom, Dad, and the reader crack up!
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THE STORY
A women who is getting more forgetful, shares something painful with her daughter.
WHAT I LIKED
The story taps into sad and heartbreaking emotions in a respectful way.
POV NARRATION/TENSE
This is told in the 1st person by Marcie. Past tense is used in the story.
DIALOGUE
The dialogue accents the narration.
OPENING PARAGRAPH
The opening paragraph paints the setting and then the next paragraph dives right into the crux of the story.
CHARACTERS
Marcie is an "everyday" character, a daughter, a mother we can all identify with. It's when her world is turned a bit upside down does she evaluate her life and choices.
FLOW & PACING
The opening set up the sets the scene, the middle sets up a frantic search and the ending leaves the reader to contemplate the what-if right along with Marcie.
MECHANICS
I did not notice and spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML.
PARTING THOUGHTS
The title fits the story. The story does a good addressing the prompt - a what-if life scenario we'll never know the answer to. It's a good story that resonates with a life lesson - consider your life choices. You might be surprised with the answer when you do. Overall, a story that tugs on the heartstrings.
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My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.
THE POEM
I found this poem using the "Read and Review" feature.
The poem about a time when life was simpler.
WHAT I LIKED
The poet did a good job capturing an old-timey mood and feel.
STRUCTURE
This is a poem with 2 quatrains and an ABAB rythme scheme.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML.
DESCRIPTIONS
I liked: "In her garden, Sweet William flowers," This is a simple visual - where the reader is just taking in a visual of Grandma's flower garden, but flowers have a way of making a person smile and invoking feel good vibes.
PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS
The opening invites the reader in and teases them to find out what it was like "Long ago." The poem is easy and simple, but there's a lot of heartfelt family sentiment behind it. The poignant emotions the poem stirs leaves the reader in a good place. A feel good read!
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Steph Bee's Honey Pit (E) DEC 2025 - hang out with theBees & enjoy the Flowers. NEW challenge for DEC 2025 is OUT! #1474097 by SantaBee
My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.
THE STORY
I found this story using the "Read and Review" feature. A spooky tale about a visitor looking for the jewels.
WHAT I LIKED
The author did a good job building a spooky mood and heightening suspense with short, concise sentences.
POV NARRATION/TENSE
This is told in the first person by an unnamed narrator. Past tense is used in the story.
OPENING PARAGRAPH
The opening paragraph puts the reader in the height of action. The tension in the paragraph was thick and as a reader, I wanted to find out what was going to happen next.
CHARACTERS
Ther person hiding in the shadows was the main character and she had a secret.
FLOW & PACING
The opening began with good suspense, the middle grew the tension and end answered questions and asked new ones. Well done.
MECHANICS
I did not notice and spelling/punctuation mistakes.
PARTING THOUGHTS
The title fits the story, but is almost a bit generic. Overall, a suspenseful read.
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Steph Bee's Honey Pit (E) DEC 2025 - hang out with theBees & enjoy the Flowers. NEW challenge for DEC 2025 is OUT! #1474097 by SantaBee
My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.
THE POEM
The poem paints a wonderful day of basking in a meadow and enjoying mother nature.
WHAT I LIKED
While not explicitly mentioned, I felt an undercurrent of spiritually behind the visuals, a relaxation, a meditation, a calmness that behind in the spirit brings.
STRUCTURE
This is a free form poem with no apparent rythme scheme.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML.
DESCRIPTIONS
I liked: "Today, the earth beneath her feet, rooted her in inner stillness," It's a strong visual, but there's a lot of quiet emotion, a calmness of being rooted (or grounded) and confident in that groundedness.
PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS
The opening invites the reader with a nice easy visual of a female enjoying the meadow around her. The title is very reflective of what to expect from the poem. The poet uses a good economy of words to paint vivid pictures and strike emotional beats. Well done.
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Steph Bee's Honey Pit (E) DEC 2025 - hang out with theBees & enjoy the Flowers. NEW challenge for DEC 2025 is OUT! #1474097 by SantaBee
My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.
THE POEM
A usually uplifting holiday is now full of sadness.
WHAT I LIKED
There's a lot of raw emotion in this poem that tugs on the reader's heartstrings.
STRUCTURE
This is a free form poem with several near rythms which amps up the emotion.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML.
DESCRIPTIONS
I liked: "But until that time arrives, we will just have to endure and do our best to survive.," These are the lines that are full of emotion. Poignant, raw, full of heartache and yet possess that hint of endurance and determination to cope with unimaginable loss. Well done.
PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS
The opening strikes sad notes with precision, luring the reader in. The title hints at the reverence of the content. The poem connects on many levels. Excellent expression.
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Steph Bee's Honey Pit (E) DEC 2025 - hang out with theBees & enjoy the Flowers. NEW challenge for DEC 2025 is OUT! #1474097 by SantaBee
My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.
THE WORD SEARCH
A creative word search based on the song by Andy Williams, "It's the Most Wonderful Time of the Year."
WHAT I LIKED
I loved the inspiration behind the puzzle. I could hear the song playing in my head as I looked for the words. It was a great way to put someone in the Christmas mood.
ENGAGING
The word search was a lot of fun. I liked the link to the song on YouTube. Great Vibes!
VARIETY
There were a lot of good phrases from the song used in the word search. The variety was fresh!
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.
PARTING THOUGHTS
Great introduction to set the mood and theme of the word search. This is a great puzzle that puts the good vibes in Christmas.
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THE WORD SEARCH
This is a word search based on the holiday of Hanukkah.
WHAT I LIKED
I thought the words used were perfect for the puzzle.
ENGAGING
The word search was very engaging and I was curious how some words fit into the theme. In that regard, the puzzle is also educational and inspires curiosity.
VARIETY
There were a lot of word choices that fit the theme of the puzzle. Well done.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.
PARTING THOUGHTS
The introduction gave a little background about Hanukkah and helped to set the theme, mood, and tone. Well done. A fun puzzle that inspires one to explore what the holiday is all about.
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My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.
This is a word search about the words we find in beloved Christmas/Holiday songs. 
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