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Review of Thaw  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love it.
I liked the repetition of 'sharp and bitter' and also the last stanza is truely articulate and flows so well.
This has actually inspired me... I'm off to write.
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Review of just because  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Aww this is a really cute, simple poem!
hehe, I think the simpleness of it is a good assest in some ways.


One thing was that I wasn't too sure with the repetition of the line "I love you, just because". Maybe some more substance in the middle if the poem.

I do think it works well in the first and last stanzas though. = D
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