Is it the best thing I read so far? Yes by quite a margin (although I only joined an hour or so ago so haven't read too much yet). Why wouldn't I give it 5 stars then ? Well because I think it could have even better, way better. It did amazing in showing how this simple idea turned to a global phenomenon, the thing that took that one star away were first the 300% rise in stocks since launch, although it seems big it's quite the opposite actually, I think it should have been at least 1000% since at the start although the story didn't go into detail on it was certainly just a start up in a batch of thousands upon thousands, also I would have lovel to see the side of people opposed to it, not necessarly through other carachters but maybe even the MC starts thinking about now AI knows every single thing about people's lives or how people just become robots in human flesh. But like I said before the best thing I read yet on here, keep it up!!
Wow... really liked this monologue, I felt like it was talking to me. The feeling of underachieving because of a laziness that we let overtake us got me fully immersed in this monologue. That's honestly the best thing I read on this website so far and my first 5 star and absolutly deserved one!!
I feel like the strong point of this poem is its message and it got it acroos pretty well although I prefere subtility most of the times, but it felt more like a dialogue that was spread in multiple short lines to make it a poem. A good poem that could have been even better if a little more subtle and maybe tried including some rhymes. Keep it up!!
That was a beautiful poem, I liked the rhymes and the way the poem was set up with the 3 three liners before the 2 five liners, only thing is I don't know if it was meant to be like that but some of the sentences were wrong for example the line "we might never meant to be" I was enjoying the poem before that line threw me off a little but pretty good poem overall. I devated between 3.5 and 4 stars but decided to go with 4 stars, keep it up!!
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