Wow, this is impactful. We do see the sadness, the loneliness, and the happiness in others people eyes, if only we spot to look, but we don't for the fear of perhaps understanding. To act instead of relate in some vague action is perhaps lost to our digital age. I really enjoyed this, see no errors, and can't help feel a little sad reading this great easy touching poem. Thank you.
Back in time Random review takes me, and I can say this poem was good to read, Thoughts linger, a time of reflection and faith, and those questions we wonder in the early night hours. Not overly long, with lengthy prose, that raise questions of deep internal psychology. Well edited, Tim Chiu Thanks!
Happy Holidays, random review brought me, and I must say what a delightful sober poem. I could see the stone gargoyle, the seriousness of it, the mystery, the imagery is great and even a little giggle at the end with Walter. Very well done, Beholden Here's a full five for my smile. Thank you so much!
Thoughts of a bad relationship shined at me reading this, like a eighties love song, where enough time has passed that blind love is more sighted. Some interesting imagery, not overly descriptive. Very well written, no suggestions and I see no errors. Again, Thanks!
A very well written poem, full of mystic imagery. I could hear the shallow water and the hum of washed soft peddlers, or rocks. I have no suggestions, Dreamlike in feelings and expressions. Ta Da, Thanks.
Hppy Holidays, Moarzjasac Random review and here I am. This is well written, though perhaps capitalizing each beginning stanza not just the first, too me for a nice ride, and I could see all the thoughts that visited in the stairway. Its funny how we think of things often at the weirdest times. We can be with so many and feel alone, we can be alone and feel crowded. Thank you for sharing, I enjoyed the simply imagery of it.
Very well done, not overcrowded in massive, thought changing imagery. I would think starting each stanza with the same though would drag it down but nope, its great. Nice how you dingle the read along with each morning and a new set of questions as you daydream in relaxion. Nice, I enjoyed, spot on.
Smiles and Scares my friend. This the season indeed. This is great some very big, I'd say bombastic. Fun, easy, and another Christmastime activity to do. No suggestions, just a fun word search. Thanks!
Poems written by provided prompts are always different as they use prompt in their way and this is not exception. Somewhat like rap, questioning if things done are right, what is right and wrong, and all the mixed feelings in such questioning. No errors, well done, I enjoyed and honestly quite neat poetry. Thanks sweetie.
Thanks for sharing the very well thought of self reflections you put to some wonderful prose. Powerful and provoking, I can say I enjoyed, though not the band highlighted. Some big words, and some bigger imagery from gunshots to peddle squabbles, to pathways, truly a lot in expressed. Patiently edited, no suggestions. Again, Thanks!
A neat free verse poem, has all the feelings, but described as a bee and a flower so well done. A few space typos. Full of some sad and fuzzy imagery. Slow paced, two stanza makes ya slow down and enjoy the ride of the love, the grief and the dead to be together in another time again. Creative. Thanks!
What a delightful open ended poem.I could see Andy, the surprise, the worry, the happiness on his face realizing his dog could talk, I can only imagine. I wonder what Suzie's drink was. Questions, imagery just very well done. Not a poem to get polyphonic lost in, just smile at the light hearted subject matter, and wonder what I would do if Milo spoke to me. Wonderous, and greatly edited, no suggestions.Thanks!
Morning, SantaBee Random review time and Chucky poem is a great subject this early in my day. Creative, but not fearful only factual with some small drama. Edited, and well done. Chunky and Andy, classic eighties, Thanks!
Me, Myself and I, we have all thought about it, and you put imagery to all of those with this very well written prose.Enjoyed, great presentation, timely editing, all in all just a good look into all that Me, Myself and I. Thanks
Such a festive feeling poem, and the added picture is a nice touch for imagery, although the poem is clear in its own. Jolly Santa, all the mere of Christmas, and a nice find for me. Good editing, well done, enjoyable. Thank you.
Gosh emotional indeed, makes me wonder what was happening way back in 2003 when this was written. Relatable, as I'm sure many stared at their mirror and had similar thoughts. Well done, well edited, Thanks.
Wow, what a creative poetry form, and to use the cramp so well is really something.I can't say too much just this is very good. I see no errors, flows effortless, spot on. Thanks for sharing.
Older poem, random review, but a very nice find.
Good afternoon, Dawn Embers
A child is so very precious, and that never goes away. We are all as such, somber feeling, well written, not tangled in deep complex imagery and pros. Simpl, easy to read, and warms any parents heart.
Morning, random review time and your it. Whiskerfacebythefireplace
Reflections and well written, kind of mythical feel to this small poem, and not oversaturated with emotional prose. Easy to read, not crazy impactful, does what it needs to do, Thanks.
Random review link suggested and older write but still good. I enjoyed the simple imagery, almost hopeful tone. A neat way of looking at status, and expressing as more historic. Author's note improved my understanding. Thanks.
Expressing your faith and all that makes it glorifies, is always satisfying. Well written, straight forward and simply clear imagery. Well done, and Thank you for sharing.
Yes do be proud. I think we are all happy with our love ones. Respect the wonders of everyone. A nice poem, nice imagery. No suggestions for change. Thanks! I enjoyed.
Small easy to read poem, Thanks! Heartbreak, gender differences, a touch of drama, but not overflowing in deep imagery, just told as it is. No suggestions, if only a little longer but that's my opinion. Again Thanks and good day.
Random review brought me and I can say I would not made it on my own, and I enjoyed this light hearts, not bogged down in overexpressed imagery. All we can do is one day at a time, never more, or never less. Events change us, but the next day comes. Well written, a simple spelling error, and kind feeling, almost somber feeling. Thanks
Always fun to stop in, and to find a small poetry form. Simple, but expressive. To see Venus it is on the horizon, and it it associated with love, it's a shame its far from it. No suggestions, and enjoy an easy read. Thanks.
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