Your short story, The Journey, is magnificent! Very clear to understand and nice poetic language. I was not expecting that to happen to Samantha! But I guess that's what happens when one complains! I especially loved the ending of the story. I have got to ask though: was it an hallucination? Great job!
Today, I signed up for a WdC account. Not knowing where to even begin, I decided to read a fellow writer's work and examine my "competition". Let me just say, what a SPECTACULAR work of writing to read as a first impression! Your language was extremely poetic and the story was an overall beautiful read despite its gloomy undertone! Have you considered publishing? I have only read this one piece of work and I would definitely buy more of your work! Well done my friend!
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