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Review by Lily Kingsten Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is catching, and interesting. I would like to find out more. At the same time, maybe there could be a little more description about the fear, what he/she felt at the sight loss, and the cold that overcame them. Maybe add a few sounds and such as well. I want to find out what happens next. I'm really curious!
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