Nicely written details and a good word flow. Cutting cords. Laugh. Shedding light. Shining bright. Seal and heal every wound. Good call. A nice style and good play on words with lovely reflections. Looks like you spent time with this. A good flair and a good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. In and Out of sight. Cool peace. Night falling deep. Let me dance in and out of the shadow. A trace of a rhyme pattern. A nice style and good play on words. Easy to follow and this holds the reader's interest. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Your devotion to God and Jesus shows. This has words of wisdom and is enlightening, inspiring and uplifting. A good style and words to live by. Creative and colorful as well as well defined. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
I take it this is about Jesus dying on the cross. Some sad reflections a good style and this holds the reader's interest. Nicely written details and a good word flow. Inspiring and uplifting. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. Enlightening. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and sounds like these guys are looking foward to a Halloween party but question it being commercialism. Interesting.
Food for thought. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. Looks like you spent time with this. A good scenario and nice presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Tonight. Nights cam be sad when you miss someone who left. Some good reflections and some sad ones. Shooting stars. Sitting alone. The wind. Thinking of days gone by. Creative and colorful. A neat rhyme pattern wraps this up nicely. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Some good details and nice romantic sentiments and overtures. Looks like you spent time with this. Easy to follow and this has a good flair. Well defined. Creative and colorful. Looks like some sadness here but there is a ray of hope in this. A good presentation. Always:Megan
Nicely written details and I guess trees could have nightmares. Just a scenario. Creative and colorful. Nighttime. Haunting. Generations. Well chosen words and a good play on words. This holds the reader's interest. Lovely reflections. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details when we are kids, we never want to go to bed early. We want to stay up and play. Creative and colorful and this holds the reader's interest. A neat rhyme pattern blends the words together, puts them in motion sums this up with a good flair. Cute. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow
Constellations. They are interesting. Nightly carnivals. A good style with lovely reflections. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
A short passage here that says a lot. Fizzy crackle. I take it this a fireplace hearth. Being woken up by the sound if the fire. Some good descriptions and nice reflections. Creative and colorful. Waking up to Hershey Bars and Coke. Mine is Diet Pepsi. Well defined. Some good words. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Some good details and I wish I would have written myself letters when I was younger. A good style and we never know how our future will turn put. Creative and colorful. Well chosen words and well defined. A good presentation. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and Iz would be fun. Good descriptions and neat imagery but we missing The Wizard. The Scarecrow is probably in charge. A good style and neat fantasy elements. Looks like you spent time with this. Bricks of gold. Very nice. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Interesting Sci Fi elements. Nicely written details and life would be interesting on another planet. This holds the reader's interest. Good characters and sounds like super women are appreciated here. Another galaxy. A nice style and looks like you spent time with this. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and this is uplifting and inspiring. This is also enlightening. Teachable. We learn new things everyday and this applies to God and Jesus. I do hope we are all teachable. Words of wisdom. Food for thought. Well defined and a good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and sounds like Ella is going to have an adventure. Easy to follow. Well rounded characters and a modern version of Cinderella. In real life, I bet there are Cinderella stories. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. Looks like you spent time with this. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and all students shown to be monitors secretly keeping law and order. Good one. Kids dancing on the desk, blowing bubbles. A helpful grandmother who was a teacher and principal. A good style with well rounded characters. This holds the reader's interest. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and some nice warm sentiments. Friendships break up and they hurt. We do cherish the good aspects of our relationships and do our best. Looks like you spent time with this. Some good reflections and heartwarming. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Loved. It is nice to be loved. You worry that someone you love will be alright when you are gone. Some good reflections and nice sentiments and overtures. A happy style and easy to follow with well chosen words. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
A letter in a Bible. The person wrote it but didn't want his mother to know. Some good reflections and some not so good. We never know what kind of letters or items we will find in a Bible. My mother died recently and I found interesting things in her
Bible. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. A good ending. The person turning into a bull in a field after reading the letter and a bright light appears. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and two ladies opening a flower shop. A caterpillar by the tea. I thought of Alice in Wonderland. Cute. This draws the reader in. The flower pots are arranged and they wait for the first customer. A black cat comes waltzing in. Cute and bizarre with good characters. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and sometimes a student meets someone when she is ready to Starr a class and she finds the person interesting. She meets other students and goes to class. She finds the man she was talking to is her professor. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. A good presentation and neat scenario. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Accusations. We need to be careful when we accuse people. Sometimes, we know when people are guilty. A good style. Unworthy words and deeds. This happens. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a cow convention. The cows have a tale to tell. Looks like you spent time with this. Cows make for good characters. I was in tune with this. A good style. This is cheery and cute. I would rather eat chicken then cows. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and this woman has had quite a life with someone she loved in Paris. They were separated and a jacket was the link to get them back together. A good style with strong characters. Looks like you spent time with this. A good plot line. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
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