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Rated: 18+ | (1.0)
Seriously? The owner of this story should probably remove this chapter. (chapter id #2179109)There's no reason why it is the "end", and it makes no sense. The chapter before this also gave this choice, "they scamper out of their hidey hole", and gave no indication of who "they" were and where and why they were hiding.
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