Title: Should be in title style, and in title style, articles and prepositions are not capitalized, unless they occur at the first or last word of the title. I don't really see any reason to have the word spam in all caps there either.
First stanza: Good meter and rhyme.
Second stanza: Nice cultural 'Monty Python' reference for we who were around in the 70s and 80s; The word mouths does not take an apostrophe in the plural.
Third stanza: Good meter and rhyme. I see you're building to a denouement....
Fourth stanza: Heh! Oh--so THAT'S where Spam comes from... :).
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