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Review of Crimson  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Thank you for the warm happy feeling you gave to me through your poetic story. My spirit is having an uplifting experience. I was able to see two people raising at the sky and talking. I saw also the clash of ideas. Rgw war paper was when I read "you win".

Thank you for writing and sharing your poem with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed reading about your blog and learning a bit about you be cause people are interesting, full of knowledge, and especially writers have special insights about life and adventure. This work was like being on an adventure full of excitement and with a great invitation to explore together. You clearly explained enough about your writing journey to have me interested in getting to know you better.

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Review of Queen to Queen  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
While reading your story the Borg entered my mind. I remember that Star Trek movie reasonably well. I pictured the ants working and sharing inform action via the queens. There were no distractions and I kept reading to find out what happened. I also thought it would be nice for people to work together like the ants do and therefore we could accomplish much.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
The eeriness of this story seems to be something hanging over humanitys heads in these times. I felt like a huge blade of technology was hanging over our future waiting for us to continue. The characters, phone and people are realistic, the scenes believable, and the emotions generated from your words gave me the feeling of read and the struggle of hope for the future. It was as if I had been there watching history unfold.

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Review of The Fire Engine  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed your story because it shows bow people can be gen serous even with their most precious possessions. I saw in my mind Jimmy handing the firetruck to Danny. I hope many people read your wonderful story.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about generosity with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Mind control can work both ways which is why I have an issue with some of the newer technology. You could should you choose to do so build a longer story to show both sides of technology. I was able to visualize the scene, actions, and get to know the characters. I found nothing to distract me from reading and enjoying your story. It was as if I flew with the squadron in training.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members about future technologies and war by thought.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
The saying that blood is thicker than water is very true because when you love a family member it is for life. I understand what you went through because my parents and sister used alcohol. While reading your words I felt like I was there with you. I could feel the emotions you shared with me and the longing for your grandfather to stop drinking. I hope you find peace in the future. You did the best you could with your experience in life to cope and be close to your grandfather.

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Review of Swinging Fairy  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
This is a very nice story about the wonderful and very nice airy swinging with the animals inn her lap. I envisioned this colorful scene. It felt like I was swinging with the fairy while reading your words.

I did have difficulty reading your poetic story because of the font color. I like the color and it works well with your story.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
The line that resonated the most with me was about embracing life and death because the breath of life is precious ious and death is moving onto a better life depending on a persons choices during life on earth. Your poetry statements are clear, easy to read, and concise. I was able to visualize the actions.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I saw you reading as you devoured every word wanting more books to read. I can relate because I enjoy reading and have a sense of adventure. Your words conveyed the excitement and energy you felt while exploring new realms through the imaginations of authors.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art and love of reading with me and WdC members.


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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Your story poem reached out but didn't touch me, kinda like what you described. It felt like emotions were moving but not exactly living. The rhythm is good and I found reading your words easy and informative. It was as if we were sitting at a table and you were sharing this experience with me, yet we were separate because the table divided us much like your words caused the feelings as I read your words to be a bit mixed and not evident.

I hope you are doing well and feeling much better.

Thank you for writing and sharing your experience with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
While reading your story in poetry form I smelled the coffee brewing, My mouth watered, I imagined getting a cup and the items to make this beverage uniquely mine, and felt alert. Coffee doesn't seem to make me more awake, but I enjoy it's aroma and taste.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about this tasty beverage with me and WdC members.


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
As I read your emotionally charged words I felt rage roaring up from deep inside. I'm not sure about the musical part of these lyrics but I imagine it is of a strong beat. In my mind I visualized someone with fists and teeth clenched, ready to yell to the farthest planet and back.

Thank you for writing and sharing your musical lyrics with me and WdC members.


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Review of The Moon in Nine  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I get from this poetic story that it is best to consider an action before creating a regret. If we act in ways that do not foster regrets we will be much better off, yet being human we make mistakes. Life is what we make it and you showed with your word art that we have choices and can decide how our lives will be.

Thank you for writing and sharing your moon life story with me and WdC members,


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I'm glad the poetic story ended on a happy note. The rhythm for me is bouncy and happy according to the way I read your party story.

The part about the missing bikini on the run for me would read more smoothly if the word [it] was removed. Adding a comma after bib would work very well for me as I read this.

I was able to picture the characters, get to know them, see the scene in my mind, and felt like I was a part of your story.

Thank you for writing and sharing your humorous story with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you very much for the laughter while reading your funny poem. I've heard that laughter is good medicine. I enjoyed the bouncy and happy rhythm of you chemical poetry story. It is uplifting to my spirit.

Thank you for writing and sharing your funny poem story with me and WdC members.


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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I like the way you presented this topic because it is conversational as if you were talking to me. I agree with you about nothing but sexual scenes without humanity and real life involved is simply pornography in words. You explained your opinion clearly.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me about this topic in a direct and conversational way and your word art with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
What stood out o me the most is "hope" because without hope there would be no reason to try. As horrible s the situations were there is still room for hope which you used as a nice ending to your poetic story oabout the recent history.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poem of history and hope with me and WdC members.


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Review of School Blues  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed reading the reassuring statements in your poetic story. It's nice when children are given heart-felt encouragement and knowledge that the parent will be with them and help them. Yer scene and characters are easy to imagine and the characters realistic and easy to get to know.

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Many people think winning a game is so important and it matter but as you showed family is more important, relationships are more important, and fellowship is more important. Music is uplifting and helpful too which is demonstrated in your story. I got to know the characters, see the scene and action, and enjoy a nicely written story.

Thank you for writing and sharing your family focused word art with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
My view of this poetic story is of light grey going darker with every change until it is almost black. This reminder me of the process of life, but a life with many challenges and one that had little if any joy. The ending was very dark like death. I also saw this as a visual of winter as changes occurred. Another possible view is of the changes i n society and changes in the way people see things. I also considered someone who is struggling with mental and spiritual, and possible physical challenges.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poetic word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Run  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I enjoyed getting to know these characters in your prison escape story. If you decide, you could make a novel or series from this beginning by adding history elements and then going forward, plus adding information about the characters so readers can get to know them better.

Thank you for writing and sharing your prison break word art story with me and WdC members.


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Review of Kitty Wishes  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Put a stamp on it and mail the kitty to me. I could feel the longing and hope through your kitty words. I wanted to reach out and pet that kitty then being it home with me. I visualized many kittys being adopted and hope they will have wonderful homes.

Thank you for writing and sharing your kitty word art with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I feel lighter and my heart and spirit are uplifter after reading your poem. I enjoyed the happy rhythm of your words. Guided gently and with excitement for an adventure each day I felt your enthusiasm.

Thank you for writing and sharing your happy poem with me and WdC members.


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Curiosity can be worse but sometimes the urge is very, very strong as you vividly showed me through your dialogue. The mystery about what will happen next loomed large and kept me reading your story. I enjoyed the way you presented the scene because I got to visualize the action and to know the characters. The big surprise was Dad handcuffed to the pull-up bar. I figured he was busy but didn't see that coming.

Thank you for writing and sharing your family story with me and WdC members.

Other genres that might help readers find your story: drama, mystery, experience, parenting.


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