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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your poetic story shows me someone longing to utter words yet they do not usher forth into the physical realm. The spirit longs for relationship and holds to the hope for kindling of a wonderful outcome. I can see hands reaching out to receive goodness. I’m glad hope still lives.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poetic word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Fake kindness  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
You ask important questions about human behavior, which caused me to reflect on my behavior. I'm drawn to be helpful whenever possible. Most of the time, I hope for help in return but do not expect it. I can understand why you see things in this way because people are known by their actions or inactions, which often are disappointing. Your article is clearly written and can be understood. It felt like you were writing from your heart.

Thank you for writing and sharing your thoughts, feelings, and word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of On Spring  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I saw and smelled the spring time beginning as I read your poem. Your description is nicely detailed and it gave me a wonderful imaginative experience. The best part is the rebirth you detailed and showed your respect for nature.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poetic word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Hero and Missy  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Easily I saw in my imagine the two kitties together hunting and sharing the catch. I like cats and could relate to their lifestyle. The scene and plot are believable. The kitties realistic.

Thank you for writing and sharing your kitty story with me and WdC members.


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Review of Fortune Teller  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Trending of your story makes laugh and needed the laugh. Me. I could picture the old lady and her flowers in front of Hector.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about hector dealing with a determined sales person with me and WdC members.


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Review of Mt. Washington  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
My first thought after reading your poem story is that the mind can go any where and do anything. In my mind I saw the car climbing the mountain successfully. This brought an image of a person climbing a mountain successfully.

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Review of Bookends  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I like time saved because it is like life saved and everything saved. It seems like being in the dark in the beginning of your poetic story then finding light and a wonderful life.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
The rhythm of your poem story fit the plot nicely. The words complemented each other and showed the story events. I hope you keep writing and showing your story to many readers.

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Review of What to Submit  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
My computer died so this review comes with challenges. From what I can tell this page and the information is nicely presented. It is clearly written and easy to understand. I hope to have my computer access soon

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Review of The Mission  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A fleet of fly ships is something I had not considered. Disguised as flies it's no wonder why the ships are obliterated whenever possible by whatever inhabits the black holes. Your idea is believable, the plot works for me, and Now you have me wondering who is flying the exploring space ships, why, and why they decided to disguise the ships to seem like flies.

Thank you for writing and sharing your adventurous word art of fly ships with me and WdC members.


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Review of World Leaders  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
You wrote a very thought provoking poem. My spirit is uplifted because I found and read your poem. It shows that following the soul spirit while in line with Gods guidance you are on top, but following lies and darkness brings you down and under crushing you spiritually and bringing defeat in the long run.

Yjaml you for writing and sharing your uplifting word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Asylum  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
While reading your poem story I felt like I was immersed in a battle kinda like a tug-of-war. The feeling of struggling to be rid of this battle also entered as I was reading and this added more fighting between the stanzas. It became a war between wanting to recover normalcy and the issues wanting to be in charge. I hope this battle becomes more peaceful for you very soon.

Thank you for writing and sharing your challenging situation word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
I agree with you that fighting should be a very last resort and that humanity should be kind and helpful toward each other. Your poetry is clear and easy to read and understand.

Thank you for writing your poetic story and sharing your word art about fighting with me and WdC members.


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Review of The Backyard  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I enjoyed the story of you watching the activities, and changes in nature because I like nature and enjoy animals also. I clearly visualized the scene. I could imagine the warmth of the fire. I can also imagine you cozy and enjoying watching nature through your window.

Thank you for writing and sharing your winter nature word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of My Choices  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I understand the necessity of me taking care of me so I then cam help other people which you pointed out in your story same for you taking care of you in order to help other people. Our decisions and actions influence outcomes which is true and easy to understand for me. Your words clearly state your thoughts about life.

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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
I feel you have a writing adventure and enjoy the journey because your poem according to the rhythm and the way I read it is bouncy and happy even though there are challenges. I like your can do frame of mind even when the words come slowly.

Thank you for writing and sharing your encouraging poem with me and WdC members.


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Review of Footprints  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The ingenuity of the children pulling off the party surprise is a good plot. It's realistic because most children do not consider the need to clean. The best part of your story is the friendships developed because of this get together event.

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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
I think adding I's is important. If it's difficult shine light into subjecting issues is aiming high.

You should add more I's there aren't enough, LOL. The I words kept me interested in reading because I wanted to know if you could write this story with words containing I's, and you succeeded. The words made an interesting sound effect the way they were placed into your story.

Thank you for writing and sharing your I word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Entanglement  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This is a workplace love for someone who is the bossy an employee that shows conflict and a dilemma. I can imagine the tug of war between working to quell the love while the love is working to break free and join the boss in a relationship.

Thank you for writing and sharing your work place love relationship for art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Be Yourself  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
You share sound advice to readers that is positive and uplifting. Many people need your encouraging words so they have permission to give themselves permission to be themselves.

Thank you for writing and sharing your positive and wonderful advice word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of OFFENDING ANGELS!  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
I pictured the woman and passers by seeing her tears and hearing her pleas for help. This is a very very sad scene with emotions of feeling helpless because I could not help this woman. I hope somehow I will be able to help many people for the length of my stay on Earth. Uplifting to my spirit is the scene where the angel wings beat and he considers that angels come and at will. Finding your poetic story brightened my day because of the angels.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with demand WdC members.


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Review of Forever and Ever  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
You describe God's love always available and waiting for humans to accept His gift, but also showed the plight of humans when His invitation is not accepted because of the antagonist who brings forth heartache, turmoil, and separation from God. You mention God's blessings which made me feel like God gave me a big hug. Your poem is a peaceful, and inviting poetry story for readers to have a loving relationship with God.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poem of hope and grace with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
This spooky and eerie story gave me images in my imagination of two people who looked normal at a glance but who were dark inside and were wrapped in darkness like a cloud floating and following them. Images of the dead perhaps inside the cloud who haunted them at every opportunity. Your plot is plausible, the characters, scene, and actions believable, and the story has nothing to distract me and take me out of the story away from reading.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like the encouraging words that strengthen and show belief in people especially the grandson. I can imagine if Grandpa were able he would have shared these words in person with his grandson and the family.

Thank you for writing and sharing your grandpa words word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Displaced  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I could feel the let down of the workers when they were told about another move. It is clear to me they are not happy campers and are going to make it known in no uncertain way. The plot, scenes, characters, and delivery of the story are believable because you wrote realistically these events.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about the office move with me and WdC members.


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