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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
I remember 9/11 and your poem brought back the images vividly. I'm not sure why the punctuation is not the usual, but it reminds of the punctuation I see when AI tried to write what I dictate.

Thank you for writing and sharing your 9/11 poem with me and WdC members.


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Review of For Yana  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Breaking up is hard to do, but sometimes it is necessary. These words came to me as I read your story in poem form. I can imagine the heart ache even through time has passed because of the memories, but the bright side is having another chance.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Witnessing the storm through your words and seeing the s make an appearance gave me insight into your world. I can imagine you watching people and things and then creating a story or poem. The rhythm of your poem gently guided me from beginning to end.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
The palm trees visually got my imagination going. I saw the coconuts high above. The fish swimming about in my mind are relaxing. Your poem is relaxing.

Palm trees growing coconut or palm trees that grow coconut would read better for me.

Thank you for writing and sharing your relaxing word art with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your sense of adventure shows well in this poetic tale. I went along and enjoyed seeing and hearing the storm and watching the leaves swimming in the puddles. Imagining the tall ships and battles between monsters was an adventure. The ending ines reminded me of people who focus on business and making money while they miss the wonders of life and nature.

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Review of Nothing haunts me  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thie story in poem form seems to be a battle within a storm. The tug of war between emptiness on a page and words refusing to gather together so a story or something written can be created. I can imagine trying to write and the words gone, but for me I either want to write or don't want to write. Facing a blank page has not been an issue. I can only imagine the challenge.

Thank you for writing and sharing your writers block word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of November...  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed reading this story because of the vivid view I had through your words. I got to know the character and explore her world. It was as if I joined her on the rock and watched evening make an appearance.

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Review of Can I Even Plan?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This story reminds me of anniversaries and valentines when a spouse forgets, but in this case I think it was more avoiding making the arrangements. Not wanting to do this can make a person forget. I was in your story and there was nothing to take me out of it, no distractions. Oh, one word caused me to take a sencon look. The word [ordered] should be which would make the sentence flow better.

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Review of Baby Teeth  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a rare and unique relationship. Your words showed me two people who have a lot in common, yet there is a glitch that perhaps pushes between them. The heart of one is excited to get to know the other. I wonder what the others reactions are. Your story is clear and concise. I visualized the event and heard the speech within the thoughts.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about relationship with me and WdC members.


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Review of Justice #2  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I'm with you b ecause we only need the ten commandments to guide us but some demand we have more rules and regulations. I understand about justice and agree it should be the same for everyone. You wrote a poem story that shows there is a better way to live and I hope people read it and recognize the truth of the matter.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Twist and Turn  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
You show with your words and plot that there is no hope, but I believe as long as a person has breath and life there is hope. I hope people see the truth and things change for the better. I saw the visitation, the horrible end as I reach the end of your story which made me feel sad but cling on to hope.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Sometimes people tend to hard on themselves, but the hope for loving oneself is strong and can be developed. The other love you mentioned in your poetic story is love for a special someone and this is in marriage or a relationship. The ability to let go of a relationship takes courage when clinging is what a person wants to do. I'm glad I found your item through read and review.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about love with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I'm glad you made a point of being honest because what you write is mostly true, but, there are people who genuinely want to know. How are you, in truth really, how are you, I want to know. I could feel the struggle as you made an effort to be fine while something was making you not fine. I hope whatever not fine becomes fine, but if you ever need to write/talk/vent, let me know. Give it a try and we'll see what we can do.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about not being fine with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
You introduced me to Hana who at first seemed to have a bright future, but sadly at the end she seems in dire straights. Your words showed the scenes clearly, the dialogue is realistic and natural, and the nun seems like a typical nun. I was not distracted by any issues and actually felt as if I were in the scenes.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about Hana with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
This dark and eerie story is intriguing which kept me reading. The characters and scenes are realistic and I was able to imagine the surrounding and actions. I wonder if things are going to get worse before they get better.

Thank tay fir writing this dark yet interesting story and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Fragile Skin  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A okra for seeing the skin els me that the brokenness is what was viewed and not the person. It felt like one person was kinda looking through the other person and that person wanted to be recognized for who they are.

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Review of i'm backkk  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Genres are important because they help potential readers find your word art. Some genres to consider are: biographical, experience, and inspirational.

Skating is a nice and fun activity. I'm glad you have the opportunity to enjoy this activity. Your blog post is easy to understand and also help people to get to know you.

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Review of Tell No One  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
You have a spooky poetic story that kept me reading because of the haunting words tell no one{/b]. Secrets can be nothing to be concerned about, but then, they could be something opposite of good depending on the point of view, so hopefully these secrets are ok. If felt eerie to me while reading your story.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about secrets with me and WdC members.


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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
My first thought is this could be a bad dream, but there is more. Change in many ways can be chaotic and seem unscripted, but usually there is some reasonable organization. Depending on the point of view things can be wonderful or horrible.

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
You certainly have an interesting story because you have told it from your heart without sugar coating anything. Your personality shines through out your words. I visualized the scenes imagining sometimes a different outcome for you. Being the character you are, I suspect changes are not allowed, lol, so I'll stick to imagining the scenes as you wrote them.

Thank you for writing and sharing your unique word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of RCAF  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I soared with your words as I read the story of brave flyers in bombers and other craft through the ravages of war to fight for this country and freedom. In my imagination I faced the challenges of flying to important targets. I could see and hear the booms and chatter as whizzing by bullets clanged against metal so low in order to drop the payload. I could feel the excitement and fear as brave military members did their duty for us and country. Thank you to everyone for giving what they had and even giving their lives to keep us free.

Thank you for writing and sharing your dedication word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Soldiers' Lives  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
While reading your poetic story I visualized the scenes which you showed clearly. I could hear the battle and feel the concussions as your words showed the horrors. The service of so many I saw and felt as if they were together and yet at times alone. The home coming after release I hope is sweet but know there are images, sounds, and other haunts that come alone uninvited. In the future I hope humanity learns how to disagree without war. I hope we work together rather than fight each other. I hope military personal no longer need to be away from family, friends, and country.

Thank you for writing this wonderful poem and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Invisible Me  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Ms.Aether you have words, with these words you communicate very well who you are, how you feel, and what you hope for. You have given the gift of yourself to me and anyone who reads these precious words that show your humanity and could help others do the same. You give hope because you write from your heart. You encourage because you show in words even when things seem at their worst, there is hope. Your hope shines because you took the time, you thought, you decided, and then you wrote you into the words that can and will help people to help themselves.

Thank you for writing and sharing your helpful word art with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Ph my! This story is fantastic because it was like being in the family or at least being inside this family story. The picture of bear is marvelous and I fell as if this dog has a huge heart and plenty of love and respect. I chuckled at the way you wrote the ending. While reading the part about the house being void of any noise and scarring about I felt the emptiness in your words. I hope all is well and everyone is thriving.

Thank you for writing and sharing your heartfelt family story with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your words express time and viewing accurately the world in which we live, but it brought to my mind the world in our minds also. Writers, artists, and people who have similar mental abilities mixed with craft art have unique versions of the world. This idea came to me while reading your poem story.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members about time and views of the world.


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